Berandor
lunatic
My comments in spoiler tags, so as not to influence judges.
So Piratecat straikes again with a great story about the quintessential quest for youth. In but a few hundred words, he brings to life a whole world, complete with technological level and a law-enforcement agency that knows all the tricks (having used them themselves at one time or the other).
A very good tale, in my opinion superior to a lot of possible competition. It almost seems as if the reigning CDM does it again.
So I open Sialia's file - 27 pages! Am I really gonna read that? And isn't it too long for the contest? Honestly, who can write 27 pages in three days and make in worthwile throughout?
Remembering the comment that contestants have tried before (and failed) to string a continuous yarn throughout the contest rounds, I read on.
From a purely rational point of view, I feel the "End of the World" is too long. The village is fine, and it rounds out the story, but I somehow feel entries in the contest should be written tighter.
But emotionally, it gripped me again, and in no small part because it takes its time, allowing for a deeper experience. Volpe singing to Lillabo's sacrifice - magnificient.
Is the immensely satisfying ending of Sialia's story enough to beat Piratecat? I don't know, but in my opinion, it's a closer 2-1 win.
A very good tale, in my opinion superior to a lot of possible competition. It almost seems as if the reigning CDM does it again.
So I open Sialia's file - 27 pages! Am I really gonna read that? And isn't it too long for the contest? Honestly, who can write 27 pages in three days and make in worthwile throughout?
Remembering the comment that contestants have tried before (and failed) to string a continuous yarn throughout the contest rounds, I read on.
From a purely rational point of view, I feel the "End of the World" is too long. The village is fine, and it rounds out the story, but I somehow feel entries in the contest should be written tighter.
But emotionally, it gripped me again, and in no small part because it takes its time, allowing for a deeper experience. Volpe singing to Lillabo's sacrifice - magnificient.
Is the immensely satisfying ending of Sialia's story enough to beat Piratecat? I don't know, but in my opinion, it's a closer 2-1 win.