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Rule of Darkness -Book II Chapter 3 Last Update 19 June 2008- Book I Completed

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Here is some feedback as requested :)

The story is excellent ! Setting is refreshingly different, history of the world detailed, writing descriptive and evocative.

Don't get discouraged by lack of user comments, the story is too young to have attracted too many. Try having link to it in your signature and post comments in some established story hours.

My recomendation for reading are:
Blackdirges Metamorphosis and Assassin's Tale,
Lazybones' Shackled city and Doomed bastards: dungeon of graves
JollyDoc's Shackled city, Age of Worms and Savage Tide

Some are conveniently sinister so you might maybe even incorporate some ideas from them. Altough I don't think you need such, if this few chapters are any indicators.

Keep writing, all things come to those who wait. Such as faithfull readers ;)
 

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Neurotic said:
Here is some feedback as requested :)

The story is excellent ! Setting is refreshingly different, history of the world detailed, writing descriptive and evocative.

Thanks. I am trying to not be too derivative and to do something original.

My recomendation for reading are:
Blackdirges Metamorphosis and Assassin's Tale,

Excellent, aren't they? I am up to date on both, though I have nly posted in Metamorphosis

Neurotic said:
Lazybones' Shackled city and Doomed bastards: dungeon of graves
Once again Excellent - I am up to date on "Doomed bastards", but giving Shackled City a miss since I'm about to start playing it.

Neurotic said:
JollyDoc's Shackled city, Age of Worms and Savage Tide

I'll check it out- its the only one of the three authors I haven't read anything of.

Neurotic said:
Keep writing, all things come to those who wait. Such as faithfull readers ;)

Ahh, as Lazybones is want to say, writers have frail egos, thus the plaintive calls for feedback! :lol: Nothing like regular, faithful readers to keep things going. :cool:
 

Excellent start, Ghostknight.

You have a knack for writing combat scenes, which can be very difficult. Good detail, with an eye on keeping the action moving.

Don't worry about acquiring readers, the subject matter alone will attract people, and you have some definite talent to boot. :)

BD
 

BLACKDIRGE said:
Excellent start, Ghostknight.

You have a knack for writing combat scenes, which can be very difficult. Good detail, with an eye on keeping the action moving.

Hi praise coming from you Blackdirge! Your story hours got me started on thining of just a pure fiction write, rather than a module or campaign write up. Thanks for cheking my SH out.
 

Chapter 6

I posted tomorrow's update today- I'm not sure if I will be online tomorrow. if I am- then this is a bonus and there will be another updtae tomorrow!

The forest had changed when they emerged from beneath the ground. It was silent, still. Dead leaves crunched underfoot, brittle and sharp despite having been soaked in the rain. Most of the trees stood stripped of their leaves, and many small animals and birds lay dead on the ground. They found many more of these testaments to the lethal, tainted rain as they progressed.

They travelled for two more days, with Gyv leading them confidently as she approached her home. For the most part they travelled in silence, they did not have much to say, their thoughts on the massacred ant-man tribe and the devastation wrought by just one deluge of the red rain. They all thought it, but none said it, "How many more rains before all is tainted, before life is all but impossible for those who want to remain free of the fiends?"

On the last day of their trip, they descended a deep ravine. Broken rocks were scattered across the ravine floor, with roots and vines hanging down the sides. They made their way through the rocks, going up to what looked like a solid wall of stone. Gyv took her medallion from around her neck and held it in one hand. The other she placed upon the rock, chanting in a tongue taught only to those sworn to the Divine Mother. The rock glowed, revealing a door which opened to her touch. The three stepped within, into a well-lit, plain white room with arrow slits cut into the walls, allowing observation, and, if necessary, attack, from all angles. A single door was on the far wall, at least fifty feet away.

"Welcome to the House of Souls. Someone should open for us soon, we are being watched." Gyv's voice was light, her happiness at being home apparent. They all stood and waited, unsurprised when the door flew open and a tall, brown haired man came forward. He was clad in a simple, open necked shirt that a farmer might wear, and pants made of homespun cotton. His face radiated a huge smile as he approached Gyv, clasping her to him.

"Welcome home, my love." He looked down into Gyv's eyes, expecting to see his love, his desire reflected within, yet he saw dancing flames and a fiendish face instead. "Wha..." The sentence was never finished; Gyv's blade exited his throat, ending his life in that moment. The blood shot out, drenching the front of her shirt. She turned, blood drenched, her husband's body crumbling to the ground behind her.

Horrified Mekior and Jeria draw their weapons, but too late. The wall behind them crumbled and massive fiends entered the room, charging the two down and pinning them to the ground. More fiends rushed past, heading into the complex, laughing and calling out to each other, anticipating the blood shed to come. Gyv stood over her companions, her eyes no longer bearing any resemblance to anything human. She stood aside as a massive devil entered. Tall, well muscled, covered in armour designed more to impress and intimidate than to protect. His face was almost human, handsome, the fangs but a small blemish amongst the perfection.

He came forward and stroked Gyv's face. "Many thanks, my puppet. I have sought this place for an age!" As he stroked her face, her features smoothed, her eyes blanked, and she fell slowly to the ground. Only then did he look at the two held down by his minions.

"What is this?" He knelt down, his massive hand lifting Jeria's head, inspecting it. "A rogue pup! I wonder whose? You bear the look of an aristocratic father. It is a pity about the weak human blood. Never mind, we can find out quite easily to whom you belong." He looked at Mekior, lifting his head up by his hair. "You are already marked. Have you ever told the humans your little secret?" He laughed, releasing his hair, watching as his chin bounced on the floor, split open and released a small stream of blood.

"Bring them to my chambers later. For now, immobilise them all." He left, not looking back as his minions produced strong ropes and expertly tied up the three captives.

***

The line of slaves stretched back far. The devils had been thorough and, behind them, thick black smoke poured out from what had once been the refuge of the House of Souls. Above the ground devils wandered, seeking stray smoke, indications of exits they may not have yet found.

The three companions were kept separate from the rest. They were strung up on wooden spars, carried aloft by massive, powerful devils. They hung from above, arms burning in pain, as their arms were forced to bear the weight of the body hanging down. From above, they had no choice but to watch as the inhabitants of the House of Souls were marched away, with whiplashes being doled out senselessly and continuously. Gyv, still in shock, could still feel her husband's blood spurting onto her; and see her children paraded in front of her, the collar of slavery placed upon their necks. Was it worse that her memories had been restored in the moment the devil had withdrawn his presence from her mind? Or would ignorance and the blackness of death been better?

She hung there, weeping; crying, continuously whispering to herself, begging for forgiveness, imploring the Gods to help. Mekior and Jeria hung alongside her and listened to her prayers, her mutterings, but remained silent themselves. Mekior was numbed by what had happened, the half-fiend proven blameless, the heroine proven to be the weapon of their demise.

"I ran for three days." Gyv's voice had changed, the edge of madness had left it and now it sounded rational. "That was when they got me. I ran blindly, non-stop for three whole days." She shook her head, eyes blackened from crying, tearstains streaking both cheeks. "They started torturing me, but then HE came. He told them to stop, ordered them to leave me unmarked. I didn't understand, not until he started to torture me, and he proved subtler than the others by far! I did not know magic could be wielded in such manner; in many ways his intelligence, his inventiveness could be admired. Eventually I lost all sense of what he had done and remembered nothing; my first memories after my flight from when I came to so close to your city." She paused, "one of you must escape, warn them. He must be planning to destroy it now that he knows it is there!"

"Oh, indeed I am, and will!" He stepped into the light, an intimidating figure, not just for his immense twelve foot height, but for the ease with which he moved; the authority he just assumed as he approached. "But I have something more immediate to resolve. He came up to Jeria, and once again cradled his head in his hand. He withdrew a small knife, its blade razor sharp and made of cold iron, the hilt decorated with platinum inset with gems. Quickly, deftly, he sliced down Jeria's cheek, collecting the blood into a goblet. He drew the blade across his own hand, and added three drops of his own blood to the goblet, throwing the mix into a nearby bowl.

"Show me, tell me! Let the devil's blood call to the devil's blood! Show me the father of this scion!" He peered into the bowl, waiting, wandering. When the results did show themselves, his face changed, surprise vied with amusement.

"Say hello to Dad, little one, guess your mother must have been one of my whores!"

A gesture, a smirk, and the fiendish lord watched as his underlings cut Jeria down.

"Leave his arms trussed for the moment; I'm not ready to risk his escape." The devil looked down at Jeria. "You will learn to call me Master, as well as father, though that is of little consequence. All these around here bow to me. I am General Gerion; I rule this area and report to the great lord himself, letting him know how things go within his domain. You shall address me as Master, or Lord," he paused and then laughed, "unless you want to call me Dad!" He walked off, leaving two devils to watch over the bewildered Jeria.

For Jeria everything seemed to be going past through a fog of bewilderment. From the moment that the devil had announced him his son, to the pain of renewed circulation within his arm and the little speech from his father, all seemed a nightmare. He had known his father was a fiend, but this! Stories of the General Gerion were plentiful; countless atrocities lay at his door, thousands of deaths, mutilations and depravities spoken about in hushed whispers.

From above Mekior looked down and then closed his eyes. Concentrating, calling on what little magic he knew. Hear me Jeria. You cannot help who your father is, but you can help the city. Get away; you are the only one who can. Warn them, get them to flee into the under realms and seek out shelter elsewhere. Tthe city is lost. And kill me and Gyv if you can; don't leave us to face the wrath of your father when you get away!

Jeria looked up, bewilderment on his face. He heard Mekior within his mind, no words had been spoken, the fiend hunter had always struck him as a man comfortable only with magic that would let him hurt, rend, bring pain onto his foes, lead him to his foes, not with anything this subtle. Stop, don't ask how I can do this just accept it. Get away, escape when you can! Once again the voice of Mekior rang in his mind, but even with such an exhortation, how would he escape?

Jeria stood and looked at his captors, and then his companions hanging above.
I will escape, I will get away! The encampment around him was filled with devils celebrating, their human soldiers getting drunk and gouging themselves on food stolen from their latest conquest. You will all die, so swear I!

One of the devils watching him, grabbed his arm and dragged him roughly through camp. He threw him into a tent, atop a pile of furs. "You will sleep here. In the morning the General will see to you." The voice was guttural, hard to understand, though the language was the common one the devils enforced onto all. The devil stepped out into the night, leaving Jeria alone within.

Jeria sank onto the furs, emotions overwhelming him. The stress of being captured, seeing one of the safe houses of the House of Souls destroyed, of finding out who his father was, and the as yet unabated pain in his arms, all combined to defeat his stoic control. He was wracked him with sobs, the likes of which he had never experienced before. He stopped immediately the door began to open, the discipline of a life of facing bullies and those who would see him weakened, enough to allow him to hide his emotions at but a moments notice.

A woman entered; naked but for the collar of slavery she wore around her neck. She was beautiful; dark hair flowed down her back, and her blue eyes pierced his. Her full red lips melded to him, and her warmth was a balm against the cold of the night air. No words were spoken, the offered physical release obvious and quickly accepted. For Jeria, rejected and derided his entire life, the experience was new; never before had he been with a woman and this image of beauty guided and taught him, before they fell asleep, wrapped together under the thick furs that formed both mattress and blankets.

They were awoken in the morning by the sun from outside lashing across their faces as the flap at the entrance was thrown aside. The massive figure of Gerion stood there, smiling. "As you can see, my son, there are advantages to being my offspring. You want Sianar back tonight, or would you like another?" The smile came across as warm and friendly, but Jeria did not trust it. He remained silent and Gerion continued speaking in the absence of any reply. "Not ready to say? No matter, I shall send her and some friends over. Have one or many, they will do as you wish. Willingly. You see, my son, some have accepted their place, their role, within our great society. Some fill the ranks of my army; others serve as we desire them to, but all serve to the greater good of Jelial’s Empire. You, too, shall find your niche, your place in society. Already, you are above the rabble." He turned and left.

Jeria rolled over, ashamed of how he had used the woman, and had not even know her name until it was spoken by a fiend! He stared at the walls of the tent, not hearing as she left, only knowing of her absence by the closing of the flap. Alone once more, he wept, this time from shame and self-pity. His thoughts were clear when he finally regained control of himself: I must get away before I am destroyed!
 

Analyzing...

JollyDoc's one of gfunk group of players, they alternate in their campaign write-ups.

Back to your story:
One thing bugs me a little and it's Jeria's obvious fiendish nature. I find it hard to believe that a being with taint would be allowed to live within the city or even to survive first hours after birth. There probably would be some organisation to handle less then palatable things such as baby killing. I would thing that the risk of being discovered/betrayed far outweighted rights of an tainted infant to live. After 3000 years of Rule one didn't survive without some sort of ruthless pragmatism in that only pure may live within the city. Regardless of race or alignment, I can see that Rule would unite all against It, but not regardless to the Taint.

Makes for good reading, but I would think fiendish blood should be discreete and once proven (Outwalkers) he would remain. And Mekior would have revelation only when the Blood manifested somehow or he concentrates very hard.

My two cents. It's your story and I'm enjoying it, you can of course write it as it suits you ;)

Read you later...
 

Neurotic said:
JollyDoc's one of gfunk group of players, they alternate in their campaign write-ups.

Hmm- now THAT must be quite a group!

Neurotic said:
Back to your story:
One thing bugs me a little and it's Jeria's obvious fiendish nature. I find it hard to believe that a being with taint would be allowed to live within the city or even to survive first hours after birth. There probably would be some organisation to handle less then palatable things such as baby killing. I would thing that the risk of being discovered/betrayed far outweighted rights of an tainted infant to live. After 3000 years of Rule one didn't survive without some sort of ruthless pragmatism in that only pure may live within the city. Regardless of race or alignment, I can see that Rule would unite all against It, but not regardless to the Taint.

Ahh, but fiendish blood isn't taint- taint is basically a fiendish poison that alters the infected person/being into something that is not a fiend, but bears their mark of evil- be it squirrels that become cannibals, or trees which grow posionous thorns. In intelligent beings it results in insanity and evil behaviour, but it is not always physically manifested or obvious- tus you get a being with their loyalties magicly altered and their mental state such that they are easily manipulated into betraying thei rown families and friends.

Neurotic said:
Makes for good reading, but I would think fiendish blood should be discreete and once proven (Outwalkers) he would remain. And Mekior would have revelation only when the Blood manifested somehow or he concentrates very hard.

The fiend blooded are not that rare, but most end up on the edges of society as outcasts. Jeria is an exception in that he has broken free from that environment and gained enough trust to be accepted into the Outwalkers. So Mekior and the other Fiend Hunters have known of him, and avoided him as they would avoid others with fiend blood, but now they are confronted with the fact of having to work with him closely- and that is where the conflict arises.

Neurotic said:
My two cents. It's your story and I'm enjoying it, you can of course write it as it suits you ;)

Comment away- it helps to get me to put down what is in my head but may not be coming out in the text. Hope my explanations make sense. :D

Neurotic said:
Read you later...

Thanks
 

Ghostknight said:
Ahh, but fiendish blood isn't taint- taint is basically a fiendish poison that alters the infected person/being into something that is not a fiend, but bears their mark of evil ...

...confronted with the fact of having to work with him closely- and that is where the conflict arises....

I understand that Taint is not taint, as in one is poison other is blood, but then why should Mekior detect him and reffer to Jeria as "there is one taint and it walks among us" if he only detects evil ... or devil taint ?!

Anyhow thanks for explaining the difference. I'll just accept it as part of the world without questioning too deeply.

Poor Jeria, son of legendary general :eek:
And "strong" and "independant" Mekior showing what hollow shell he is behind that tough mask...
 

Neurotic said:
I understand that Taint is not taint, as in one is poison other is blood, but then why should Mekior detect him and reffer to Jeria as "there is one taint and it walks among us" if he only detects evil ... or devil taint ?!

Thats called prejudice! He doesn't detect him, but ya know those barbed comments you make to irritate other people?

Neurotic said:
Poor Jeria, son of legendary general :eek:
And "strong" and "independant" Mekior showing what hollow shell he is behind that tough mask...

Ah well, Mekior has his own secret, which will come out in time...
 

Chapter 7

Gyv massaged her arms that still ached from bearing her weight overnight. Even now, hours after she had been cut down, her arms screamed with pain, their circulation restored but they were not yet fully healed. Beside her, Mekior seemed fine. She did not understand it. He had been hung up for the same amount of time as she had, yet it had taken mere seconds for him to recover and the pain had hardly even shown on his face, though he must have felt the same pain of returning circulation, of muscles and tendons stretched beyond endurance.

"Mekior." Her voice was soft, just loud enough to reach him, yet not loud enough to carry to the guards standing outside their wooden cage.

"Gyv." His voice carried to her, yet she felt uncertain as to whether he had spoken, or if the message had just arrived, carried on a breath of wind that licked gently at her ears..

"What did that bastard, Gerion, mean? What did he mean when he said you were marked?" She turned, staring at him, watching as the dappled light patterned his face, lending him an air of mystery, an effect that highlighted the sharpness of his nose, his deep, dark, sunken eyes.

Mekior stared at her for a while, not talking, then blinked and rolled over. She reached over, touching his shoulder. "Mekior, it's OK. I've been a puppet for a devil, killed my husband by my own hand, destroyed my home, and sent hundreds into slavery. Please, talk if you wish. I can no longer judge, no longer can I sit and hold my head high, proclaim my success. In my betrayal of those I loved, I have destroyed more than I ever saved."

He turned, looking at her, his hands reaching out, his fingers gently wiping away the tears that were beginning to fall. "Never let them see you cry. In all the time they had me, I never cried, never shouted out. Maybe that's why I survived, why they kept me alive, even shoving healing potions down my throat to keep me alive; even when I tried to reject the healing and escape from the pain they were inflicting." He looked at her, at the bewilderment on her face.

"They didn't tell you? How the Outwalkers rescued me from the clutches of the fiends when I was still a child? I suppose I forget that not everyone knows; it is common knowledge amongst the Outwalkers and Fiend Hunters of Weald Hall." He stared into space. "Why we have been cut down, left to recover, I don't know. Maybe they are just hoping to soften us. Just remember, scream and plead if you want to die quickly." He fell silent, listening to the sounds of the camp outside, watching the sky through the gaps in the wall of the cage and wished they had a view of more than a rock wall and the tents of sentries.

Gyv listened, and watched the Fiend Hunter, wondering at what kind of man, what child, could resist torture for so long and show such determination to survive. She wondered what had been done to him, what effects their attentions had taken. Yet for all he had told her she realised that he had not answered her question. He had used the shock effect of his revelations to quiet her and avoid her question.

She gazed out, following his gaze, watching the guards, the comings and goings in the tents beyond. She gazed out, wondering, Why have they taken us down, why dump us here, leave us unchained, unharmed? She turned over, staring at the sky above.

"How sweet, two little, lost travellers relaxing in the sun." Gerion's mocking voice came in through the bars, his massive form outside the cage, staring in. Gyv sat up, shocked. How did he get so close, arrive without them seeing him? How powerful is he? She stared at him, knowing that physical size and might must be a minor part of his arsenal, that he was powerful beyond any in her experience, her past run-ins with fiends were with ones that were mere shadows of his might.

Gerion stepped back, watching as the door was opened, and food was brought in by a small devil, no taller than a small child whose arms strained to bear the weight of the tray, even though it bore only two bowls, each filled with a steaming bowl of stew. The smell was enticing to the two that had not eaten for over a day. Mekior reached out, not for food, but for the childlike devil. Gyv watched, saw what he was about to do and in a panic shouted out "No!"

Mekior paused, his hand stopping just before the small fiend. "Why, one less fiend is always a good thing?"

Gyv hesitated, not wanting to use his name and then realised that the fiend lord had heard, seen everything she had for days. "Mekior, it's a shifter. Touch it and you'll be facing a monster that will pull your arms off before you realise what has happened." She stopped as she heard Gerion chuckling.

"Ahh, you spoiled my fun! It wouldn't have hurt him, much. In case you're wondering, the food is fine and free of poison and taint. You two have one value only, hostages to my son's good behaviour. You'd best hope he behaves himself, you're the whipping boys!" He laughed his voice fading as he walked away. Gyv looked at Mekior, happy she was not facing more torture, but wondering at what the future would hold.

***

Jeria walked through the camp. Behind him, his ever present guard followed, their presence felt only as a shadow, unobtrusive, yet constant. Three weeks of captivity had not softened his resolve. Since the first night, no favours had been accepted, no slave used no matter how willing. He was allowed the freedom of the encampment, even up the hill to the cage beyond the sentries' tents in which Mekior and Gyv were held. He headed up there now, watching the movement of the sentries; their movements predictable, clockwork in motion.

He came to the cage door, his fingers wandering over the lock, wishing he had the key. Mekior came up to him, a small smile twisting up the corners of his mouth.

"Jeria. It's time for you to leave, Jeria; its time for you to go, get out of here, and escape from the fate that is slowly enveloping you." His lips were close to Jeria's ears, his voice too low for any but Jeria to hear. "The word is Sh'kuctu. The word will freeze your guards, let you escape from them."

"How do you know this? What is this word?" Jeria's low voiced whisper reached Mekior who just stepped back, his smile in place, saying nothing more. Jeria looked at him, frustrated. Mekior had not spoken to him mind to mind, since that first time. The Fiend Hunter knew more than he was telling, and Jeria longed to know from where this knowledge came.

He went down the hill, guards trailing, walking to the edge of the encampment, and sat at the verge of the forest and listened to the birds calling, watching as peace descended over the forest, the noises of the day replaced by the sounds of the night insects and the distant howl of some creature that hunted by night. He beckoned his guards forward, waiting for them to come up to him. He turned, faced them his mouth moving, clearly enunciating the word "Sh'kuctu"

He had not known what to expect, but the results were unexpected. The two came to attention, their eyes glazed over, and arms by their sides. He walked over, easily removing their swords and tied a scabbard to his waist. The other sword he strapped to his shoulder. He turned and walked off into the forest, changing direction frequently, doing the best to hide his trail as he had seen Gyv and Gruzz doing.

Jeria walked through the night, adrenalin and his fiendish blood keeping him going. He looked about him, perpetually worried that the pursuit had started, that at any moment he would hear the sounds of pursuit and find fiends coming up from behind. Just after dawn, he rested for an hour, enough time for him to recover before he started moving again.

Behind him, the frozen guards were finally discovered, and executed. General Gerion had no forgiveness or sympathy for those who failed.

***

In the cage, Mekior watched Jeria walk away and turned to Gyv. "We must try to escape tonight; tomorrow our lives will be worthless." He looked over the cage and nodded. "Yes, we can escape."

Gyv looked at him, leaning forward. "How? What, you going to make the guards open the cage and let us out?"

"Actually, yes, that's exactly what we are going to do. You've freed slaves, how much do you know of the command tongue?" Mekior looked at her, contemplating what to say next. "You do know about the command tongue?"

"I've heard of it. Rumours only though, never hard facts. I have heard that there is a language that is known to only a few, the slave lords, the commanders of armies and the like." She looked at him. "Rumour also says it is conditioned into all slaves, they cannot resist it, are forced into obedience by key words." She paused weighing her next words, "Rumour also says that it will control the weakest of fiends and that it has never been taught to a human. So, Mekior, how much of the rumours are right?"

"All of it, except the last, of course. After nightfall, we will leave. Give Jeria time to get away, head towards the city. We will head off west, leaving a hard to find, but follow-able trail. We'll make it enough of a trail for three people." He looked at her, "Jeria can travel almost non-stop without us, and knows enough about the outdoors to survive on his own. Us, we're expendable. We just have to make sure that Jeria gets enough of a head start to get away."

"Why now? Why have you waited? Should we not have done this when we were first captured?"

"No." Mekior's voice was firm. "The first few days they watched Jeria too closely. If he had tried to run he would have been captured and brought back, our advantage lost."

He turned away, not looking at her. Not speaking, leaving her with her questions. How had he learnt the language? What was the mark that Gerion had seen on him? She looked at him, and could see nothing untoward, his short, heavily muscled body unremarkable in anyway beyond the ordinary, save, perhaps, in his nimbleness that seemed uncanny at times. She sat down, waiting for the night, for Mekior to speak in a tongue that there should be no way for him to know.

***

They moved through the forest, Gyv carefully bending and blending their tracks, fixing them just enough that a competent tracker would pick up the trail. She longed to call on the Goddess, use her magic to hide them, let them move like the wind, but she knew that Mekior spoke the truth; Jeria was the only one able to make it all the way- if he was given the chance.

Gyv and Mekior heard the horns behind them, the baying of hounds, their very howls enough to freeze the blood. "They've got Dirian hunting hounds!"

Mekior looked at her, "What are Dirian hunting hounds?" He looked at her; saw the fear on her face, worried that perhaps they had made a mistake that Jeria was not safely on his way to the city.

"They're from the regional capital, Diria; Gerion's fortress is based there, as are his breeding dens. The rumours of what happen in there are stomach turning: fiendish magic used to blend man and animal, devil and animal, or all three. The hunting hounds are one of his successful projects; a blend of fiend and dog, able to follow any trail regardless of the skill of those who make it, even able to ignore the magic that the Earth Mother can cast over a path to hide it from pursuers!" She continued walking, moving faster, not bothering with the useless task of trying to conceal their trail. "There are stories about what they do to their prey, of how they rip the pursued apart, piece by piece, not just their bodies but their very souls."

The two started running, Gyv calling on the Earth Mother to speed their passage, send them fleeing from their pursuers. A thought struck her, and she asked a question, breathlessly. "The command language, will it work on the hunting dogs?"

Beside her, neither breathless nor flagging, Mekior answered without breaking stride, "No. It is specific to each creature, each race. I have no idea what commands would be effective, I could think I was ordering them to stop only to discover that I had ordered them to attack!" He carried on running, heading deeper into the forest, looking for an area they could use for an ambush.

Gyv, running at his side, turned abruptly, heading between two giant trees that stood out from the others. "This way, the trees mark the route through to a supply cache. I've led freedom runs into this area. The cache should have weapons and food."

Mekior followed her, watching as she headed between the trees and stopped a few paces beyond. She knelt down, pulling up a rock, exposing a hole beneath a massive root. From beneath it she pulled out a treasure trove of armaments, enough to arm her normal squad of twenty.

"See anything you like?" She appropriated one of the bows, a quiver full of arrows and a vicious looking sword, its edge serrated and barbed. Mekior looked over the selection, shaking his head at the weapons.

"The House of Souls doesn't know about cold iron?" He picked over the weapons. "You want to hurt one of the lesser fiends, cold iron will do it for you. Unfortunately, for the greater fiends you need something more powerful. Either way I can hurt them, all Fiend Hunters can imbue their weapons with magic to cut the fiends, but you can't. Concentrate on the hounds, only the most powerful of the fiend-tainted share the fiend's immunities. I'll take care of the handlers." He bent over, taking a short stabbing sword, pairing it with a longer duelling sword. He tested their balance and smiled.

Gyv looked at him, speaking bitterly. "Oh yes, we know about cold iron, but the traders are too scared to bring it to us, and the cities hoard it. We keep trying to lure an alchemist away from a city, to come and turn our ordinary iron into cold iron, but none will come. Why should they, the cities fete and treat them like royalty!"

They prepared themselves and waited, listening as the baying came closer. The abrupt silence as the animals fell silent was far more chilling than the approaching howls had been. Gyv leaned over to Mekior. "They're close. The baying stops just before they attack."

Gyv's bow stayed steady, with string drawn back and an arrow ready to be loosed when the beasts finally showed themselves.

The hunting pack came into sight and gave Mekior his first sight of the beasts. They were large, easily the size of a man, their bodies sleek and muscular with large paws striking the ground, pulling them across the intervening space at a frightening pace. Their heads, which had the worst features of the devils combined with those of the dog, sharp fangs along both sides, their ears tiny nubs lost behind their over developed muscular jaws, hung down, the nubs of their glowing eyes coals of hate directed at the two. The first of Gyv's arrows streaked out, felling one of the beasts, piercing it deeply in its side, finding the beasts heart.

Two more went down but there were three more still in the pack to reach the two who stood ready, swords in their hands. Behind the hounds came their handler, a fiend that Gyv, with a shock of recognition, knew from her last raid. It stood there, encouraging the hounds, its guttural language lost to her but not to the hounds. She struck out at the hounds, keeping two of them at bay, seeing only a blur of movement from her side where Mekior had been.

Mekior waited for the hound, spinning aside, sending the stabbing sword into its back, while the longer sword swept underneath, chopped off a leg. It fell, howling in agony, sending pitiful, puppy like yelps into the night. He immediately moved towards the fiend, watching its bone protrusions carefully, wary of their sharp edges.

Gyv hacked out with her sword, cursing the proximity of the beasts, she preferred the distance of her bow. The blade cut across the hound's skull, biting deeply as it pulled away muscle and skin as barbs grabbed hold and ripped out chunks of meat. The hound dropped, one eye hanging loose, blood pumping out onto the cold ground. The other hound had circled round, came in low, biting at her feet. She jumped, landing awkwardly, getting the sword up to block its teeth, feeling the pain as its bit deep into her arm.

Mekior still fought the devil. His twin swords flashed, bouncing off bone protrusions, unable to find a vulnerable target as the devil twisted and turned, using its natural armour and weapons skilfully. The dance had to end at some point. The fiend turned, sending its tail round in an attempt to impale Mekior. But, he wasn't there anymore; he had followed it as it turned, punching forward with both swords, sacrificing defence for offence, both swords piercing fiendish flesh even as he let one of the bone spikes pierce his arm.

He left the fiend, wounded, bleeding. Yet, somehow, his strength was still there and e was able to ignore the bleeding wound. He sent his sword into the juncture between head and spine of the beast that savaged Gyv, killing the beast that had left her arm, and part of her shoulder mashed and bloodied.

Mekior dropped down next to Gyv and saw she was unconscious. He looked at his bleeding arm, held it so that the blood dropped over her wounds and smiled as they knitted closed. He picked her up and headed west; leading pursuers ever further from the trial that Jeria would be following.
 

Into the Woods

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