Sollir Furryfoot said:
Oh no, I simply confused the two in my head I think, it would make sense for Sin to have more offensive powers like that and I think Corrosion is alright, though I'll have to take a look at it as I recall it was somewhat overpowering. The explanation for her powers is fine, I was just wondering what in-game aesthetic affects there were/why those particular powers fit with the character mainly. I edited in a second part to the previous post with another qusetion for you, mind taking a look?
Figure that she came out looking more physically fit than when she went in of course. Like as if she'd spent the past year doing heavy exercise for a major marathon. Corrosion can be powerful, and I have to admit, for a lower level game, it might be a bit much. Perhaps swapping it out for Blast(Penetrating) would work better, and making Corrosion a big gun attack(IE an AP), by adding unreliable or something like that to it would work better.
It was just something that seemed interesting, and useful. She's a toned down version of a character I made, who killed her parents with her power. Needless to say, this version isnt anywhere near as dark. So, Corrosion fit for the darker image, and when I converted her to the lower power level, I considered it, and realized it probably still fit. But perhaps its best to avoid potential problems to swap it out and take Corrosion(later) as an AP and a big gun type of attack. Keeps everyone happy that way.
As to other aspects about her being crazy ... well, I figured in time there might be problems between the two facets of her personality, between Sin & Adriana. For now however, I figured that the problems are relatively low key, Ie conflict between the two at times on what they want. Whether they'll stay low key or grow, who knows? I could see it growing in time, and I can also see the two personalities merging together.
Figured its best not to get too heavily into that for now, leave it as a plotline that can be worked into the story later.
As far as why she went crazy in the first place ... that I'm still pondering myself. What triggered "Sin" to manifest? Perhaps thats something the scientists are still trying to figure out themselves. IE "this shouldnt have happened" can make for some interesting plotlines down the road as well. As to taking Precognition(Uncontrolled Flaw) ... I'd have to worm out the points, but it could work. That in the instant she tapped into her powers, she realized something that'd seriously injure her, and realized that as she was mentally, she wouldnt be able to handle it. So ... she created Sin, to help her handle the situation. IE a defense mechanism against some horrible event. But yeah ... I like the idea, I'll tweak her out.
CHANGES TO BE MADE: Changing Corrosion to Blast, swapping Total Fade for Penetrating. Adding Precognition(Uncontrolled Flaw). I'll find the points, don't worry.
I want everyone who wants to apply to have a chance of doing so, I know I'm not the fastest spotter of PBP games around here which is why there's a delay on choosing people.
