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Sollir Furryfoot said:RobotRobotI -> I'm so very sorry! It's funny to me because I didn't have anything nitpicky to say, and I guess between answering the other posts I forgot to mention that. I do have one small flavor qualm however, in that I think her background elements of being a young genius and becoming isolated is similar to Samnell's Joshua in some respect. I am still debating to myself whether they are too similar, but I do like her wanting to re-integrate into society and her strange personality as well.
I can easily tone down her intelligence. The idea wasn't that she was just a young genius, just that she had to maintain a good report card - I wanted the idea to be that it was the only 'work' she ever had to do in her life. I can take her Int down to 14 or even 12, if you think it'd help ease off of Samnell's character.

I don't really know how to change the isolation part, though, because I think it plays a big role in the person she's become since her super-powering and the plans she's got for her future.
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