carpedavid's Land of the Crane (Updated 11 May, 2006)

Fukasu poked at the figure with her sword. Nothing happened, so she poked it again. It stood, silent and still, frozen in mid swing. "Huh," she muttered.

Musashi stepped back from the figure, prepared to strike if it began to move again, "What is this thing?"

A voice from the direction of the house drew the party's attention. "Why have you destroyed my automaton?" a young, bald man dressed in a modest kimono asked as he descended the front stairs.

Kakeru's eyes widened. He had encountered automatons only a few times, and all had been gifts to the daimyo from very powerful sorcerers.* If he's powerful enough to build an automaton, he thought to himself, he could destroy us all with a single thought.

"My honorable lord," Kakeru bowed deeply, "please excuse our transgression." He smiled sincerely and bowed multiple times as he continued, "We are humble servants of our lord Kurosawa, on a mission of great importance. We are passing through this area at the behest of the great spirit Kadonomaro, the founder of the Temple of Thunder and Lightning. We deeply regret fighting with your automaton, but it attacked us, and we were forced to defend ourselves."

"Please, I am no lord," the man said as he bowed back, "Just a simple sorcerer of very modest power. My name is Isobe Goro." He gestured toward the defunct contraption, "And I'm sorry that my automaton threatened you. I'm not yet sure how to fully control it."

Kakeru introduced his companions, but then looked at Goro suspiciously. Modest power? "Goro-san," he asked, "May I ask where you got this automaton?"

"Certainly. I came across it in my travels, and managed to figure out how to give it some simple instructions." He looked at the black samurai and frowned, "Apparently I missed a few things."

Musashi's patience was wearing thin. "Why have you chosen to build your house here?" he demanded of the sorcerer.

Goro raised an eyebrow, "Well, I thought it would be a pleasant, quiet place to meditate."

"And what of the dam?"

"Well," he continued, the confusion evident in his voice, "There was a stream that was flowing right through the middle of this valley." He shrugged his shoulders, "I couldn't very well build the house in the middle of a stream."

Musashi frowned. I don't know why anyone would build their house in a valley, he thought to himself.

"The reason we ask," Takashi cleared his throat before continuing, "Is that the shrine to my temple's founder sits in this valley, and the dam you've built has flooded it."

"Oh," Goro looked startled. "I had no idea." He scratched his head, opened his mouth to speak, closed it, and then stared at his feet, "Hmmmm."

"Perhaps we could dig a channel to route the stream around your house," Kakeru suggested, drawing out the word "around."

Goro looked relieved, "That's an excellent idea, Kakeru-san." He bowed to the entire group, "Please enjoy what limited hospitality I can offer."

The group spent the rest of the day digging a channel to route the stream around Isobe Goro's home. While the work wasn't especially difficult, it was tiring and time consuming, so by the time they finished, the group was thoroughly exhausted. They all felt a tremendous sense of satisfaction, though, once the dam came down and the water began to drain.

The next morning, the four heroes thanked Goro for his hospitality, and then traveled back to the shrine of Kadonomaro. The difference in the environment was already apparent; most of the standing water had drained off, revealing the solid (albeit muddy) ground.

Musashi and Fukasu elected to stay outside the shrine while Kakeru and Takashi talked to the spirit of the old monk. "Kadonomaro-shihan," Takashi said as he placed a stick of incense on the altar, "We've found what caused the desecration to your site."

The spirit of the old monk billowed forth from the memorial stone. He looked over the shaman and the monk for a moment before breaking into a wide grin. "Takashi-san, you have made an old spirit very happy."

"Thank you, shihan."

"The temple could use more students like you," he laughed, "Of that I have no doubt."

I doubt sensei would agree. "Thank you, shihan," he said, and bowed deeply.

"Well, you and your companions have my blessing. May you possess the strength of thunder and the speed of lightning itself." As he retreated back into his resting place, he turned and spoke one last time, "I will be watching you, Takashi-san. Bring honor to our art."

"I will do my best, shihan."

The four heroes decided to wait for an auspicious day** to resume their journey, so they spent the rest of the day training. Kakeru communed with the spirits native to the valley; Fukasu spent the majority of her time sneaking up behind each of the others, jumping on them, giggling uncontrollably, and then running away; and Musashi convinced Takashi to introduce him to the basics of grappling.

By evening, Musashi felt comfortable enough with his new skills to want to put them to the test. He knew he wasn't quite the equal of Takashi yet, so he approached Kakeru. He knew that his childhood friend was physically strong and adept at unarmed combat on a basic level, so he had no hesitation in asking him to test his skills.

Takashi and Fukasu watched intently as the shaman and the samurai faced off. Both combatants circled around each other, tentatively grabbing at each other's clothing, unwilling to fully commit to an attack.

After half a minute of slapping at each other's heads, Musashi finally got a good grip on Kakeru's lapel. He stepped in, placed his right foot behind Kakeru's left, and pushed. The young shaman fell backward, landing awkwardly on his hip, but not before catching his opponent in his meaty grip. Musashi landed right beside Kakeru, but ended up with his left arm twisted backward under his body.

The two combatants tried to vie for position: grabbing, grunting, and looking for the necessary leverage to get the other on his back.

"Look at them," Takashi said to Fukasu, "Rutting around like pigs."

Musashi grunted and finally managed to roll Kakeru onto his back. When he tried to straddle him, though, the shaman kicked his legs and bucked him off. Musashi tried again, and this time, Kakeru managed to roll back onto his side. Both combatants strained to keep the other from gaining an advantage, and Kakeru's face was red from the effort.

Finally, Kakeru made a fatal error: he rolled onto his stomach, and Musashi wrapped an arm around his neck. With the samurai's weight pressing Kakeru into the dirt, the shaman was unable to fight back, and tapped out.

Takashi shook his head and sighed, "They've got a lot to learn."

By the next morning, Muashi's arm and Kakeru's hip were both sore, but the discomfort wasn't severe enough to prevent the party from getting back on the road. Aside from some stiffness in the joints, the day passed by without incident.

On the following day, though, the party encountered trouble. Yagi had just pulled the cart around a bend in the road when an ogre stepped out from behind a tree, and the party stopped short. The ogre's deep, brick-red skin seemed to glow in light of the spring sun. At nearly ten feet tall, he almost blotted out the sun in the eyes of the young shaman, samurai, ninja, and monk. In one hand, the ogre held a massive club that looked like a tree with the branches stripped off. In the other, he held two chains, each of which was attached to a metal collar that encircled the neck of a bakemono. The small, green, feral humanoids strained at the end of the chains, growling and barking at the group.

Musashi's hand went to the hilt of his sword, but otherwise did not move. Fukasu looked around nervously. Kakeru spoke softly to Yagi, in an attempt to keep him calm, and Takashi rolled his head from side to side.

The ogre flexed his muscles, shook his tree club, and spoke in a deep, gravelly voice, "You pay."

"Excuse me?" Kakeru asked.

"You pay, or no pass," the ogre growled through its massive tusks. It shook its club once again, "You pay."

Kakeru looked over at Musashi. "We kill him, right?" he asked quietly. Musashi simply nodded. "Ok," Kakeru shouted to the ogre in a high, sing-songy voice, "My friend will bring the money right over to you."

The ogre looked confused for a moment, but then shook his head and shrugged. Kakeru mumbled an invocation to the spirits under his breath, and then pressed a few cranes into Musashi's hand. A feeling of well-being washed over the young samurai as he climbed out of the cart, and he approached the ogre without fear.

Musashi walked right up to the big, red monster, dropped the money at his feet, drew his sword, and lunged. Unfortunately, he had to maneuver past the drooling and gnashing bakemono, so his sword thrust ended up completely off target. The ogre did not look amused.

Fukasu unfurled her wings, drew her ninja-to, and launched herself out of the cart. Takashi sprinted toward the melee, and Kakeru lumbered down out of the cart. The young half-oni targeted one of the bakemono, slicing open its throat with a back-handed slash. She then spun and thrust her blade deep into the second one's skull. Nasty little creatures, she thought to herself, as the second bakemono fell into the pool of blood spilled by the first one.

Takashi tried to distract the ogre as Musashi maneuvered into a better position. With the threat of the bakemono removed, he was able to open a deep gash in the ogre's abdomen with his katana. The blow was not enough to drop the monster, though, and it swung its massive club at the samurai's head. Musashi ducked the blow, but nearly knocked over Fukasu in the process.

Fukasu realized that she was not in the optimal position to use her training, so she attempted to tumble past the ogre. It reacted quickly, and though she ended up directly behind the big red creature, she arrived on the end of its massive club.

The ogre was quick, but Kakeru realized that it wasn't that quick, so he dashed around the other side of it. After Fukasu fell off the end of the ogre's club, Kakeru dropped to his knees and poured the energy of life back into his cousin. She gasped, "Ow."

Musashi leveled his katana and thrust at the belly of the ogre again. This time, his blade struck true, and blood sprayed him in the face. The ogre roared in pain, and raised his club to swing at Musashi again. The samurai instinctively flinched, but instead of absorbing a massive blow, he watched the beast collapse.

Fukasu smiled weakly at him as she put her foot on the ogre's back and pulled her ninja-to out of its kidney. Kakeru placed his hand on her shoulder, and a blue glow washed over her body.

***​

Fukasu rested in the back of the cart while the party continued on. After a few hours, and around another bend, Musashi spotted a man dressed in monk's robes standing in the middle of the road. Unlike their last obstruction, this man was not red and ten feet tall. Rather, he was covered in russet fur and had the head of a fox.

Oh, not again, Kakeru thought to himself as he brought the cart to a halt. "May we help you?" he asked the monk.

"My name is Shuudoushi Kitsune, and I am wandering the land looking for worthy opponents."

Next: a face off with the fox monk, and sake -- lots and lots of sake!

Notes:

* In Tanayari, arcane magic is fueled by the negative energy of Yomi, and using it taints the caster. By order of the emperor, all arcane magic users are to be killed on sight. The word sorcerer, in Tanayari, is always used to refer to psions – those who specialize in the study and manipulation of ki.

** According to the Tanayaran calendar, luck ebbs and flows throughout the six day week. The fifth day of the week, Tian, is when luck is at it's highest point, and is therefore the day traditionally reserved for starting new journeys or beginning new projects.
 

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Question:

Is this a particularly sparsely populated part of the world?

I just noticed they haven't passed through and villages, towns, trading posts, other travelers, etc. . . and was wondering if we were going to be getting a broader view of the resident culture and the PCs' place in it. . .
 

nemmerle said:
Question:

Is this a particularly sparsely populated part of the world?

I just noticed they haven't passed through and villages, towns, trading posts, other travelers, etc. . . and was wondering if we were going to be getting a broader view of the resident culture and the PCs' place in it. . .

Yes, compared to other parts of the world, it is fairly unpopulated. Towns can be days apart (as you've seen here), and most peasants never leave the village they were born in at any time during their lives. It's the kind of mindset where travellers are, almost without fail, adventurers.

In game terms, I wanted to give the PCs a sense of isolation before they started interacting with the rest of the world. They're young and leaving home for the first time, and I wanted that sense of being out on their own to be palpable.

With regard to the story hour, though, the PCs are just about to enter the first town on their journey - you'll see that in the next update. From that point on, there's a lot more interaction with the "local wildlife."
 

I think you should start making the stories a bit more detailed. If not on this site, then you should do it as a personal writing project. This campaign has a great flavor and some real potential. Keep up the good work!!!!
 

Ivy Sylvan said:
I think you should start making the stories a bit more detailed. If not on this site, then you should do it as a personal writing project.

I can certainly try to make them more detailed, though trying to remember the details of this far back in the past is sorta hard. It'll be easier to make it more detailed as I approach the present.

For those reading along at home - the events in the most recent post occured in session 3, which was played a little under a year ago. I'm writing up the posts from the written notes that I took in game, which contain details of the battles, cool quotes, and the broad actions of the party. I'm relying on my very faulty memory to fill in the details.

Fortunatly, I just recently picked up a voice recorder and have started recording the sessions. It's just too hard to do this group justice based on my sparse notes.

A question to the readers: what kind of details would you like to see fleshed out? Nemm would like to see more of the culture, obviously, and you should see that in the upcoming posts. What about the fighting? Am I glossing over things, am I droning on too long, or is it just about right?

How about dialog? I've tried to summarize the boring bits, but include the dialog that gives each character flavor. Am I succeding? Would you like to see more? Less?

Would you like to know the names of the specific spells that Kakeru casts, or is the description that I'm giving sufficient?

Any feedback would be much appreciated.
 

Hmmmm. I hadn't tried to really analyze any specific parts of it. I'll try to keep an eye out for things in the future that I can clearly say "that was really good" or "this didn't work for me".

What I DO know is that I have been enjoying them. Please continue - your writing skills will only get better through practice. Might as well polish them up!
 

TDRandall said:
Hmmmm. I hadn't tried to really analyze any specific parts of it. I'll try to keep an eye out for things in the future that I can clearly say "that was really good" or "this didn't work for me".

What I DO know is that I have been enjoying them. Please continue - your writing skills will only get better through practice. Might as well polish them up!

Thanks! I do know that my writing skills are fairly rusty, but I've got a lot of material to cover, so I guess I'll have plenty of practice.

For those who are interested, I've updtated Fukasu, Musashi, and Kakeru's stats over in the Rogues' Gallery: http://www.enworld.org/showthread.php?t=121369
 

It's been a busy week at work, so this week's update is on the short side.

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Musashi's hand went immediately to the hilt of his katana, while Fukasu simply rolled over and groaned. Kakeru cleared his throat and sighed inwardly, "Define 'worthy opponents.'"

The fox monk bowed slightly, and then said, "I am a monk from the Temple of the Fire Monkey, and I have been wandering these lands looking to improve my skills by facing other warriors in combat."

Kakeru nodded, "Are you looking for lethal combat?"

Kitsune frowned and looked uncomfortable, "No. Though the power of the Fire Monkey is extremely formidable, the members of our temple have vowed never to take a life intentionally."

That must be why I've never heard of it, Musashi thought as he relaxed his grip on his sword ever so slightly.

Takashi stared at the other monk while he and Kakeru spoke. He doesn't look that tough, he thought to himself, and I'd like to see how the Way of the Storm measures up against other styles. "Ok," he said, stepping forward, "I'll take you on."

"Thank you," Kitsune said, and bowed deeply. Kakeru and Musashi looked at each other and shrugged, then hopped out of the cart, walked over to the grass by the side of the road, and took up positions at the opposite corners of a twenty-foot square.

Fukasu propped herself up in the back of the cart and watched as the two monks walked to the center of the improvised ring. "Go Takashi!" she yelled, then blushed slightly when he looked startled.

The two monks bowed to each other, then assumed fighting stances. Takashi held his fists at the level of his shoulders, and shifted his weight from foot to foot. His posture was deliberately straight as he tried to make himself appear as tall and imposing as possible. Kitsune, by contrast, assumed a hunched posture, and moved erratically, bobbing and swaying, even as he stood in place.

After a moment, the fight began without a word. The fox monk sidestepped toward Takashi with a bouncing gait, his arms swinging wildly from side to side. Within a second, he had closed the distance to his opponent. He planted one foot firmly on the ground and let the momentum he had generated spin him around. As he spun, he released a powerful kick directly at Takashi's chest.

Takashi stepped back and twisted his torso out of the way. Then, realizing that Kitsune had left his leg extended an instant too long, he wrapped an arm around the extended calf, trapping it against his ribs. Next, he stepped forward and buried the knuckles of his other hand deep into the exposed soft tissue of his opponent's inner thigh. Kitsune grimaced as every muscle in his legs spasmed at once.

The fox monk summoned his inner will, forcing his ki to concentrate in his left arm. His first burst into flame, and he swung at his opponent's chest. Unfortunately, Takashi anticipated the blow, and twisted at the waist. Kitsune's stunning fist struck him in the thick, tough lats, and dissipated harmlessly.

Takashi continued to twist, and, once he had his back to Kitsune, crouched slightly and hooked his other arm under the fox monk's leg. He twisted, bent forward, and lifted all at the same time, which sent his opponent flying over his shoulder. When Kitsune reached the apex of the throw, Takashi kicked his rear leg back and yanked downward. The fox monk didn't even have time to brace himself for the fall; he hit the ground face first.

Kakeru let out a low whistle, while Musashi grimaced. Fukasu threw her arms in the air and yelled, "Woohoo!" Even from her vantage point, it was obvious that Kitsune was out cold. Takashi stood up and smiled, "Ha!"

After congratulating Takashi, Kakeru knelt down, placed his hand on the fox monk's chest, and uttered a life-giving prayer. Kitsune coughed and gingerly rolled over onto his back, at which point Musashi extended his hand and helped the fallen monk to his feet; he remembered all too well what it felt like to be at the wrong end of Takashi's throws.

Over the next few hours, the four pilgrims and the wandering monk sat by the side of the road and shared some food, some sake, and what few exciting stories they had.

"Kitsune-san, what other warriors have you faced?" Takashi asked Kitsune after a few cups of sake.

"Sadly, not many. I began my pilgrimage only a few months ago, and have met only three warriors who were interested in fighting me, including you." He sipped at his cup of the sacred liquid, and then took a bite from the rice noodle and rabbit stew that he cooked for the rest of the group.

"Ah," Takashi nodded, "How many have you won?"

Kitsune fell silent for a moment, then sighed, "None." He smiled wanly, "But I'm confident that I'm learning."

The group slurped at their stew for a moment before Kitsune spoke again. "I did meet one very interesting monk from the Temple of the Silent Lake. He had a very defensive fighting style. I couldn't get in a single hit on him. But he was strange-looking."

Kakeru couldn't help but note the irony in the fox-man labeling someone as "strange-looking," so he asked the obvious question, "What made him strange-looking?"

"He was a human, but his hair was the color of straw, and his eyes like a sapphire. I've never seen anything like it before."

Musashi felt a sense of fraternity with Kitsune, since he was the only other person he knew who had been dropped on his head by Takashi. "Kitsune-san," Musashi said, "Would you care to join our pilgrimage? I'm sure that you would be able to encounter a fair number of warriors against who you could test your skill."

The fox-monk slurped loudly from his bowl and chewed for a moment. "I am honored that you would ask me, Musashi-san, but I think my fate lies elsewhere."

Musashi nodded, and chewed on his own noodles. While he knew that the Itsutsu Shukumei** gave each person their own fate to fulfill, he couldn't help but feel a bit disappointed; he was fond of the wandering monk.

Before nightfall, Kitsune bid the party farewell, and continued on his musha shugyo*. The group spent the next few days traveling; Kakeru, Musashi, and Fukasu tried to rest along the way, but each ended up being used by Takashi as a practice dummy.

On the afternoon of the 9th day of the 4th month of the year 337 of the Ito shogunate, the four travelers from Kurosawa crested a grassy hill only to see a creature that looked like a cross between a lobster and a squid, but nearly twenty feet from the end of its fluked tail to tips of its hooked tentacles, locked in combat with four other adventures.

Next: Oni! And all that sake I mentioned last time...

Notes:
* The musha shugyo, or "warrior's pilgrimage," is a Tanayaran tradition whereby young warriors of all stripes leave their families and monasteries and travel the land, fighting in duels to hone their skills and promote the names of their martial schools or fighting styles.

** The five celestial dragons known as Itsutsu Shukumei are the guardians of fate. They determine the events that affect the lives of every living creature, and dispatch their spirit servants to affect these events.

When each living creature is born, the five fates create an urn, into which they place stones engraved with magical kanji, each of which represents an event that will occur in the creature's life.
 
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Oni, automatons AND Hengeyoki? Oh my!

I figured you weren't limiting yourself to a published campaign world or some direct derivative of a published set of rules, but the mix already shown here proves that I'll never know for sure what is "out of bounds" in theses lands. I'm not complaining, discovery is a significant part of the fun. (So I guess I'm wanting more details of culture too, or at least a primer of some things - what races ARE there, how many temples/religions?) Is there a half-oni template out there or did you make that one up yourself?

I'm surprised Musashi didn't step up first. After all, Kitsune just said "warriors". Even if he later clarified "unarmed" I would think Musashi would want to try (maybe that's exactly what "not lethal" meant and I missed it). Only after he was on the ground and Kitsune said something slighting (yet now quite dishonorable) would the big gun Takashi face-off. Still, that's player choices rather than yours.

For the battle, how long did it actually last? It sounds like one attempted attack by Kitsune and one response by Takashi and that was it. If it was very short, then I think you filled in the details for color very nicely.

So that's something good from last story post, now to try to balance it with something to improve. Let's see ... the paragraph about sharing sake and stories feels like it glossed over a lot. You missed a perfect opportunity to either fill in the detail of your world or even foreshadow a bit by sharing something from Kitsune's experience.

BTW, is this trip supposed to be the musha shugyo for Musashi and/or Fukasu, have they already done that, or is the focus on "fighting styles" intended to mean that only monks realy do this?

Keep using the terms. It make it feel more alive and unique and outright oriental as a result. Make sure when you note something that you give enough down in the note itself to refresh the reader exactly what you are noting about. Then I can feel safe in just reading through and knowing the mystery will be made clear later. Otherwise I've got to scroll up and down again. You did it fine in the last couple of posts, but "begin", "great armor", "wooden clogs" and "wooden training sword" on earlier ones had me scratching my head enough to scroll back up to see what exactly the word you used was in the story.

Thanks for the update even when you're swamped. Shows your dedication, either to your craft or to your fans. If only other SH writers (who will remain nameless to protect the guilty) would take a page from your book!
 

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