Sniktch, I just read your story and have to say that is a great story in the Lovecraftian vein. Being a Lovecraft fan myself I have to say that story is very well-done. You really got the knack for suggesting something and letting your mind fill in the rest like Lovecraft does so often. Is there anywhere else you have stories posted online? I be interesting in reading more if you have any posted somewhere.
As for ideas I have to say a great idea struck me while reading your story about why the villian(s) are invading people's dreams. I'm completely changing the villian structure based on this idea. I won't say much, but it gave me an idea that takes the plot from one madman's ploy to a much more epic evil plot.
Thanks for the post I really enjoyed it.