The Antigrol Tide (OOC)

[unleashed]

Well you seem to be running your own conversation here Mallak, so I won't interfere, as she hasn't answered Colmarr either time he's asked the very same question.

 

[Mallak]

Sorry about that. She may have answered you, but then the captain showed up. Feel free to chime in at any time. Now that she's begun talking, perhaps she'll answer more questions if they are put to her?

 

[Brother Shatterstone]

Mallak,

Sure, please contact me if you feel the need. I’m always glad to be of assistance.

BS

 

[unleashed]

Sorry about that. She may have answered you, but then the captain showed up. Feel free to chime in at any time. Now that she's begun talking, perhaps she'll answer more questions if they are put to her?

Well the first post covered that as he introduced her to the captain when he asked that time...after which he also introduced himself...that's why I made the second post asking again as none of it was covered in your overview except for the pitcher. I still don't know if he's introduced himself either.

 

[Mallak]

Well the first post covered that as he introduced her to the captain when he asked that time...after which he also introduced himself...that's why I made the second post asking again as none of it was covered in your overview except for the pitcher. I still don't know if he's introduced himself either.

I'm confused. From my (and Naomi's) persepective, everything you've posted as Colmarr saying has been said. You introduced her to the captain, you asked some questions, and you introduced yourself. She responded by giving her own name, and asked what to call people. Now, that question was directed at Malachi and the captain, not you nor Magyar since you both had already given your names. Looking back, I realize that was kind of vauge, so I've edited it.

Then, you whispered your question to her at the same time the captain asked his question. She chose to respond to the captain, and now stands waiting for a verdict or more questions.

Does that clear things up? If no one has posted by this evening (that is, later this evening), I'll continue on with the conversation with words from the captain. I just wanted to give people time to jump in and say things if they chose.

 

[unleashed]

I'm confused. From my (and Naomi's) persepective, everything you've posted as Colmarr saying has been said. You introduced her to the captain, you asked some questions, and you introduced yourself. She responded by giving her own name, and asked what to call people. Now, that question was directed at Malachi and the captain, not you nor Magyar since you both had already given your names. Looking back, I realize that was kind of vauge, so I've edited it.

Then, you whispered your question to her at the same time the captain asked his question. She chose to respond to the captain, and now stands waiting for a verdict or more questions.

Does that clear things up? If no one has posted by this evening (that is, later this evening), I'll continue on with the conversation with words from the captain. I just wanted to give people time to jump in and say things if they chose.

Except for the fact that when he introduced her to the captain he prompted her to tell them what brought her out onto the water. So yes it was kind of vague, as she didn't react to the prompting and he only introduced himself after that...doesn't matter I'll just go and remove the prompting and change the second post to make it all fit better with events as they've happened.

I'm sure I'll ask some stuff at some point soon, when I get done with my edits.

Edit: Edits done, tell me if they screw something up, I don't think they do, but...

 

[Mallak]

NO NO NO! Don't change your post! Oh, dear...You're right, she didn't react to the prompting, but that was purposeful! She didn't react to the prompting. She ignored it, either intentionally or through circumstance (but it was intentional on my part). I fear, though, that I may be too late to stop you from changing your post...

Edit: If you can, change your posts back? I still don't understand why you changed them in the first place.

 

[unleashed]

NO NO NO! Don't change your post! Oh, dear...You're right, she didn't react to the prompting, but that was purposeful! She didn't react to the prompting. She ignored it, either intentionally or through circumstance (but it was intentional on my part). I fear, though, that I may be too late to stop you from changing your post...

Edit: If you can, change your posts back? I still don't understand why you changed them in the first place.

Sure no problem I've changed them back, they may not be word perfect but I think they're pretty close (well except I've left some of his added thoughts in the second post as they make sense considering the events he's just seen). Sorry for editing without approval.


Now lets see if I can clear up the reason for the changes for you (the first post, well I have no idea what I was thinking, just a little too enthusiastic to make events fit as I saw them I guess ).

The problem was that the captain was there all the time Colmarr spoke, so the sequence of events didn't make sense. I expected the captain to effectively repeat Colmarr's question pretty much right after she asked the captain's name, and in the same post. By leaving the captain's response out of the first post it looked like you wanted input from others (which obviously wasn't the case).

Thus the reason why I changed my second post to just a thought as your second post was effectively a continuation of the first as it took nothing new into consideration (again like the first post Naomi didn't even register Colmarr speaking with something as simple as turning her head slightly in his direction or a brief nod).

Does that make sense?

 

[Brother Shatterstone]

Sorry for editing without approval.

Am I going to have to take you out back and smack you around a few times?

(Sorry, I'm really leaving the thread... Just a really slow night.)

 

[unleashed]

Am I going to have to take you out back and smack you around a few times?

(Sorry, I'm really leaving the thread... Just a really slow night.)

Yes BS, I think you are.