The Adventures of the Knights of Spellforge Keep- UPDATED 6/6

[Metus]

Well I'm not sure what to make of that. I guess that was good... for me? Kizz should've never kicked me out! That was their comeuppance!

The party was put away rather efficiently though, weren't they? I'm also curious as to how the players reacted, if that really happened. Very good update nonetheless. Thanks for the heads up, Doc.

 

[Ziona]

That... was pathetic! (The hero's, not the story hour)

I haven't peeked in here for awhile (having moved into a house where internet connections were not available in our neighborhood), and I'm pretty surprised by what I'm reading...in Tsunami's words..."whoa."

I agree that the Knights were pathetic in this battle...it would never have happened that way, or at least, speaking on behalf of Kizz, she would never have just stood there and died.

Very nice writing Doc, and you are in control of the characters in your story, but speaking from my character's point of view, there's no way she would have just given up like that. She was far too powerful for such an ending. She would have gone out casting.

And I have to agree with Celtavian, that the ending was rather creepy and eerie. (In the Mouth of Madness? Love that movie!)

Oh, and one more thing...

Originally posted by Dr. Midnight
“Vek,” Kizz whispered, the wind taken out of her. The spell in her hand fizzled away as her concentration blew apart like leaves before a gale. Vek, oh gods, Vek, he’s back and he’s on their side HE’S ON THEIR SIDE… She watched in horror as he walked forward, brandishing his sword.

Now THAT's a reason to give up hope, (just not a reason to lay down and die).

Great job, Doc!

 

[Lela]

So Doc. When's the next update?

 

[Nail]

...what she said.

Gotta let those creative juices build again, eh? (...if you know what I mean, and I think you do.)

 

[Neverwinter Knight]

I agree that the Knights were pathetic in this battle...it would never have happened that way, or at least, speaking on behalf of Kizz, she would never have just stood there and died.

Very nice writing Doc, and you are in control of the characters in your story, but speaking from my character's point of view, there's no way she would have just given up like that. She was far too powerful for such an ending. She would have gone out casting.

Were you not playing on the night of the final battle, Ziona? If you were playing, what happened to the knights there - one fatal moment of "To hell with tactics" or what ???

 

[Breakstone]

Great writing Doc!

I loved that picture of Erasmus, and Metus returning was a great quick-twist.

But where's Tsunami?

By the way, your writing as of late has been superb. The imagery of, well, everything was awesome.

However, you may want to edit in an appearance of Crow into the battle. He just sort of... appeared, unless I missed something.

Keep up the great writing, Doc!

 

[Celtavian]

Re

Doc,

Are you just writing the characters now? The players aren't actually playing the game anymore? Or is it only Kizzlorn's player that didn't show up? What's going on? I would like to know if I am reading a purely storybook ending, or were the players playing with you interpreting events.

I'll read the end either way, but I would like to know.

 

[Ziona]

Re: Re

Doc,

Are you just writing the characters now? The players aren't actually playing the game anymore? Or is it only Kizzlorn's player that didn't show up? What's going on? I would like to know if I am reading a purely storybook ending, or were the players playing with you interpreting events.

I'll read the end either way, but I would like to know.

I didn't play in the final battle, giving Doc creative licence over the actions of Kizzlorn. I just would have had her react differently to everything (except maybe when she saw Vek!)

 

[Wee Jas]

Well, I made Erasmus and Metus... but we are lucky that Vek wasn't there too. Squaring off against 3 of my characters? Oh man, I would need to run another 2 of my PCs just to hope to win

hehe..

 

[Talix]

Sigh...