VERY strange review

[randomling]

Gorgeous poem, and nice reworking! Makes me want to dig out my cummings and reread some...

 

[Heretic Apostate]

Review in Japaneese poem format.

Haiku. Totally different. Haikus, I believe, use five syllables in the first line, seven in the second, and five in the third.

For instance, from the beloved "Cat Haiku" line:

Grace personified
I leap into the window
I meant to do that

 

[jgbrowning]

at least it wasn't

may i feel, said he.....

joe b.

 

[Crothian]

great publisher is
Expeditious Retreat Press
three gold ENnies win

 

[diaglo]

imitation is the best form of flattery...

you know the drill...

 

[jgbrowning]

heh....

joe b.

 

[Galethorn]

"Huh? WTF, Mate?"
"OMG, ROFL!"
"STFU, Noob."

That's my Haiku. Don't anyone dare steal it! Well, at least don't steal it while I'm watching...here's another...

DM: Bob's rogue dies.
Bob: OMFG! That's lame!
Jim: Play a cleric!

 

[der_kluge]

That looks like he hired a Xaositect* to write that thing.

* the Chaos faction in Planescape