Shackled City Epic: "Vengeance" (story concluded)

Who is your favorite character in "The Shackled City"?

  • Zenna

    Votes: 27 29.7%
  • Mole

    Votes: 17 18.7%
  • Arun

    Votes: 31 34.1%
  • Dannel

    Votes: 10 11.0%
  • Other (note in a post)

    Votes: 6 6.6%

just caught up after a while away
thought that zenna was one of them shackled people had a feeling with the hints lazy was dropping
at least having her tounge cut out no more of her whinging and self absorbed diatrabes
lazybones you are far and away my fave story hour author and have kept the pace marvellously in this exciting story looking foeard to the update keep on writing man
 

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Thanks for the kudos. I'm actually looking forward to finishing this story; I'd like to write something non-proprietary (fantasy, just not Forgotten Realms-based) that I could actually market for a change. I also have a novel that's about 1/3 done that I've had some new ideas for. I may keep posting stuff here just for the feedback (reader posts are far nicer than rejection letters from agents and publishing houses).

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Chapter 332

With the fissure beginning to close, Mole did not hesitate. She’d already dipped into her bag of holding, and as the dwarves closed she withdrew two bundles of rope from the magical container and tossed them at them.

“Toss ‘em down!” she said, not even waiting for a response as she turned and leapt into the fissure.

Dannel sat on the cracked paving stones a few feet back from the lip of the opening, quickly removing his boots and slipping on his slippers of spider climbing. By the time that Arun and Hodge had gotten the ropes unwound, Dannel too had descended into the uneven opening, darting precariously down the sharply slanting and uneven sides of the fissure. Streamers of steam and sulfurous ash filled the space, making visibility beyond a few feet almost impossible. From below, they could hear the screams of pain and panic of the people trapped below.

“Mole!” Beorna yelled into the expanse. “Ropes coming down!” At her gesture Arun and Hodge stepped forward, hurling the loosened coils down, keeping hold of the far ends.

“Spread out, one to each side,” Arun directed, already moving from the narrow end of the fissure toward one of the crumbling sides.

“Watch those edges!” Beorna warned, needlessly; all of the dwarves knew enough about stone and earth to know the danger.

It only took a few seconds for the first line to grow taut. Arun, his legs braced solidly against the pavement a spare pace back from the edge, pulled until a pale human man in the clothes of a day laborer appeared through the smoke. Beorna grabbed him as soon as he drew close enough to the edge, taking his hand in a crushing grip and hurling him bodily to safety. Even as the man stumbled back, coughing, Hodge drew a second person up on his line, a woman who cried in pain, favoring her left arm.

The ground shook again as the sides of the chasm drew another foot closer. Hodge and Arun were now a bare five paces distant on the opposite sides of the fissure, but both ignored the closing walls, focusing only on drawing up more people from below. Another woman, the line secured around her body, her broken arm dangling uselessly behind her, was helped up by Arun and Beorna, while Hodge pulled up a man holding an elvish child who seemed utterly frail and delicate in his soot-stained arms. Another man followed the woman with the broken arm on Arun’s side, unconscious, the rope lashed around his chest. Arun and Hodge were nearly close enough now for them to reach out and touch across the closing gap of the fissure.

“Mole, Dannel, get out of there!” Arun yelled down into the fissure. Both dwarves heaved on their ropes, each drawing another person out of the jaws of death. Both of the victims were unconscious this time, and Beorna had to lean precariously over the opening to draw them in.

Dannel appeared then, moving awkwardly up the closing gap, his magical slippers the only thing keeping him from sliding back into the ashen darkness below. His cloak was wrapped around a considerable burden held close against his body, and his face was tight with tension and effort as he leapt up to a jutting stone that shifted beneath his weight. He started to fall, arrested only by Beorna’s sudden grab, her arm shooting out to take a fistful of his cloak, focusing on the bulge of his quiver underneath. For a heart-shattering second he hung from her grip solely by the strap of the quiver secured under his arm, unable to help her lest he lose his grip on his burdens. Then Arun was there, and the two dwarves pulled him up to safety.

“Thanks,” he gasped. Beorna drew back the cloak, revealing two pale human children, each maybe six or seven years old. They were conscious, very scared—and alive.

“Meeka!” one of them, a little girl, cried, reaching for the chasm.

The dwarves turned toward the opening just as the ground lurched again, and with a crash that propelled a last jet of ash and smoke up into the sky, the fissure slammed shut.

“Mole!”
 


Chapter 333

Arun helped Dannel to his feet, as one of the injured women came forward, taking the children into her arms, sobbing in relief. The girl was crying, now, pointing toward the fissure, repeating the name she’d called out earlier. Beorna was tending to some of the unconscious victims they’d pulled out of the chasm before it had slammed shut, and her face was grim as she glanced back at the ridge formed where the sides of the fissure had buckled together. Hodge clambered forward, pulling at loose debris, but while steam continued to vent up from narrow cracks, the fissure had been well and truly shut by the inexorable movement of the earth beneath them.

“Fool girl,” Hodge cursed, but his voice was thick as he looked for what he knew would not be found.

Then there was a flash of smoke, just a few steps to his left. The dwarf started in surprise as the smoke dissipated to reveal Mole, kneeling bent over, coughing as she fought for a clean breath of air.

Hodge offered Mole his ubiquitous jug, but she shook her head. “I’m not that desperate,” she said, pulling herself, up, cradling her arms close against her chest.

“You just have to make it dramatic, don’t you,” Dannel said, moving around the ridge of the close fissure to join them. His tone was acerbic, but the relief was obvious on his face.

“Did we get everyone?” Arun asked.

“Yeah, I think so,” Mole said, opening her cloak to reveal what she’d been protecting. The little girl let out a shriek as a small form twisted in the gnome’s grasp, yapping; it was a blackened but otherwise hale puppy.

“Meeka!” the girl cried. Mole walked over to her, a wide smile on her face, and offered the child her pet.

“Thank you,” the woman, the child’s mother, said. “Thank you, all of you.”

“The city is being evacuated,” Arun said, his voice pitched to carry through the small crowd that had gathered around the drama of the rescue. “Stay together, move to the closest city gate as quickly as you can. Don’t stop, and don’t go into buildings.”

Beorna helped the last of the injured survivors to his feet. Her healing powers hadn’t fully restored all of them, but they were all ambulatory, and would have a better chance than some of escaping the increasingly deadly city. That fact was made clear a moment later as a sudden plume of white steam rose up from the Lava Avenue, just one street below them now, on the edges of the lake.

“The lake is overflowing its boundaries!” Dannel said.

“Let’s go,” Arun said. The companions gathered their gear, Mole quickly wrapping up the ropes in case they were needed again. The first connecting street was blocked by a collapsed building that had fallen inward across the sloping avenue. No one was evident, although fifty people might have been buried under that rubble as far as they could have known. Rather than essay the unstable barrier, they rushed down to the next block, and turned into a pedestrian walkway that led down a wide stone staircase that ran down between several buildings to the lowest of Cauldron’s four main boulevards.

Lava Avenue was relatively quiet, compared to the rest of the city. There were few residences here, on the edges of the lake; with the danger of flooding most people who could lived higher up along the rim of the caldera. There were a number of businesses and warehouses here, and several docks that had already been inundated by the rising waters. The lake was clearly in turmoil, steam rising from the waters brought to a boil by the release of superheated gasses from deep within the volcano. Angry waves five or more feet high rushed outward from the advancing rim of the lake, splashing out onto the avenue.

“Leave it, get to higher ground, out of the city!” Dannel yelled, yanking a man from where he’d been trying to load a wagon in front of a warehouse nearby. The elf drew his sword and cut the panicked horse at the lead of the wagon free, calming it enough for the man to take its lead reins.

“Greedy fools,” Beorna observed, as the man ran off, horse in tow. “They’d risk their lives for a few gold pieces in swag.”

“The livery stables!” Mole yelled, pointing down the street toward one of the long structures that abutted the lake, home to dozens of domesticated animals. Apparently some people had elected to depart without taking their property, and they could hear the panicked bray of trapped creatures from within the structure even from a hundred paces distant. The back of the stables were normally a good fifteen feet above the waters of the lake, but now the steaming waves were slamming hard against the wooden planks.

“Great, now I’m playin’ hero to a bunch o’ cattle,” Hodge grumbled, but he followed the others as they ran toward the stables. They passed a group of men staggering from the ruin of what had been an inn, several of them bloody and unconscious, helped by the others. Beorna and Arun paused to help them, while Dannel and Mole continued toward the stables.

But before either group could reach their destination, a roar from the lake drew their attention around. The already roiling waters had suddenly erupted in a surge focused maybe fifty yards out, not far from where the lake’s edge was normally situated. A fresh wave pulsed out onto Lava Avenue, forcing Dannel and Mole back to avoid being scaled. Even as they darted out of the way of the boiling water, the source of the disturbance became evident, as a... thing rose up out of the lake, borne up out of the water on a thrashing tangle of limbs. It had a vaguely humanoid look to it, not much larger than an adult human, although its alien features were more those of a fish than those of a man. Even from this distance they could see the markings of an unholy bloodline about it, and from the waist down its body terminated not in legs and feet, but in a number of thick tentacles that now slapped the water as it lifted its body up out above the waves, transforming the surface of the lake around it into a sea of steaming froth.

“Now what in the blasted blooming hells is THAT?” Hodge yelled, already fumbling with his heavy bow.

The creature let out a terrible roar from its inhuman jaws, a sound of blind rage and searing pain. It was clearly discomfited by the boiling water, and as its thrashings lifted it above the waves wings unfolded from its back, pounding the water as they furiously lifted the infernal monstrosity into the sky. Despite its terrible appearance, it looked to be intelligent, for as it ascended they could see that it wore gleaming bracers at its wrists, and it carried a slender wand in one hand.

“It has already been injured,” Arun said. “Perhaps it will just fly off, and leave this place.”

“Takin’ bets?” Hodge muttered, sliding a fat bolt into place and hefting his weapon.

And indeed, the creature, once it was clear from the lake and more or less stable in the air, rose above them over the flooded avenue. It looked down at them with a gaze that seethed with malevolence, and it sundered the air with a cry of pure hate.

“Begone from here, fiend!” Arun said, drawing his holy sword, letting its light shine out like a beacon as he lifted it above his head.

In response, the creature spoke a word of pure corruption, and in response the air around it rippled and seethed. For a moment the boundaries between realities were sundered, and through that opening a pair of filthy, scabarous vulture-things entered the world.

“Vrock demons,” Beorna said. She lifted her palm, and calling upon the power of Helm, extended a ray of searing light from her to the fish-man fiend.

The beam struck the creature, but instead of burning it, there was a flash and the energy blast returned back on its course, slamming into its caster’s chest. “Ah!” Beorna cried, as the holy power of her own patron stabbed a fist of pain through her body.

“Let’s see if it can reflect one o’ these!” Hodge said, lifting his bow to his shoulder. But even as he drew the trigger of his weapon, the fiend pointed at the trio of dwarves, and a wave of pain swept through each of them. The potent energies of a horrid wilting spell tore through their bodies mercilessly.
 


Just deLurking after days of catch-up. Actually I'm still back at Chap 281 in the icy caves under the city! But I had to add my hearty
Well Done!
to the clammor of praise for your work LB. Thanks for the great story/characters/plot and action that keep my long winter-lull days bearable and inspire me to enjoy my nwn games that much more.

Blessings,
Richard < > <
 

Hey, thanks Richard! I appreciate you registering here in order to post in my thread.

And NWK, if anything you have a talent for understatement. The morkoth has, in particular, one sure tactic that is almost unstoppable. Which we'll get to, shortly; but first we need to soften up the heroes a bit...

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Chapter 334

The horrid wilting spell was a terrible magic, capable of ripping the moisture that facilitated the basic processes of life right out of a living being. The fiendish morkoth’s spell, a gift of its dark ancestry, hit them with its fullest potential of power.

The injured men in the shadow of the ruined inn behind them screamed and collapsed, reduced in a heartbeat to desiccated husks that only barely resembled men. The dwarves were made of sterner stuff, but even they could not fully resist the dark energies of the spell.

Or at least two could not; Arun and Hodge gritted their teeth as their bodies screamed in protest against the moisture torn from them by the potency of the spell. Arun’s skin sank close against his skull, and blood flowed from his fingers as the suddenly-dry flesh burst within his gauntlets. Hodge stumbled, tears of blood trailing from his eyes as he blinked, trying to clear his vision.

But Beorna, her mettle bolstered by the power of her faith, and the sheltering hand of Helm, fought off the dire effect of the wilting. Her face twisted into a snarl as she jammed her sword point-down into the ground at her feet, and reached around to the small bow still slung across her back. In part, her ire was directed at herself, for while she possessed the power to send such an infernal monstrosity back to its plane of origin, she also knew that her chances of affecting it with her magic were almost nil. That was the price of her chosen path, sacrificing the power to wield spells for the toughness and dedication of the templar. It was a choice she’d made freely, but at this particular moment it grated.

The morkoth let out a shriek as a missile stabbed into its body. The shot had not been Hodge’s, as the bolt from his crossbow had missed cleanly. Rather, Dannel and Mole were running back down the road toward them, forced now almost onto the far shoulder by the advancing waters of the lake. The buildings on the lakeward side of the avenue were now surrounded by boiling water, and the crash of breaking glass and splintering wood sounded now almost constantly from all around the edges of the lake. Dannel paused long enough to loose another shaft, which the creature was able to dodge. It had erected a dark field of energy around it, a familiar unholy aura that the companions had faced before. It beat its wings to gain more altitude, but none of the adventurers would have wagered that it was retreating from the fray.

The vrocks let out their terrible shrieks and dove toward the dwarves. Cautious, the avian fiends did not immediately dive into range of their blades, but instead drew upon dark currents of power to bolster themselves prior to engaging their foes. Beorna fired an arrow at one, but the missile barely stuck in its thick hide, not harming it. The vrocks, now maybe twenty feet above them now, circling them in a wide sweep, responded with a mocking cackle as they surrounded themselves with shifting cloaks of mirror images. Arun, who had not gone for his bow, only held his sword ready, waiting for the inevitable attack.

Dannel drew out a handful of arrows from his magical quiver as the morkoth angled back toward him, spreading them onto the bed of a nearby ruined wagon that had been left beside the road. Mole had been beside him a moment ago, but she’d disappeared somewhere, naturally. Dannel only hoped she’d gotten clear; he’d seen what effect the morkoth’s initial attack had had, and he fully expected to draw something similar down upon himself.

Drawing his first arrow to his cheek, he set about stimulating that response. His first shot missed, to his frustration, but he did not spend any time berating himself. The arrows were close at hand; each was fit to string, drawn, and fired in a heartbeat. The morkoth’s thick, oily hide and the evil aura of power surrounding it were potent defenses, but Dannel was one with his bow, the song filling him, infusing his arrows with magical power. The creature flinched noticeably in its flight as the elf’s second arrow vanished into its torso, and even as it recovered the third clipped its wing, punching through the membrane as it passed through. The creature howled in rage and drew its wings close around its body, plummeting toward Dannel like a stone. Still Dannel fired, and his fourth shot stuck in the creature’s leg, trailing fat drops of black blood that splattered on the stones at his feet.

He reached for another arrow, but before he could ready another shot, the morkoth spread its wings and let loose another spell upon its tormentor.

The vrocks, content with the potency of their defensive preparations, finally unleashed their assault. They opened with a paired screech, a sonic assault intended to stun their enemies, and leave them completely vulnerable to attack. Unfortunately for them, their enemies were dwarven veterans, who were easily able to resist the terrible sound. Hodge had reloaded his bow and shot one of the vrocks, a square-on impact to the chest that unfortunately connected with a mirror image. Beorna’s arrows likewise struck only empty air, although she did manage to remove several of the images from one of the creatures before they both wheeled and dove to the attack.

Arun waited in a ready position until he actually felt the impact of claws tearing at his shield, trying to find an opening in his defenses. In that instant he released the attack he’d been holding, driving his sword through the body of the demon, smiting it with a critical strike that tore through its ribcage, drove through a lung, and then erupted out from its back. The demon seemed shocked, opening its beak soundlessly as the holy power of the sword seared its corrupted essence from within. It managed to get one of its hind legs up between itself and the dwarf impaling it with his sword, and pushed off of the blade, flopping awkwardly to the ground made slick with its own blood. Hodge rushed up, ready to finish it, but the vrock still had a bevy of mirror images protecting it, and the dwarf’s axe clove through one of those instead of the real creature.

“Blast ye!” Hodge cursed, almost losing his balance as his foot landed on a cobblestone slick with demonic ichor.

Beorna, meanwhile, was closely engaged with the second vrock. As it drew within reach she dropped her bow and drew forth her own holy blade, hefting the weapon with both of her muscled hands wrapped around its hilt. She was cautious, wary of overextending herself with a strike against a false image, and that caution allowed the vrock to get in the first strike. As it dove at her it lashed out with one of its hind legs, clipping her solidly across the right side of her face. Her helm prevented her from losing an eye, but the sharp talons still dug painfully across her brow, opening gashes that trailed blood down the side of her face.

The templar merely shook her head and countered with a series of expert cuts that formed a weaving pattern of light between her and the demon. Several more of the mirror images vanished as she tore through them with the holy blade, but they served their purpose, keeping the demon safe from harm, for the moment.

Dannel screamed in agony as the morkoth, now a mere fifty feet above him, spread its wings and extended a webbed hand down toward him. Black flames erupted around him, slashing into his slender body, threatening to tear the very fabric of his soul asunder. But even as the destruction spell took hold, a clear thought sounded in his mind, a picture of the woman he loved, her fate dependent on them, on him, surviving to find her...

He screamed again, but this time there was more frustration and rage than pain in the sound. He realized that he’d fallen to the ground, and that while wisps of black smoke rose from his body, he was alive. His bow was still in his hand, his fingers white around the smooth shaft.

Then an echoing scream drew his attention up, and he saw the morkoth, its wings spread wide like some avenging angel, descending upon him, his death shining in its eyes.
 


Look at it this way... if this was Sepulchrave's story, you'd have to wait six months to find out what happens!

Also: have you read Travels through the Wild West? That story hour is complete (8 books long, and with 460,000 words of text, it would keep you busy for a while!).

LB

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Chapter 335

There was no time for thought, only for instinct. Dannel raised his right hand, the one bearing the magical ring he’d recently acquired, and with a thought called upon its power. The ring, its bronze face shaped into the head of a ram, hummed as a plane of translucent force formed around the elf’s fist, then blasted into the descending form of the morkoth.

The creature was caught off-guard, and any mundane foe would have been diverted by the potency of the ring’s attack. But Dannel, reacting out of a self-preserving reflex, had not factored in the half-fiend’s considerable spell resistance. The force-blast dissipated as it struck the morkoth, which snapped its head forward as it landed, opening its huge jaws to seize the unfortunate elf. Dannel didn’t even have time to cry out as the creature smote him, and he was unconscious even before it sent him hurtling back behind the wagon to fall in a gangly heap in the muddy ditch behind it.

The morkoth lifted its head and bellowed in triumph, a hollow, gasping sound made more terrible by the red smears of Dannel’s blood that surrounded its gaping mouth. But despite its success thus far, the creature was clearly in some discomfort. Its body had been designed for dwelling under the water, not for breathing the air above, and blood continued to seep from the various puncture wounds Dannel had inflicted upon it already with his arrows. Turning to see its summoned vrocks doing poorly against the dwarves, it started beating its wings to lift it once more into the air.

But before it could alight, something struck it across the back with a sucking plop. There was no pain, but within a few seconds it became harder for the morkoth to flap its wings. It could not see, of course, the sticky strands of alchemical goop that spread out from the tanglefoot bag that had just hit it between the shoulder blades, fouling its wings more with each beat. Nor did it see the rope that had been wrapped around the bag, and which now was tangled in the mixture, trailing out behind it to a terminus that Mole was quickly wrapping around one of the axles of the ruined wagon nearby.

The morkoth, its wings pounding furiously, leapt into the air, and was finally able to start gaining altitude despite the hindrance caused by the adhesive strands cluttering its back. But it quickly reached the limit of the rope, which jerked it roughly back down. Hissing in fury as it landed, it turned and grabbed hold of the rope. Looking back, it spotted Mole, who darted behind the wagon as the morkoth lifted its wand and fired a lightning bolt that slammed into the damaged conveyance, sending wood splinters flying. And more importantly, from its perspective, severing the rope that bound it to the ground.

In the meantime, as the morkoth struggled with Mole’s entangling line, Arun and Hodge had finally whittled away the last of the shifting images protecting the critically injured vrock. The hapless demon, compelled by the summoning that had drawn it here, could not retreat, and so it perished in a bloody mess, dissolving into noxious black smoke as the bond holding it on the Prime Material Plane ebbed with the ending of its life. The two dwarves turned to aid Beorna. The templar’s foe had tried everything it could in an effort to stop her; telekinesis had failed against her indomitable resistances, and even blasting her with a cloud of invasive spores had done little to ease the ferocity of her attack, although the burrowing growths fostered by the spores had to be causing her intense pain. Only its mirror images was keeping it in the fray at all, and as Beorna drove it back, the demon flapping its wings madly as it hovered a few paces above the ground, it paused to refresh the blurring shroud of images surrounding it. Like its kin, however, the demon did not, could not, withdraw, and with a shriek it met the templar’s charge, slashing at her body with all four of its taloned limbs.

“Damn it, slay the master fiend!” Beorna shouted at the other two dwarves. When Arun hesitated, only for an instant, she added, “I can handle this one! MOVE!”

The two men complied, charging toward the morkoth, some fifty paces distant, even as it blasted the wagon with its lightning bolt, freeing itself. Beorna, fighting through the pain of the spores burrowing into her flesh, cursed as her sword again passed through empty air, popping another image, suffering in turn a painful impact as a talon bruised her shoulder. She wasn’t badly hurt, not yet, but each small wound inflicted by the demon was adding to her tally of injuries. And the others had been hurt, hurt bad by the horrid wilting, and she knew that they would need her help against the powerful fiend that had unleashed such destructive magical powers.

To the hells with it, she thought, and she lowered her head, closing her eyes as she listened for the flapping of wings that announced another sweeping assault from the demon. When the sound filled the interior of her helmet, and its shriek echoed within that adamantine cavern, she thrust her blade forward with all her might.

The morkoth lifted once again into the air, laboring against the clinging strands of tanglefoot mixture splayed across its back. The fragment of rope, still anchored solidly to that adhesive, trailed behind it. The remnants of the rope formed a twenty foot tail behind the ascending creature, and as its end lifted up off the ground Arun, charging hard, lunged forward and seized it in a mailed fist. For a moment the dwarf was jerked roughly into the air, dangling several feet above the ground before his weight dragged him—and the morkoth—back with him. The fiend let out a fierce roar of protest as the paladin tossed his shield aside, taking ahold of the rope in both hands, yanking the morkoth down while Hodge lifted his burning axe, ready to deliver a telling blow.

But before he could strike, the morkoth opened its jaws wide, and spoke a single word. A word of utter anathema that shook the reality of the world in a forty-foot radius around it.

Hodge clutched his head and crumpled. Likewise, Arun fell, paralyzed by the fell power of the blasphemy. Behind the blasted wagon, Dannel, brought to the brink of consciousness by a healing potion from Mole, slumped back into the muck of the ditch, while Mole, her body quivering, fell across his ravaged frame. With a single stroke, the fiendish monstrosity had incapacitated almost all of its foes.

The morkoth, exulting in its evil power, landed and stood over the helpless form of the paladin, ready to deliver a final, killing blow.
 

Wow, you're really dealing it out this time. With all the men dead or unconcious, can the women save the day & can they do it in time? Some evil tounges claim that women are late most of the time... ;)
 

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