Time For Another Round Of Iron Dm!!!

First of all Wulf’s riddle was just amazing ~ nicely crafted. . . It was definitely better than the one Radiating Gnome came up with and that one was sweet too (though I think I have seen it somewhere before) So, score one for Wulf. . .

But the hooks, this part goes to Radiating Gnome. The combination of the strange occurrences in the town, and the trickster quicklings trying to fool the party into opening the gnome’s lair was superior to the “generic” hooks Wulf provided. Score one for Wulf. . .

And what about the Oval Door? While Wulf’s riddle was superior, and the idea of a cairn for a dead lover considered to be haunted or curse is a sweet idea – I had hard time accepting that there would be enough room in there for a hill giant – especially room her to fight and throw rocks – how was this place made again?

Also RG’s giantess seemed to have more personality because her origin and her disability. The hidden gnome lair covered by an illusion might be a bit cliché – but I can accept it more readily. Score another one for the ole Radiating Gnome

But Wulf’s use of the permanent image was cooler from the point of view of the Snow White-like image of the dead druid (which I was sad to see was gone) and also the quicklings using the illusion of treasure to draw people near was much more inventive in clever both from an “in” the scenario point of view and just a crafting a scenario point of view. Another one for the Wulfster.

But how did the dwarf get in there? Did he figure out the riddle, get in and not have time to close the door behind him to keep the giantess out? Why was the door large enough for a giant to pass through? The dwarf and the giantess seem kind of “stuck in” in this scenario, which unfortunately makes us subtract a point from Wulf.

But what about the beard? Wulf’s use of the beard was definitely stands out for “creative use” the idea of the quicklings making a game of placing the beard on the face of a PC to make the giantess split up her attacks and giving the party a better chance to beat her – while still sowing confusion is wonderful. I would love to use that idea.

As for the use of the staff of thunder and lightning, while Wulf’s was much more active than RG’s – I was not impressed by the use of it as a kind of trap for the pixie/quicklings – There was no attempt made to explain how the bard was able to make the staff behave that way. . .and it turning pixies into quicklings, while neat, really creates an insolvable mystery in the scenario.

But in the end, Radiating Gnome’s scenarios stands together better. As a whole it flows well and all the elements make more sense that how Wulf did it. . . I think both scenarios could be combined to make it even better – and I think a bunch of traps in the gnome’s lair once the door is opened could make a for a lot more hijinks!

Well, I guess this is kind of another upset. . .Radiating Gnome moves on to face Rune in the final round. RG, I have to admit I am surprised – if only because this scenario was MUCH MORE SUPERIOR to your last entry. . .

Wulf, thanks for playing and I hope to see you back the next time we game. . .
 

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Holy Cats

I didn't expect that at all.

Nem., thanks for your analysis and criticisms. There was a lot that was going on in Wulf's that I felt worked better than mine -- to begin with the riddle (you're right, mine was not original). As for the improvement from my first round entry to the second . . . I spent a lot of time reading over what the others had submitted in the first round, what was working and wasn't working, to try to get a feel for what the expectations were. In the first round I wasn't really aware of the scope and form our entries should take, so after I got going I had a lot of homework to do.

I felt lucky to get past the first round, and really lucky to get past Wulf.

-RG
 
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Ahh, congrats RG!

Undone by verisimilitude... I was concerned that my entry had more going on in the backstory than in the actual adventure-- and as it turns out, if I'd just explained the background a bit more, I might have pulled it off! Ack!

I confess I was juggling the hill giant right up until the very last minute-- inside or outside? inside or outside?

Good luck with Rune, RG... I count myself lucky to have gotten past the first round to begin with. But I think now with one 1W/1L on my scorecard I know much better what to do next time...

I would feel worse about it if I wasn't able to console myself with the fact that nemm just cost ol' Nail five bucks. Good luck with all that, nemmerle!


Wulf
 

Wow, that one caught me by surprise! At least this means Nail doesn't have to come mess me up with baseball bats and boot leather ;)

Wulf Ratbane said:
Good luck with Rune, RG...

Hey...what, you're rooting for him? :D

For what it's worth, Wulf, there are a ton of elements in that last adventure that I loved. I want to see a version of it that you aren't pressed for time to throw together!

Radiating Gnome: Congratulations! I look forward to seeing what other tricks you've got stored up that gnomish sleeve of yours...
 


I think this dwarf is cracking wise with me...;)

You may have Nail on your side, but I've got a...

I've got...

Hmmm...

I've got a halfling monk with a pyromaniac spider monkey...

A flamboyant half-orc bard who plays the flute...

Ya know what...nevermind.:D
 

Hey now!

Rune said:
I think this dwarf is cracking wise with me...;)

You may have Nail on your side, but I've got a...

I've got...

Hmmm...

I've got a halfling monk with a pyromaniac spider monkey...

A flamboyant half-orc bard who plays the flute...

Ya know what...nevermind.:D


Flamboyant half-orc bards have feelings too, thank you very much! :mad:

But I'm not one to hold a grudge. ^^ Good luck in the final round hot stuff!
 
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I'm curious how the "ingredients" are chosen. Are they the product of some extremely strange random word generator?! I like to season my random encounters with a bit of meaning or depth; spicing them with official Iron DM ingredients would be just right.
 


Radiating Gnome
and
Rune

Let me know about your availabaility. . .

The final round will be a little different - so I need time to prepare. . .
 

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