The tables need one of three things done: either remove the prerequisites section of the tables altogether, add in all the prerequisites, or remove the table
The Science Portfolio either needs to be removed or replaced by one that actually represents Psionics(several people on here know about Psionics and can write it up without too much inconvenience)
The Secrets Portfolio is still the only portfolio with a weakness added on after Disciple, also the Greater Deity power of Regeneration has absolutely no game effect since you have to have regeneration in the round you are damaged for regeneration to affect you, if you still want the "if you were not damaged this round" caveat change to fast healing
The Weakness section for Protfolios still does not specify that you cannot take divine abilities to negate a weakness
Needs to be clearly stated whether you intend Outsiders to use just the Spiritual Growth section for Divine Rank, just the Paralelled section of the Templates or Both
The Resonance Section could use another page explaining interaction with Apertures (sensing, protecting, moving, etc.)
Alter Reality and Cosmic Firmament need to be syncronized with their various versions
A paragraph or two in the Artifacts section explaining how Immortals coexist in a reality with non-immortal Epic characters and their epic items
The Divine Ability Uncanny Dodge needs its name changed as there's a class ability of the same name
The epic Feats Improved Toughness and Weapon Mastery need to be changed due to non-epic feats existing with the same name and extremely similar abilities(in Complete Warrior and PHB2)
The Combat Mastery epic feat is not needed since there is a non-epic feat that does the same thing (Improved Combat Expertise in Complete Warrior)
The Armor Masteries need clarification as to whether they affect class abilities that are dependant upon not wearing armor (a Monk with Heavy Armor Mastery for example)
The Eighth and Nineth Sense abilities need clarification as to what they actually do as oppossed to infering that you don't exist yet
Bane [Effect] needs clarification as to whether it must be taken for each creature type, if it applys to all of your favored enemies, or if it simply applys to everyone
Spiritual Ancestry gives the traits of a variety of different beings however two of them have issues: Brood Traits aren't listed anywhere, and the Chaotic Good traits should be Eladrin and not fey since all of the other alignments are outsider Subspecies
Dimentional Ancestry has the possibility of giving Inevitable Traits, however, Inevitable traits are "Fast Healing: An Inevitable heals a certain amount of damage each round (Specified in each variety's description) as long as it has at least 1 hit point. However, damage dealt by chaotic weapons heals at the normal rate." leaving a big question as to how much fast healing(be it a formula based upon HD or Divine Rank)
Currently Diseased and Poisonous [Effect] have no effect upon Immortal v. Immortal changing them to (SU) instead of (Ex) would fix this
Currently the Divine Ability Undeath specifies that you lose your Con score however the Erstatz Divine Ability does not
Currently the Fertility Portfolio has a severe penalty to it once it reaches Demi-Deity status, namely every day they lose a significant chunk of quintessence or populate reality with extremely harmful abominations, consider changing the rejuvenation abilities received at demi-deity status with an ability that reduces the quintessence needed to have a child
Divine Sorcery and Divine Wizardry do exactly the same thing, consider revising to
Divine Wizardry
Prerequisites: Spellcraft 40 Ranks
Benefit: Double your number of Spell Slots for each level.
Divine Sorcery
Prerequisites: Spellcraft 40 Ranks
Benefit: Double your number of Spells Known for each level.
The Asport Divine Ability needs a range listed, and perhaps a slinging scale for the DC similar to what the Scrying spell has
The Great Breath Divine Ability infers that Deities can create outsiders, however, no rules for such creation are listed
The Learned [Spell, Ability, Weapon, Opponnent] Immunity line of abilities do not specify if you can lower the effect for beneficial effects such as healing or buffing abilities
Uncanny Weapon Focus needs clarification on the BAB progression for Epic Prestige Classes
In multiple places you have unfinished sentences