"Roleplayed" - My new Short Film! Weeeee!


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Mark said:
It would be somewhat different than it currently is, directorially, and might lose some of its "artsy" feel but the premise and payoff could still be had in that shorter time and I think you could maintain the same tension. The debate, among viewers, over which is the better version would rage on and on. Naturally, you'll want to cut as little of Erin Bodine as possible since she is currently positioned to be the next iconic hot gamer girl. (No offense to Mr Phelan.) Anyway, Boffo. ;)

naw the more artsy the better. art is made by artists after all.
 


Watched the film.

It was really good. I would have had the dm at the end start to cry a bit more and put some real anguish into it. Something that really show us more about him and his inner sadness and suddenly make us feel sorry for him rather then hate him. I wanted to feel real tears.

I felt that the satire at the end good have been drummed up a bit more, but i'm not really sure how.

the lighting was really good on the figures (really good), but something was odd about how the rest of the room was lit. I liked the color enhancements and softening in post. It makes it stand out from other internet videos.

the video was kind of blocky when running it full screen. It like the codec wasen't upscaling properly. Not sure of thats a problem on my end or something went wrong when encoding the video. It looked really nice in the window though.
 

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