Lela
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Dr Midnight said:
No no, "he'd" left the room. It's just telling in flashback what he did when he learned. I've added some clarify-ey stuff to the paragraph.
Okay, now that makes so much more sense. Thanks Doc. You rock.
Metus said:Hmmmm. I think Raelin overreacted. Either that or he's a wussy boy. In any case, whilst I'm not overly fond of Jamison, I'm sure if those two come back looking for trouble Vek can kick them into another plane of existence. So here's to that. And here's to my new vorpal sword! ::raises glass::
::Raises glass, sloshing pink lemonade:: "Here, here!"
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