The Blade of Phoee (Updated 12/08/08)

Lost - IV

Blood dribbled from an endless number of wounds. The fields surrounding the cathedral, the Black Spire, usually a light brown in the cool autumn sun were stained deep crimson from the spilt blood. The sun was rising on the second—no, third, or was it the fourth?—day of ceaseless battle.

Tierun stood in the center of the writhing mass of death, wounds weeping from beneath the tattered robes clinging to his lithe form. Around him, a handful of his army remained, pressed into a tight circular perimeter. Glancing over the forms, he could see the dark horde of orcs swarming, like rabid beasts, around other bastions of humanity in the tumult of war.

Somehow, the band of humans had weathered days of hard battle, exhaustion seemed their greatest foe. Exhaustion was the bringer of death here on the battlefield. Once a man slipped even close to its unconscious borders, his life would be extinguished by any of the beasts constantly poking and prodding. For those beasts, exhaustion just meant being shifted away from the first rank; a constantly revolving and constantly refreshed wall of death.

But the humans had lasted several days now, an eternity of sleeplessness. Most importantly, Toq had been delivered to his goal. Tierun stared upward, marking the lighter speck of shadow against the pitch-hued walls of the Spire. There, Toq hung or clung, still fifty feet from the jagged tip of the structure. Hundreds of feet the priest had climbed, no doubt with aide from some type of spell. The man was unburdened, save for his bastard sword, a religious medallion, and a pack of rations.

Tierun smirked. Today was the last day of battle, he knew it as he felt and saw the warming rays of light crest the wall of earth to the east. Today, Tierun would join his ancestors beyond the war torn world of his life. Hopefully, it would be an existence of bliss and contentment. Hopefully, he mused, this life would end quickly and painlessly.

A shout ahead brought Tierun’s attention back to reality, back to the dying surrounding him. The farmer bellowed in pain, doubling over as a vicious falchion rent through his stomach and through his spine, severing the cord in a deft move.

Tierun’s arm reacted instantaneously, flipping the barbed chain forward. The jagged edges snapped like a viper attacking, shredding the flesh of the dead farmer and slamming into the face of the charging orc. The ugly brute shrieked in rage, the spikes finding purchase across his porcine visage and more painfully, within his eyes.

Howling, the beast fell backward, pulling the chain tight but Tierun shifted his weight, turning the chain with the revolution and taking several layers of flesh along for the ride. The chain flew left, Tierun released a little more of its length, and it pummeled into the next attacking orc.

The first orc fell to its knees, eye-less sockets gaping angrily about for some foe aside from the impenetrable darkness. Another of its kin stepped to the fore, ending the beast’s hopeless search.

The general wrenched again on the chain, snaking the rabid metal through the air toward the replacement. It impacted, just short of the mark, as a young male stepped in to fill the line. The sudden interruption redirected the chain, looping the weighted end around the boy’s neck and projecting the deadly weight toward the general. Tierun dropped to the ground, pulling the chain with but not before the solid end smashed into another soldier’s head.
Behind, the man dropped allowing two orcs to flow inward through the gap. And ahead of the general, the child’s head disconnected under the sharp strain of metal. Tierun struggled to stand, caught off guard by the horror stricken head that rolled to a stop mere feet from him. The child’s eyes lolled about impossibly inside the skull, blame and pain engraved in the flesh.
In that split-second, the human-crafted bastion of protection around the general was severed, split in twain by a line of savages and brutes, quickly working to extinguish the fires of hope.

Tierun screamed with rage, leaping to his feet, but the sharp bite of metal ripped through his arm, severing the limb at its midpoint[1]. A burst of blood sprayed across the ground and into the air as he collapsed to the ground.

Today, I will die, the general admitted silently to himself. The sudden rush of blood had left him light-headed and accepting of the fate. “But, I will take you all with me!” he screamed as he wrapped the spiked chain around his torso. The razor edges dug into his flesh as the chain was looped about his shoulder and down the bleeding stump of an arm. He shook the new appendage, and though the edges vibrated, they would not release their hold upon his flesh.

The general smiled wickedly, kicking out and shattering a porcine nose. More of the beasts encircled, mixing allies and foes. The general lifted his left arm to serve as a counter balance and spun. The chain danced off the ground, creating a whirling wheel of death and pain as he fell into the motion. Around, the heads and appendages of his enemies and allies exploded with agony. The ranks fell back away from the wheel of death, caught by utter surprise.
More wounds dumped blood down the general’s twisted form, holes opened by the chain itself. The ranks of orcs stood outside his reach, dumbfounded. But the surprise couldn’t last and the ranks parted slightly. Two ogres filled the gap, lifting giant bows and aiming at Tierun.

Tierun laughed maniacally, breaking into a run. The chain whipped outward, shattering one of the composite bows and raking across the ogre’s chest. It bellowed, a cry short-lived as it fell to the ground utterly dead. The second ogre unleashed its projectile, which flew true over the short range and sprouted from Tierun’s chest.

The general screamed and brought his chain twirling around the giant’s legs. The blades along the lengths rotated quickly, severing the meaty thigh. The ogre shrieked and fell backward.

Pain echoed across the general’s mind as he turned, to find two more archers at the other end of the circle. He charged toward them but kept his mind at the rear where he heard, as he had expected, the twang of more bowmen. Tierun dropped to his knees, pivoting into a roll. The chain-arm scraped the wet earth, creating a wall of dirt and dust for the orcs. His momentum carried him through the legs of an orc, his chain whipping above his head and severing those legs.

Tierun leapt upward, chain still in motion, killing as many of the beasts as he could. His body arched up, over the heads of his foes and he brought his legs around in a mid-air flip. With his feet, the fighter broke the faces and necks of two opponents as he landed. The circling chain followed him, taking those directly around.

As Tierun felt the earth rush at him, he felt also the last warmth flee his dying body. The chain whipped about limply one last time, before it joined its master useless and broken upon the ground.
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[1] - More shades of Star Wars ;)
 

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Pawns

Toq climbed through the arcing window, as deftly as a spider upon a beautifully spun web. The priest knew the Black Magus would be waiting, such had been foretold. It would be a definitive meeting in the history of humanity, a time to finally throw off the shackles of divinity; at least a time to remove the shackles crafted by gods and goddesses which had no right to claim leadership over humanity. Those gods and goddesses that had sat idly by and allowed the great snake Nar’sra to kill Guymardt, the father of humanity, would be removed. All of divine history, all of the betrayal, all of the bloodletting had been but mere steps along the path of coalescence of purpose for the human race and their guiding influence, Ara’kull.
Today was a day of fate. Today was a day of history. Today, Toq’s life would finally have purpose and meaning. Yes, all of it would mean something after today.

The cleric stood waiting quietly for the meeting he knew had been prearranged by fate. And without disappointment or surprise, the Black Magus stepped out of the long shadows of the Spire.

“It is time, Magus.” Toq began, holding his symbol at arm’s length. “It is time for a regime change.”

I am aware of your god’s plans, child, the voice drifted across the shadow, condescending and emanating from all directions. The voice was soft and feminine, quite the surprise to Toq who had always assumed the Magus was male. The tone was also distant and cold, a voice tainted by the corruption of death. For several long centuries, I have held the separate kingdoms together, per the desires of Ara’kull. For an eternity, I have reigned and given my tribute to your, to our god. I have a few words to leave you with, of course, once you have given to me the payment I am due.

She paused, sliding gracefully into the light. Spiked armor, blacker than shadow, was stretched taught across her small frame. She moved noiselessly, despite the encumbrance, and moved right to the edge of the extended holy icon. She batted it away, almost playfully before flowing directly into Toq’s arms. Her hands, covered by gauntlets tipped with razor-like talons, closed strongly about his arms.

You did bring my payment, didn’t you priest?” The words were drenched in the scent of rot and decay, her face hidden by a demonic mask with eyes flickering the color of dying embers. Toq shuddered; he was sure he did not wish to see the face hidden behind the mask.

“It is,” the priest replied turning away, “in my satchel. My lord fulfills his promises, fiend.”
Of course he does, priest. Of course he does.” She stepped a pace back, releasing the priest’s arms. He could nearly hear the smile stretch the decaying flesh behind the mask as he reached into his satchel, rummaging about for the payment.

Toq pulled his arm out quickly, throwing an object toward the Black Magus. Her hands shot out with preternatural speed, to enclose a vial that exploded within her clutches. She screeched, drawing away as the sanctified waters scorched her flesh and armor.

TREACHERY!!!” she shrieked, pulling back defensively as the priest’s bastard sword slipped between the plates of mail. The sword bit into her torso and burst into flames, righteous, sanctified light. She hissed again, drawing back to disappear into the shadows.

Mark my words, priest. You and I are naught but pawns to your god. Pawns manipulated in the greatest of games. You will watch your back, for when you least expect it, I shall be there. In the darkest of hours, upon the darkest of nights, I will wait for you. And that night, much like tonight, I will not retrieve my due. But I will rise again, devouring your soul and teaching you the truth of torture.

A sudden flaring of light drew both attentions to the center of the spire. There, between the cracks of masonry, energy poured into the room. The energy flared, burning white to blue to red, like a great, angry pyre. It blazed golden, burning the priest’s eyes and singing the Black Magus’ flesh. Both yelped in pain, flinching away from the light.

I WILL NOT TOLERATE YOU. The command was direct and resonated within their minds. I WILL NOT TOLERATE YOUR GOD OR HIS MACHINATIONS. Anger, pure, clear and precise anger jabbed each pawn. They fell to their knees, skin and mind aflame with pure agony. Within their minds’ eyes, the flames reappeared, uniting into the form of a beautiful woman. The flames were her body, flickering and dancing, licking the cool air. Blue flames burned where her eyes would have been, piercing shadow and veil, piercing truth itself.

She reached out and with a thought drew both creatures into her grasp. The grip, tight, was hot and cool, painful and soothing all at once. The Black Magus shrieked, her undead flesh slowly turning to ash and soot.

FOR YOU THAT ARE DEAD, TO DEATH YOU SHALL RETURN. FOR YOU THAT WILL BE KING, A PRISON YOUR EXISTENCE WILL BE IF ARA’KULL FEELS NEED FOR YOU. TO SERVE AS PAWNS IS TO DIE AS PAWNS, SACRIFICED FOR THE END-GAME.

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A sudden still calmed the raging battlefield. From the top of the dark spire, bright light flickered and threatened to consume the precipice. Red, white, and blue blistered outward from the black-hued spear.

Each orc, ogre, troll and even human, what few remained, stared at the sight, unable to look away. Seconds transmuted into minutes of perfect peace and solitude. The light vanished, flowing back into the black walls.

The Dark Spire exploded, stone and debris being forced from the structure in a deafening burst. Every living being below screamed, cowering and covering their heads as a torrent of energy rippled out from the spire.

Then all was movement, dodging and pivoting, ducking and dying. The debris plummeted quickly, squashing life from those that were too slow or just plain unlucky.

After mere seconds, a dusty mist had arisen across the battlefield, keeping the wounded and tentative peace.
 

Well, I hoped you enjoy the updates I crafted for you today! :D
Its my birthday week...does the happy dance....I'm not sure when I'll get to updating again...but aside from my own personal stuff, I don't have much on my plate at the moment.

With luck, it'll be sooner rather than later.

So as SJ would say: Cheers!

~Fune
 


you're not the only one less than sure. Yeti wasn't entirely certain...at least, that's what he said after I posted them. Maybe I'll clarify a bit.

Before the current king (or emperor...or tyrant), Toq Arma Dunn, came to power, Norum da Salaex had been ruled by an entity calling itself the Black Magus. The Black Magus (generally thought to be a man...although it was never truly seen in public) ruled for upwards of one thousand years. Of course, you all know that it was a woman as evidenced above.

The Black Magus had conquered the preceding kingdoms (there were two of them): Norum and Salaex...thus the title of the continent: Norum da Salaex. At the disposal of the Black Magus, were all of the "evil" races. And she built her stronghold in the center of the continent, to better tighten her iron grip around the people.

So, these Lost sections as well as the Pawns section are about the change of rulership that occured almost six hundred years prior to the current year within the main Story Hour. The myth regarding King Toq Arma's rise to power claimed that he vanquished the Black Magus in a great explosion. Both of their bodies fell to the world, broken and lifeless. Ara'kull intervenes and ressurects Toq, for the human warrior is not only the King but the first priest of the church, as well.

I am a big fan of needing to know the history of a world...so, it becomes pertinent. And I just felt it necessary to go back and show a bit of the legend...because maybe everything wasn't quite what it seemed.

Eh....now I rant. I may as well have just written a new update! :D

My birthday is Friday and THANKS!

~Fune
 

Thanks for the explanation, Fune. I thought it was something along those lines - and I should really have gone back to look at the background info you posted at the beginning of the thread to refresh my memory, but, what can I say ... I'm lazy! :p
 

Our little Funeris is on his way home, and plans on having Thursday & Friday off as well.
So I will be bugging him to death for updates, and if you all want to bug him please do so.
hehe
Stuck at work for another 4 hours......
Yeti
:cool:
 

No problem HalfOrc HalfBiscuit! (I'm lazy too) :D

Yes, the yeti has already demanded three updates from me (one for here, one for The Heroes of Marchford, and then one for his SH Valus+20). He had some requirement that they all be teasers...4-500 words each.

Sigh

No rest for the wicked.

WAIT!!!! What's that I hear?? Is that...no, it couldn't be...the sound of an incoming update?!?!?!

;)

~Fune

P.S. - Its 478 words...just so you know it qualifies.
 

Chapter 4: From Here to There

VISITORS - Part I

Cassock awoke to the pounding of rain amidst the dense foliage of the forest. He shuddered, cold gripping his bones as he rolled to a sitting position. The house or building—Cassock couldn’t distinguish for sure—had been abandoned for some number of years. Age had crumpled most of the roof, devouring supports and braces, causing the roof to collapse into the two levels below it. The vengeful timber had driven downward, pulling the lower floors down to the earth between the foundation walls.

It was between those solid, stone walls that the company now slept, a fitful and fevered rest brought on by not just the fatal battle they had encountered, but the unseasonable weather which now wrapped its tendrils tightly around their throats; draining the heat and life from their bodies. A slight portion of the roof had survived the assault of age, a thin border that trapped a gaping view into the foliage and beyond, into the stars. Beneath the edges of roof, they slept.

The fire in the center had not survived the battle with the downpour and later with the snow that now rested quietly upon the foundation. The snow itself was succumbing to the fresh downpour battering the ground. Quickly, the white was vanishing into a puddle spreading through the debris along the floor.

Soon, they would all be sleeping in a pool of hypothermic death.

“Unless I wake them,” Cassock stated to no one in particular. Aramil was leaning against the far edge of the foundation, with a clear view through a hole into the surrounding wood. But the rogue had fallen asleep, whether it occurred before his shift ended or after the mourning half-elf had decided to watch alone all night, Cassock could not be sure. From the obviously distraught mental state of the rogue, probably the latter, he decided.

Cautiously, the priest moved around to wake the rogue first. When the priest glanced through the large hole, he noted a land of white and gray dancing between the mottled brown of wood and the still unchanged green of the leaves. It was an extraordinarily crisp and pristine view. He reached for the rogue’s shoulder when a large shadow stretched across his body.

Cassock spun, a massive form negating the hole completely. It was a sickly green-brown in hue, larger than four men strapped together and had a wicked under-bite. The teeth—giant fangs—lacerated the lips they were held taught against. A dim intelligence pierced the deep brown of its eyes and it opened its maw. “FOOD!!!” the beast bellowed, lifting the half of a falling tree it used as a club. From behind the head of the beast, Cassock saw more—gigantic—shapes looming.

Ogre! the priest’s mind shrieked. He fell onto his back, scrambling away to draw his mace. “Attack!” he screamed, hoping to wake the others.
 


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