The Draknor

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A whole helluva lot?

How about 100 tons? The tarrasque is 130 tons; its a size category bigger, but has a lot less appendages.

 

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While doing my "30 minute review", I found a couple of typos in the draknor (bolded below).

The draknor is the larval form of an extraplanar monstrosity of unbelievable power. For reasons that remain an enigma, drankor eggs are deposited on the Material Plane, deep underground in secluded caverns near sources of great heat. When these eggs have incubated for a year, the larval draknor hatches and feeds on the source of heat until it reaches maturity, when it migrates back to the elemental planes. Adult draknors are never encountered on the Material plane, and no encounter with one on the elemental planes has yet been documented.

Though still in its larval phase, a draknor is a behemoth on the Material Plane, and a terror in combat. Draknors are usually hunted down and destroyed as soon as their presence is discovered. A draknor is intelligent enough to coordinate its many attacks between several different foes, and usea its tendrils to cause an earthquake before any creatures even get near its body.

For the reflect mind blast ability, I would not state that it is a line, for then it could hit an intervening creature. Maybe say simply that is redirected as a focused beam that strikes the original creature only?

Finally, I'd add the following (I know, we were supposed to cut text, not add it ):

A draknor's natural weapons are treated as epic weapons for the purpose of overcoming damage reduction.

 

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thanks. i caught "usea" and the epic DR thing already, but not the other items.