As someone mentioned, Ranger/scout has a much better synergy while staying fairly close to your original concept. By exchanging fighter with ranger, you can take favored enemy undead and then swift hunter, making your skrimish damage work on undead.
ranger2/scout4 then go dervish for a really nice move-around and kill stuff build
1: h1 combat exp
1: r1 dodge, track
2: r2 twf
3: sc1 w focus scimitar
4: sc2
5: sc3
6: sc4 mobility, swift hunter
then switch to dervish.
This is going from memory, but i am fairly certain its doable