The Rape of Morne [Final Update]

[ForceUser]

Trumpets brayed, and Eadric led the charge across the dry bed of the Nund. In the van were Tahl, and Jorde with the standard, renegade Templars, Paladins and Penitents. They screamed, and the cry was taken up by the host which rode hard on their tails.

Ahma!

Haha! Now I'm going to have to watch Braveheart.

Sep, is a Penitent an Ex-Paladin in your campaign?

 

[Urbanmech]

Simply amazing. I'm blown away every time I read this story.

 

[tleilaxu]

how many sessions have you played from this point?

 

[Horacio]

WONDERFUL!

I'd wish I found the words to say how much I like your story, but I cannot. I can only say it's wonderful.

 

[Jeremy]

Charge------to the top of the list!

 

[Thorntangle]

Sooooo good it deserves a little bump.

 

[wolff96]

It constantly amazes me the heights to which this story hour can ascend.

While Eadric is beginning a monstrous campaign across the country (apparently under Nwm's watchful eye), Ortwin and Mostin lounge about on the Elemental Plane of Air.

What makes it amazing is that BOTH HALVES of the story come off as fascninating and dynamic. One would expect that from a tale about the mobilizing army, but your writing can make even a shopping trip -- for a gift to a parent! -- a joy to read.

Sepulchrave II: It is a pleasure, as always, when you update this story hour.

 

[jzashaedra]

if i might paraphrase wolffe... "real life"- those boring chunks of time between Sep's update's

 

[Warrior Poet]

Trumpets brayed, and Eadric led the charge across the dry bed of the Nund. In the van were Tahl, and Jorde with the standard, renegade Templars, Paladins and Penitents. They screamed, and the cry was taken up by the host which rode hard on their tails.

Ahma!

Chills ...

I couldn't have said it any better than Horacio ... and wolff96 ... and thorntangle ... and ...

Thanks and go on!

Warrior Poet

 

[Jarval]

Sepulchrave, just fantastic!