[sblock=Notes on the adventure]I was originally planning on making several hooks, including some for Jedi (the Senate wanting to see if the ash-Shtat are ready to enter the Republic yet) and a hook/side-mission from secretive corporate agents (hence the bit of info about Republic corporations near the beginning that never gets used). The cantina hook was originally just going to be basic hook that I'd replace later with something more interesting.
I also was going to put modifications to make it compatible with other future systems (it would be trivial to port it to other versions of Star Wars, but thinks like d20 Future or Alternity). I even thought about Dark Heresy, but there's virtually no chance a 40k party would give a flying leap about some dude's daughter dying - "Sickness is weakness waiting to be purged, for the Emperor! *murder*"
Alas, I was too wiped out last night to add those. I wrote most of this between 11pm and 2:30am on Monday morning when I had to be up at 8am. I finished it up between 9 and 11pm last night before having to run and take care of the two houses I'm house-sitting for and pass the hell out so I could get up for work again at 8. Ironic that given 48 hours of time to write it, the universe conspired and left me 6 that I could use and I had to give up sleep for half of those![/sblock]