It's been a while since I've been able to post further praise, and in the meantime the story continues to evolve with ever-growing inspiration.
Many have said you should seek publication.
I will merely add this: a few years ago I read Guy Gavriel Kay's The Lions of Al Rassan and thought it an excellent historical fantasy that showed an admirable maturity since his Tigana (which was also good). I have also read the first three books of Brooks' Shannara series (long ago).
I believe this story, and the quality of its writing, is better than those.
I would put it on par with the imaginative depth and nuanced language of the mighty Jack Vance, or Fritz Leiber.
What's more, Sepulchrave, your writing inspires, and that is a rare thing indeed.
I have only silence left, as further words fail to capture the grandeur of the work you and your players have put to pencil, paper, and dice.
Thanks,
Warrior Poet