Parmandur
Book-Friend, he/him
The problems with "The Slog" (which are oversold) are structural, not prosiac. The text remains very readable throughout. Everything thst happened in thst section did actually need to happen to achieve the ending, spending more time cooking would have led to a restructuring not a shortening of the text. The big issue is thst he just kept publishing rather than pausing and regrouping. Jt even if h had, again it could not have been short and peobsvly would have ended up longer.He is also, to my mind, maybe the worst author to bring up defending extremely long books, considering even his fans usually acknowledge "The Slog" and just argue about how many books long it is. I honestly can not think of a single author who needed an editor they weren't married to more than him.
Which would be fine, because his prose was golden.