[Star Wars Saga] The Sith Want You!

Douane said:
Meesa happy to help. :p

I usually look over other PCs because I learn a lot from the way people built their characters. Especially so with the SAGA system with which I have almost no experience yet. (RL game died after only two sessions.)
Yeah. If you want I can return the favor once you post yours ;) .
 
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Sorry it's so long, but I kind of let it get away from me. I think I might have worked in every space opera cliche but amnesia and "the chosen one." :D

Major Attun "Winter" Bek-Fel

Destiny: 9 Force Points: 10 Dark Side: 16
Medium Near Human Male Noble 1/Soldier 3/Jedi 3/Officer 1/Sith Apprentice 1
Init +12; Perception +12
Languages: Basic, Ryl, Huttese, Arkanian, 2 TBA
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Defenses: Ref 24 Fort 21 Will 25,
Hit Points: ; Threshold
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Spd 6 squares (walking)
Melee +11 lightsaber 2d8+9 (Stunning Strike)
Ranged +
Base Attack +8; Grapple +10
Special Actions: Lightsaber Defense, Wicked Strike
Force Powers Known: (Use the Force +12) Battle Strike, Force Lightning, Mind Trick
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Abilities Str 14, Dex 16, Con 10, Int 14, Wis 14, Chr 16

Talents: Assault TacticsO1, Born LeaderN1, Melee SmashS1, Stunning StrikeS3, Lightsaber DefenseJ1, Weapon Specialization (lightsabers)J3, Wicked StrikeSA1

Feats: CleaveJ2, Force Sensitivity1, Force TrainingHB, Great Cleave9, LinguistN1, Power Attack3, Weapon Focus (lightsabers)6, Weapon Proficiency (lightsabersJ1, pistolsN1, riflesS1, simple weaponsN1), Vehicular CombatS2

Skills: Deception +12, Initiative +12, Gather Information +12, Knowledge (Tactics) +11, Perception +11, Persuasion +12, Pilot +12, Use Computer +11, Use the ForceHB +12

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Experience: 36,000
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Age: 24
Height:
Weight:
Hair: White, with dark forelock
Eyes: White


Appearance:
Attun is half-Arkanian and as such shares the pale white coloration and pupiless eyes of his mother. Unlike his mother and other "true" Arkanians though, his human bloodline exposed the genetic defects marking the Bek clan as hybrid Arkanians. Instead of four clawed fingers, Attun possesses five fairly normal looking ones on either hand; and unlike either of his parents he has distinctively pointed ears that are considered culturally abhorrent to the Arkanians.

Otherwise Attun is tall and well-muscled, with broad shoulders and the stern chin that is reminiscent of his father's. Like most other Arkanians, Attun has hair of pure white, except for a dark forelock that appears to be courtesy of several of Attun's Fel relatives. Attun has but a single tattoo, a deep crimson stripe that bisects his face from forehead to chin. Attun wears a perpetual frown on his face that turns into a sneer when he finds someone weak or unchallenging.

Attun has no particularly distinctive pattern to the clothing he wears, preferring to dress practically or to fit in with the company he's keeping. His lightsaber is unmistakable though, formed from a single pure Arkanian Sabrata gemstone absolutely clear in color with the cyan ignition chamber designed to continually dance with a dim light from the inside.


Background:
Attun "Winter" Bek-Fel was perhaps born to have a chip on his shoulder. The Arkanian-Human half-breed was the product of the Imperial trade mission to Arkania, where a young cousin to the Emperor and Imperial Knight named Morghan Fel fell into a relationship with Attun's mother, a highborn woman who was the daughter of his Arkanian diplomatic counterpart. When diplomatic talks began to fall apart, Attun's grandfather Jaro convinced his mother to use her influence to manipulate the young royal. Sensing betrayal thanks to his Force training, Morghan became enraged and struck at the woman and mutilating her with searing arcs of force lightning. Despite being immediately regretful, the diplomatic mission was compromised and relations between the two people turned chilly until they spilled over into a short, uncompromising conflict leading to the Arkanian's full capitulation and surrender.

Despite her grievous wounds, Attun's mother survived her ordeal and discovered herself with child. Unfortunately for her, Attun's birth reveal genetic abnormalities within her family's bloodline. Disgraced, outcast, and in the heat of the desperate conflict between the Empire and her people, the Bek family fled their homeworld on a small freighter to find a new home. For several years the funds of several lifetimes of successes sustained the family, until a series of disastrous trading missteps brought the family to its knees.

In dire financial straits, Attun's grandfather made various deals and counter-deals with several Hutts to refinance and refurbish the dilapidated freighter Jolly Man that the family lived in. The deals were arranged to assure mutual betrayal and ultimate infighting between the Hutts who held the Bek financial markers, which is exactly what happened. Rival Hutt bounty hunters pursued the freighter and fought with each other in a wash of bloodshed for several months until Attun's mother was captured by the Hutt crimelord Zorka Mano. Filled with rage and over the objections of his grandfather, Attun left the safety of his family freighter and began a one man war against the Hutt's operations which led him squarely into the middle of an Imperial black ops also aimed at the Hutt's interference in Imperial shipping.

Attun became uneasy allies with the Imperials, eventually falling in love with Koreline Veem, the daughter of Imperial Grand Moff Veem. The operations took a dangerous turn when Attun and Koreline themselves became captives of the Hutt's bodyguards, only to escape just ahead of an explosion which destroyed the hidden space station the Hutt used as a hideout, presumably killing Attun's mother as well.

Despondent, Attun turned to drink and stims to make the pain go away. Eventually Koreline found him in a broken down jungle cantina and helped him get sober. Then, using her connections as the Grand Moff's daughter, Attun was given a new identity and commissioned as an Imperial Pilot. Together the two lovers planned a life, except for the attention of Nyna Calixte, lover of Veed and jealous of the attentions of the father toward his only daughter.

Attun and Koreline were drafted into dark Force training program that Calixte had established using Imperial Knight protocols and off of any official record. Unlike the more established Imperial Knights though, Calixte's training program had few safeguards against falling to the dark side and the group was rife with defection and insubordination. Attun and Koreline secretly wed and got with child while their Force trainer and Calixte's creature, Mora Kol, continued their "education." Finally Attun was pronounced suitable for duty, while Koreline was heavy with child. Ill at ease to part from each other, Attun resisted but was coaxed into action by his wife to "do his duty."

Attun was sent to Caamas in advance of a major operation along with a squad of his fellow Imperial black ops force users and a mysterious robed Sith female known only as Darth Sadow. Through their efforts of sabotage and intelligence gathering, victory was assured; but Attun was nearly slain when one his fellow agents attempted to cut him down from behind with a lightsaber. Strangely the Sith known as Darth Sadow saved him and slew the betraying Imperial, and then revealed herself to be Attun's mother, now fully converted to the dark side. Sadow sought to convert Attun and mocked his emotions toward Koreline as a weakness. The two fought and Attun was disarmed and at his mother's mercy, but she let him live and disappeared.

Attun was troubled as he returned, haunted by dark thoughts and images of his mother. Things were not improved when he returned to Bastion and found Koreline on her deathbed after giving birth to their son. Worse, switched by Calixte's agents, the child shown to him looked nothing like him. Enraged by her betrayal and over her pleas of innocence, Attun left Koreline to die alone.

Calixte might not have intended what happened next, as Attun slew most of the deck crew manning the Predators and several of his fellow agents. Stealing one of the dark-winged fighters, Attun flew through hyperspace to the Sith Temple to join their ranks. Once there his mother embraced him, before backhanding him across the room. His true training had begun.

Personality:
Attun respects no one, not even himself, because they cannot be trusted. Everyone, every kindness is a pretext for betrayal. He especially despises intimate relationships, relishing exposing them for the emotional fakery that are built upon. Attun seeks revenge, but his fury cannot find any targets. Instead he keeps his rage contained tightly, unleashing it like a sunstorm to destroy those that would oppose him or displease him.

Attun can be quiet much of the time, and then unleash vitriolic rants and fits of violence at the least bit of provocation. Attun is especially harsh on those that remind him of Koreline, delighting in unleashing the Force upon them to fracture their minds and lead them to madness.

Quote:
"Yes. Cry for me, beg me for mercy. Beg me so I might deny you, and let the blackness inside your own heart consume you."


Notes:
Winter is his call sign.

Though Attun is a Fel, he's unaware of the fact. His mother knows, and presumably his grandfather does as well if he's still alive. As far as he knows the reason his family left Arkania was because he wasn't "pure" enough to satisfy Arkanian society.

Consequentially, though Attun is truly more human than Arkanian he still refers to himself as Arkanian simply because visually he seems to look more Arkanian than baseline human.

Presumably, Koreline and Attun's child is still alive somewhere in the care of Imperial agents. For that matter, Attun left before Koreline died, so it's possible she got better and is lurking around as well. The freighter Jolly Man is still out there too, full of relatives that have all turned their backs on Attun and let him come to this.

Attun probably still have several Hutt bounties on his head, though the Hutts will probably be much more cautious about going against him directly any longer.

Equipment: TBA
 
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Sorry for my delay. I am reading posts and posting responses as I go.

Glad to see intrest!

Blackrat said:
Darnit. I have four different consepts brewing in my mind. I'll post short consepts so if you would tell me which you like best ShaggySpellsword, I can make full character submission. I like them all equally so I really don't have preference over any.

Sorry for my delay on this. I like the Gungan a lot. Not the one I would have picked, but now that I see him, I think he may be very neat.
 
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OnlytheStrong said:
Question about the Sith-Imperial War: The Jedi Order either surrendered and became Imperial Knights or are currently hiding.


Huh...that's not how it happened (as far as I can tell) at all. Is that what Wookiepedia says? I beleive it is.

That's not accurate. The Imperial Knights existed LONG before the end of the Sith-Imperial War. It was a sub-set of Jedi that felt that the Ossus project and continued trust of the Vong was foolish. They then swore alligience to the Emperor.

At this point in the story, the Jedi are dead or in hiding. They didn't really get a chance to surrender or join the Imperial Knights as the massacre on Ossus happened.

But that's already been mentioned...

Anyway, I think, time-line wise, I will start this game 1 year after the fall of Ossus. To the day. Perhaps with a ceremony celebrating the Year with No Jedi.

Keep the submissions coming. I will try and find time to read through them this week. I am closing submissions one week from today.
 
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I was trying to put in Kered's backstory that he was captured at the same battle that Kol was killed in. I'm stuck going off Wookieepedia and it appears to be inaccurate lol. So, I'm trying really hard, just not having much luck at it.
 

I've updated my character (top of page 3), but I've yet to find a good portrait of him. I guess Ithorians are a pretty unsexy species (There's no lack of Twi'Leks out there :D).

Anyway, I'd appreciate any comments. I'm pretty unfamiliar with the setting, though I've read up on the comics and Wookiepedia, so there are probably a couple of errors in there.
 

ShaggySpellsword said:
Sorry for my delay on this. I like the Gungan a lot. Not the one I would have picked, but now that I see him, I think he may be very neat.
Yeh. There's still one thing I don't understand about WotC reasoning. As somewhat nerdy SW know-it-all I would argue that the Sith Apprentice should have the Lightsaber Form talents but as it is now, I'm going to go increasing his Jedi Knight levels for another 4 levels so I can get Juyo and Vaapad forms. It's all about the flavor of those forms as they derive from user's inner rage and as such would work well with Gee's style of fighting. They are described as fast and furious, something I imagined Gee's fighting to be.
 

I'm off on holiday travel until sometime during the weekend in a few, I hope that recruiting lasts until that long so if there's some issue with my character (but you really, really want me to play*) I can address it. :)






*"I really, really want you to play James. Move along, nothing to see here..."
 

Moro'sai'Veris


Background:

Veris was discovered only relatively late in her life to be force-sensitive - at the age of 23 - and even this merely by accident (or the will of the Force).

Veris was born as a daughter to Moro'sai'Hirasi, the head of the Moro family, and therefore as a member of one of Devaron‘s most influential ruling families. However, at the age of 14 she deeply shamed her family by making her decision known to join the Kand'Vrabt, a minor spiritual sect preaching total pacifism and detachment from all worldy matters. For this she was denounced by her family and cast out.

Nine years later the Watchman for Devaron space, the Kel Dor Jedi Knight Rota Tlo, made a routine visit to the captial of Devaron, Montellian Serat, when he suddenly sensed a beacon in the force - Veris. In order to recruit her for the Order Rota persuaded Veris that her immense potential would go to waste on Devaron while it could be boon for the whole galaxy. The day he and the young Devaronian left the planet, the name 'Veris' was struck forever from the List of the Faithful by the Kand'Vrabt.

The next few years proved that this had been a wise decision as Moro'sai'Veris (away from Devaron she now used her full name again) learned with such speed and abilitiy to put many other students to shame. Inspired by Rota's example, who had relinquished his Watchman role in the meantime to become Veris‘ master, she aimed to become a Jedi Sentinel and Watchman. But to combat the Dark side, one has to understand ist nature and so Veris delved into the historical records of the Great Temple on Coruscant. There she studied the history of the New Jedi Order and, above all, the history of the man who had brought the Old Order to the brink of destruction. Darth Sidious. And though appalled by the turn of events, Veris couldn‘t help but notice how masterfully the whole plan to destroy the Jedi had been orchestrated.

Then the war came to the Galactic Alliance and the Jedi Order. As it was fought mainly by fleet actions, Rota and Veris rarely ventured forth from Ossus where they had relocated to for Veris' knighting and further training - only once or twice after the Sith had revealed themselves. But the war finally found them in 130 ABY when a combined Imperial-Sith fleet appeared over the Jedi Academy on Ossus.

Kol Skywalker‘s last stand made into the legends of the Jedi Order, but if Veris' story will ever be told, then merely as a warning for some younglings:

Moro'sai'Veris defended one of the smaller internal hangars of the Academy, both the hangar itsewlf and the approach to it. Being a lightsaber combatant of mediocre skill at best, Veris relied on her skill with the Force to hold Imperials and Sith back. Though it should have been easy to simply collapse the entrance and the corridors leading up to it, Veris never wasted a thought on this option as it would have meant dooming those students still fleeing from their chambers above, among them the Zabrak Tiran Kolar - a Padawan whom she had fallen in love with on Ossus. But soon enough she began to tire as the enemies just kept coming and her grasp on the Force weakened. With realizing that she would not be able to hold much longer, other feelings arose: Frustration over not being able to save Tiran Kolar, Anger over the Gallactic alliance that had simply fallen apart when needed the most and Hatred of the Sith that were taking all that she valued from her. When her control slipped at last, Veris embraced these feelings - and the slaughter began.
Whereas she had been previously content to obstruct passage and to slam her opponents around, now Stormtroopers and Sith alike were elecrocuted, choked and even torn apart in midair. So wild was Veris' force-fuelled rage that even Darth Nihil refrained from approaching her at first. Still, it served her purpose as nobody got past her to reach the shuttle - really nobody, neither Sith nor Jedi.
Master Tlo wisely realized that eventually her body would give out under this massive misuse of the Force - what he did not realize was how far Veris had already fallen to the Dark Side: His lifeless body joined the countless other strewn around the hangar entrance.
When it became apparent that the Jedi's last semblance of rational thought would soon slip away as her body burned itself out, Darth Nihil finally made his move and Veris a simple offer: Life (as a Sith) or Death.

The Jedi Moro'sai'Veris' last conscious thought was to choose life, not because she feared death, but to finish certain matters still left open. Dath Nihil then force-slammed her into a wall and thus robbed Veris of the consciousness that had maintained her dark rage.

And so the Sith Moro'sai'Veris once again forsook her former life, with one notable exception: she never forgot her studies in the Jedi Temple on Coruscant, never forgot how one man, one single man, had brought the mighty Jedi Order close to extinction.

Veris has been rumoured to have somehow enticed the dread Sith Assassin Darth Pungeus to teach her his rare path of mastery during her training on Korriban, but this cannot be confirmed as the Darth has been slain - beheaded with his own lightsaber - by an unknown assailant entering the academy grounds unseen, presumeably one of the few surviving Jedi Masters.


Appearance:

A very attractive Devaronian, Veris has none of the tattoos usually expected from the Sith, especially the born ones, as they would only hinder her foremost purpose as a Sith Infiltrator. (For this she even carries a Jedi lightsaber plundered from Ossus.) The only visible mark the Dark Side has left on her are the sulphur-yellow eyes. Still, Veris has paid the price for her body has been heavily damaged by the Dark side channeling on Ossus, robbing her of much of her previous vitality and strength.


Characterization:

Though generally a cold and dispassionate being, Veris can easily fake otherwise. Able to easily discern moods and mirror and/or exploit them, she has proven very useful as an infiltrator. She only comes really alive when she uses the Force, for whatever purpose she deems necessary (or fun) - like torture.

Darth Nihil has in the past functioned as a mentor-of-sorts, not due to any twisted feelings or such, but because he realized her potential worth and the common origin they share - coming as outsiders into the New Sith Order. As a true Sith he will cast her aside once he sees no more use for her, of course.


Sith Creed: Treason (Veris has repeatedly betrayed everything she believed in at that point: her family, the Kand'Vrabt sect and the Jedi Order, plus she even killed her own master.)


[sblock=Moro'sai'Veris]Moro'sai'Veris
Female Devaronian Jedi 1/Scoundrel 1/Scout 5/Jedi Knight 1/ Sith Apprentice 1
Force 10; Destiny ??
Init +5; Senses Perception +14
Languages Basic, Devaronese, Kel Dor, Zabraki, Sith
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Defenses Ref 22 (flat-footed 21), Fort 22, Will 26
HP 30+d6+5d8+1d10+d10+9, Threshold 22
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Speed 6 squares (walking)
Melee unarmed +5 (1d6+3)
Melee lightsaber +7 (2d8+3)
Base Atk +6; Grp +7
Atk Options
Special Actions Natural Curiosity
Force Powers Dark Rage, Farseeing, Force Grip (3), Force lightning (4), Force Slam (2), Force Stun, Force Thrust (2), Mind-Trick (3), Move Object (2), Negate Energy, Rebuke (2), Sever Force, Surge
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Abilities Str 8, Dex 12, Con 12, Int 16, Wis 20, Cha 16
Talents Improved Stealth, Hidden Movement, Total Concealment, Fool‘s luck, Clear Mind, Force Camouflage, Force Stealth
Feats Weapon Proficiency (Lightsaber, Simple), Force Sensitivity, Force Training (4), Skill Focus (Use the Force), Skill Focus (Persuasion)
Skills Deception +17, Gather Information +12, Knowledge (Galactic Lore) +12, Perception +14, Persuasion +17, Stealth +17 (may re-roll) [Force Stealth], Survival +14, Use the Force +17
Possessions Lightsaber, personal (red), Lightsaber (green)
Credits 500+4500+200=5200 Cr - 1500 Cr (Pers. LS)[/sblock]
 
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