Scott DeWar
Prof. Emeritus-Supernatural Events/Countermeasure
Kae'than [Garick83]
@Garick83 ,
Background: open or closed
- this is minor, but open means that DMs and players can use your background ion creating features in the world of E'n; close meams
not to be used.
initiative and concentration: misc bonuses
-need to list where misc bonuses are from [fixed]
Weapon, rapier: damage - Pierce: Special
-is there a special that I do not know about, or was this accidently left there? [not fixed]
favored class: option taken
-not listed [fixed]
more to come .. .. ..
Skills
Acrobatics: Total did not include Ability Modifier [fixed]
climb: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
craft: reminder - craft skill is pretty much useless as per the crafting rules for E'n/LPF
Fly: IIRC, you do not have a number here until you can fly .. .. .. .. ..Judges?
intimidate: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
Knowledge dungeoneering: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
percetion: what is the misc bonus from? need to list it at the bottom, please [not fixed] **
Profession: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
spellcraft: what is the misc bonus from? need to list it at the bottom, please [not fixed] **
swim: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
use magic device: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
** if the misc bonus is conditional, I think it needs to be taken out of the total and noted of the condition on the right side:
Spellcraft 8 1 3 4 [+2 when blah blah blah]
more to come .. .. ..
nice spell list!
equipment
Weapons: might I suggest a dagger. its easier to eat a chunk of hot taters with a dagger then a rapier, and in a close fight its a good thing to have.
also maybe get a few sunsticks?
a few formatting things [fixed]
Personal curiosity: background
does the father have a name?
Is there a translation of what Quel'nar?
Does the patchwork cloak represent the travels and research of his father?
over all good, but with the th things in red, sorry: not approved yet
@Garick83 ,
Background: open or closed
- this is minor, but open means that DMs and players can use your background ion creating features in the world of E'n; close meams
not to be used.
initiative and concentration: misc bonuses
-need to list where misc bonuses are from [fixed]
Weapon, rapier: damage - Pierce: Special
-is there a special that I do not know about, or was this accidently left there? [not fixed]
favored class: option taken
-not listed [fixed]
more to come .. .. ..
Skills
Acrobatics: Total did not include Ability Modifier [fixed]
climb: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
craft: reminder - craft skill is pretty much useless as per the crafting rules for E'n/LPF
Fly: IIRC, you do not have a number here until you can fly .. .. .. .. ..Judges?
intimidate: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
Knowledge dungeoneering: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
percetion: what is the misc bonus from? need to list it at the bottom, please [not fixed] **
Profession: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
spellcraft: what is the misc bonus from? need to list it at the bottom, please [not fixed] **
swim: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
use magic device: You do not get the class skill bonus if you do not have any ranks in the skill [fixed]
** if the misc bonus is conditional, I think it needs to be taken out of the total and noted of the condition on the right side:
Spellcraft 8 1 3 4 [+2 when blah blah blah]
more to come .. .. ..
nice spell list!
equipment
Weapons: might I suggest a dagger. its easier to eat a chunk of hot taters with a dagger then a rapier, and in a close fight its a good thing to have.
also maybe get a few sunsticks?
a few formatting things [fixed]
Personal curiosity: background
does the father have a name?
Is there a translation of what Quel'nar?
Does the patchwork cloak represent the travels and research of his father?
over all good, but with the th things in red, sorry: not approved yet
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