Satin Knights
First Post
Reviewing Thronos:
a) I cleaned up a lot of formatting. I have a lot of experience in the wiki, which can be tricky at times.
b) Skills:
1) Several skills cannot be used untrained, so I removed their totals.
2) You don't get the +3 bonus for a class skill until that skill is trained. So, I changed them from '3' to 'c' for the untrained skills.
3) You have 7 skill points, but only spent 6 of them.
c) Favored Class bonus. You get to chose between +1 HP, +1 Skill Point, or +1/2 to wild empathy. The wild empathy is something you may only use twice in your career. In other words, it is a bad choice. I suggest picking one of the first two.
d) You already said you don't want to be all weapon, so those suggestions are covered.
e) The heavy crossbow is a full round action to reload if you don't spend a feat to improve that. So, you are firing every other round. Dropping down to a light crossbow will allow you to load (as a move action) and fire (std) every round.
f) Racial features: Missed listing: Greed, Darkvision, Defensive Training, Hatred, Weapon Familiarity. The Advanced Race Guide is a valid source book, so some of these features can be swapped out for other ones, like: Deep Warrior, Magic Resistant, Stubborn, Rock Stepper.
Are you going to multi-class into Inquisitor? The flavor of this character seems more in that direction.
So, just a few things to tweak.
a) I cleaned up a lot of formatting. I have a lot of experience in the wiki, which can be tricky at times.
b) Skills:
1) Several skills cannot be used untrained, so I removed their totals.
2) You don't get the +3 bonus for a class skill until that skill is trained. So, I changed them from '3' to 'c' for the untrained skills.
3) You have 7 skill points, but only spent 6 of them.
c) Favored Class bonus. You get to chose between +1 HP, +1 Skill Point, or +1/2 to wild empathy. The wild empathy is something you may only use twice in your career. In other words, it is a bad choice. I suggest picking one of the first two.
d) You already said you don't want to be all weapon, so those suggestions are covered.
e) The heavy crossbow is a full round action to reload if you don't spend a feat to improve that. So, you are firing every other round. Dropping down to a light crossbow will allow you to load (as a move action) and fire (std) every round.
f) Racial features: Missed listing: Greed, Darkvision, Defensive Training, Hatred, Weapon Familiarity. The Advanced Race Guide is a valid source book, so some of these features can be swapped out for other ones, like: Deep Warrior, Magic Resistant, Stubborn, Rock Stepper.
Are you going to multi-class into Inquisitor? The flavor of this character seems more in that direction.
So, just a few things to tweak.
