Making my way through the characters. Here are my comments for the first three posted, second three tomorrow. Then I'll open up an RG thread.
General Points:
(dying is con score=>HP<con bonus)
(gold is 4d4*10 = 160)
Scotley:
dying -3
dead -15
-1 will
+1 class bonus to AC
parry only works against 1 opponent, like dodge feat. thus doesnt figure into your normal AC. let me know when you want to use it.
+4 melee (2d6+5, x3, Long Spikestick), or +5 (1d8+3, 19-20x2, Greater Battle claw), or +4 melee (1d8+3, x3, warhammer), or +5 ranged (1d6+3, x2, 30', javelin), or +4 melee (1d6+3, x2, bite);
remove all the <if necessary> sections
as written you have spent 25 of 24 skill points
(gold is 4d4*10 = 160)
you have spent 133.2
remaining: 26gp 8sp
Lobo Lurker:
dying -3
dead -16
include iron blade in Atk stats pls.
Elocin:
just double checking that you went with point buy?
fort -1
refl -1
will -1
resistance to magic? doesnt apply to all saves.
dying -2
dead -13
grapple -3
dmg from staff = 1d6+1. your melee attack bonus would be much lower if you wanted to use it as a double weapon.
skill points: 24. Spent: 16.
spellcraft +1 (eldritch training)
slots per day: 3/2
you have spent: 64.83
remaining: 95gp 1sp 7gp