Tsunami's Story Hour: Legions of the Damned! (Updated? Whaaaa?)

Breakstone

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Well, I figured now that I've actually got a steady group to write about, I might as well try out this whole Story Hour thing again.

So, anyway...

Kevin Breakstone presents...

a harrowing tale of the death-defying journey of a simple group of adventurers through nigh-impossible challenges...

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There we go, is that cheesy enough? :p
 
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Chapter One
A Fateful Introduction at the Wolf's Den...


Kenzo Otso was having no luck. He scratched his balding head as he glanced about the seedy bar properly entitled “The Wolf’s Den.” Surely, someone here must be desperate enough to accept his proposal. Maybe the barrel-chested bartender. Or the one-armed dwarf chugging pints of ale. Or even the mandolin-player picking strings in front of the fire place. No one else in the trading town of Crossing Winds seemed helpful.

Meanwhile, Keith Goodfellow rolled his eyes. “Sir Furivel,” he sighed to the immaculate elf sitting next to him, “I have sworn to your father to keep you protected, but I did not promise to follow you to certain doom. This bar… it’s much too true to its name. I don’t think Feridun would appreciate you being here.”

The elf scoffed. “Keith,” he spoke in Elven, “if you do not think you can take on a pack of dirty humans and a one-armed dwarf, then maybe you’re not fit to be my bodyguard?” Arudan Furivel gave the residents of the bar one single glance. “And anyway, there is one elf.

Keith followed Arudan’s gaze to the black-cloaked man sitting in the shadows of the corner. “Sir Furivel, you can’t even tell if that’s an elf or not. His head is covered by his hood.”

Us Elves know these things, Keith. Anyway, he’s much too refined to be a simple human.”

Keith rolled his eyes once again and turned to the bard strumming a mandolin. He let his imagination ride the currents of the music, until he was brought back to that night, long ago, the night of rain and fire. The night that his platoon was sent after the half-orc battalion of mages. The night he lost his entire-

The mandolin-player strummed faster.

The night that he met Feridun Furivel, the elven noble, and his son Arudan. Keith’s life had been saved, but at what cost? He was now trapped as the bodyguard- no, the chauffer of this elitist elf snob. The music reached a crescendo. Ears in the audience picked up the fast-paced concerto.

Keith could just leave Arudan here in this grime-ridden bar, surrounded by thugs who wouldn’t give a second thought about slitting the elf’s pale throat. The mandolin-player began the climax of the song, fingers dancing amongst the strings like so many pale sword-fighters.

In fact, Keith should just- no, no, it wasn’t the honorable thing to do. Keith Goodfellow was good to his word, and his name. The bard finished his score, and received a roaring ovation. Keith joined in on the applause.

As Keith returned to his deep ponderings, the bard wandered over to the bar to find a fresh drink waiting. “That,” bellowed the bartender, “was an amazing performance. What’s your name, son?”

“The name’s Bryant.”

“Well Bryant, feel free to come back any time. I think you even attracted a few new customers to this dump!” The bartender waved with a broad hand to the armor-clad man sitting next to the smooth-skinned elf, the old gentlemen decked in oriental clothing, and the black-clad fellow cloaked in shadows. “That last feller, he came in with a flock of crows. Darndest thing I’ve ever seen. The crows are silent, just like their master, and are perched up on the rafters. But, hey, as long as they don’t do their business on my business, I’m fine with anything.” Bryant and the bartender shared a chuckle. “Truly though, it’s the dwarf that I’m worried about. I don’t think he likes that armored feller staring at him.”

Keith didn’t realize he was staring at the dwarf until he was face to face with three solid feet of one-armed drunken rage. “YOU STARIN’ AT ME, BOY?” the dwarf let out a belch that shook the tavern. “WE DWARVES DON’ LIKE TA BE STARED AT, BOY!” Spittle splattered as the dwarf waved his stub-of-an-arm in Keith’s general direction.

Keith took a deep breath (not to be advised around belching dwarves), and confidently placed a hand on the dwarf’s armored shoulder, and stared deep into the pair of glazed brown eyes before him. “My friend, you’re drunk, and should definitely go home.”

The tavern went silent.

The dwarf stared back into a pair of bright, calm blue eyes. He stared for a long time.

“…yes, sir…”

Head lowered in shame, the dwarf stumbled out the door.

Kenzo Otso knew he had his man.

Kenzo approached Keith with a proposal. “I have been sent by a village to the east, which is being attacked by a ruthless gang of half-orc bandits. The odds of our survival is low, and the pay is minimal. There is absolutely no reason you should come with me, other than to protect the innocents of the village. Do you accept?”

If Keith hesitated, it did not show. “Of course.”

“Excellent. The villagers say that there have been twenty bandits in the past. We shall need at least three more skilled warriors to defend the town.”

I can wield weaponry better than any human you may hire,” Arudan boasted.

Keith translated for Kenzo, then added, “Eh, what he means to say is-”

“- No, I said exactly what I meant to say, as I always do! Are there any other elves here whom shall follow me into battle? Victory and honor shall be brought to your names.

The black-clad elf finally stood. “I am Uel. I shall join you.” After a chorus of caws from above, he added, “My brothers wish to battle, too. We once were scarred deeply by such bandits that you seek.”

Bryant put down his empty glass and announced in elven, “I am skilled in combat,” for effect, he added a strum of his mandolin, “and music, and magic. I, too, will join you.

“Very well then,” Kenzo spoke as if regretting every word, “we shall march to the village tonight. It will be a two day travel. The bandits attack in seven nights.”

There was a share of nods, and then with a flap of wings, a click of boots, and a single note, the five were gone.
 

Good stuff Tsunami! I usually don't read more than a handful of tried and true favorites, but you've got the two most important things so far: interesting characters and good writing. I'd love to read more :)

C.I.D.
 

Wow!

A reply! And praise!

Thanks, Cyronax!

I've got to give credit to my players- they made excelent characters. I love the interaction between Keith Goodfellow and Arudan Furivel.

And thanks for the compliment on my writing! It does the heart good to hear things like that...

Excuse me as I wipe a tear away from my eye...
 

Chapter Two
A Troubled Town


The trip to the village took two days. Arudan rode on his pony, while everyone else walked. During the days they traveled, and during the nights they ate Uel’s blessed berries, which his crows collected. Bryant played tunes to travel by as Kenzo filled them in on the village’s locale.

When he finally reached the village, Arudan was quite surprised. “It’s… tiny,” he whispered.

“Not all villages live up to your elven home, Sir Furivel,” said Keith. Arudan simply frowned, and urged his pony on.

The town truly was tiny, only a quarter of a mile across, and consisting of a total of thirteen houses, one of which was a mill, and one of which was a stable. A river cut through the northern section of town, severing it cleanly into two parts. Fields of wheat danced in the breeze.

As the five travelers journeyed into town, the villagers poured out of the wheat fields. A swarm of peasants soon surrounded the party, like a blizzard of moths drawn to a flame. There was an awkward silence, and then a scoff.

“These are who we’re trusting to defend our town?” a man, hidden in the crowd, cried.

A murmur spread through the villagers.

“Please, let me explain-” Kenzo Otso was interrupted by a woman’s shrill voice.

“Master Nivers has a point! I mean, look at this one!” Here she pointed to Arudan. “Skinny as a starving child!”

Keith Goodfellow, armor shining in the sunlight, stepped forward. “Now listen, folks! This kind man Kenzo has collected the best warriors he could find! I mean, look, you’ve got two elves who have journeyed from far and wide-”

Master Nivers again shouted, “Elves? He brought elves? Great Pelor, why not just hire a bunch of girls to protect us?”

Arudan simply smirked. “You petty commoners ought to be honored to fight alongside the great race of elves, let alone a noble such as myself! Why, here we have not only a master of the wilds,” he gestured to Uel, silent amongst his crows, and then to his fellow adventurers one by one, “but also a traveling minstrel with enough sense to learn the high language of my people. Not to mention my servant; a once mighty general who, through unfortunate happenstance, wound up in a state of servitude to me! Finally, by the measure of the man who brought us here, I would say we have a complete fighting force capable of taking well over twenty bandits! This town may be yours, but because you are weak we are here to teach you how to protect it.”

The silence was deafening.

Keith cleared his throat. “Well then, we shall be required to speak with your town leader.”

The crowd parted, and an old man, shakily clutching a warped cane, shambled forward. Kenzo introduced him as Grandfather Ash.

After a brief introduction, the villagers returned to their work in the fields and farms, and Grandfather Ash sketched a map of the village into the dirt road. “How,” he whispered between ragged breaths, “can we defend an entire village with only five warriors?”

“I shall train the men of the village how to use spears,” Kenzo announced.

“We should raise four towers, at these points,” Arudan drew in four squares on the northern and eastern sides of town.

“I can help with their creation,” spoke Bryant, pulling out his mandolin, “and my music will raise their spirits before the oncoming battle.”

“Good idea,” Keith thought back on his days enlisted, “A catapult should help. Two, if we have time.”

Uel cocked his head to the side, hooked nose pointing towards the northern forest. “Obad-Hai provides many defenses himself. I will search the forest with my brothers.”

“Very well then,” sighed Grandfather Ash, “the bandits attack on Friday. The always have, in the years before…” The old man stared off with faded eyes for a moment, then pulled himself back to reality. “Good luck, my friends, and may we all survive this very last attack…”

Kenzo, Keith, Arudan, Uel, and Bryant stood up, and glanced around the quiet village. A plum tree blossom floated down on a silent breeze to lay still at their feet. The peace would not last for long…
 

I guess I'll chime in again Tsunami......seems like I've been on the boards a lot these days :rolleyes:

Another good update, and I must say I love the setup so far. I see not a few nods to the Seven Samurai/Magnificant Seven, and I have always thought that such a plot is a great idea for an adventure.

And btw, the crows for companions are a cool touch.
C.I.D.
 

Cyronax said:
Another good update, and I must say I love the setup so far. I see not a few nods to the Seven Samurai/Magnificant Seven, and I have always thought that such a plot is a great idea for an adventure.

Yup, you've got me there! A few weeks before this campaign, I watched The Seven Samurai for the first time, and thought to myself, "Now that would make an awesome campaign!

This whole first adventure is similar to the movie, even down to a few of the NPC's you'll be meeting.

But after that, it's all original.

I swear.

:D
 

Chapter Three
Scouts!


And, indeed, the next few days were filled with work. Arudan lead a troupe of villagers in raising two towers. While most seemed educated to at least the point of conversation, one man stuck out like a sore thumb. Arudan was informed that his name was Hobbs (for the man did not speak himself), and was “a few bees short of a full hive.” Arudan later described Hobbs as having a “silly grin plastered to his face,” and being like sap, for “he’s quite annoying, but he sticks to you.”

While Arudan raised towers on the northern front of town, Bryant worked on defending the western. With his music raising spirits (not to mention winning him a large child fan-base), two towers were soon raised by joyful villagers. Although normally a traveler, Bryant had to admit the perks of living in a tight-knit community like this.

In the center of town, Kenzo Otso taught a select few to use wooden spears, leading them through rigorous exercises. Meanwhile, in the forests surrounding the small village, Keith and Uel were grazing the forest. Keith directed a few villagers in logging the trees of the forest, planning out the construction of the catapults in his head. Uel spent time with his crow “brothers,” training them to attack in formation. “Revenge will be ours…” he grimly spoke. A cacophony of caws seemed to agree.

The days passed. Friday loomed, a towering menace, cloaking the end of the week in a shadow of doubt and fear. During the days the adventurers labored, and during the nights they shared supper with Kenzo Otso in the village’s stables, run by a loyal man by the name of Aberdale. On one particularly memorable night, Kenzo, with eyes glazed by memory, told a tale of his last battle with his former army. His militia had been sent to defend their territories, but had been slaughtered by the opposing forces. Kenzo had witnessed the death of many a friend that fateful day, and had almost died himself. After hours and hours of battle, he had passed out on the battlefield. When he awoke, one of the enemies had stolen his ceremonial helmet. Gone with the helmet were his friends, his rank, and his honor. He was now a lone warrior, wandering forlornly from conflict to conflict until he passed his last breath…

Kenzo said nothing more the entire night, for he had said all there had been to say.

On Thursday, while strolling through the forest, Arudan came upon three horses. “Scouts!” he cried in a hushed tone. He called quickly for Keith, who signaled to Uel. Bryant followed, readying his bow. “We should wait for them to return,” Keith formulated, “they will not be expecting an attack.”

And indeed, the bandits- squash-nosed half-orcs in mismatched armor- shambled up from the direction of the town.

Keith charged, flail whirling over his head. With a clash, he smashed his weapon into the bandit’s helmet, sending the half-orc sprawling. Uel stepped from behind a tree, reciting a prayer to the forest from beneath his shadow cloak. Vines and roots clawed out of the soft soil, entwining around the legs of two of the bandits. An arrow whistled through the air, burying itself in bandit armor. Uel, with an undulating cry, commanded his crows to dive, tearing half-orc flesh with hooked talons. In no time at all, the bandits were defeated.

“Quick!” Keith cried, “Heal the bandits if you can Uel. We should bring them back as prisoners for interrogation.”

Although Uel rushed to stop the flow of blood, one of the bandits had perished, a victim to the vines that still gripped his flesh.

Keith hoisted both unconscious bandits onto his shoulders and strode back to town, Arudan and Uel trailing behind him, with Bryant leading the three horses. When they entered town, a hush fell amongst the villagers.

“It’s… it’s the bandits…” a man whom the adventurers had gotten to know as Lyman whispered.

“Bandits?” one woman shrieked. “Kill them! Kill the bandits!”

A cry raised amongst the townsfolk as a mob rushed towards Keith. But Keith stood tall, and thrust a hand forward, fingers skyward, palm facing the angry horde. “Stop!” he commanded.

And the villagers listened.

“To kill these bandits is to become one! These are better kept prisoners, as to give us an upper hand during battle.”

“He’s siding with the bandits! That traitor!” Nivers cried.

“Shut up, old man,” a woman retorted.

Keith couldn’t help but smirk.
 



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