Rodrigo Istalindir
Explorer
Thanks, RangerWickett.
Like every other Ceramic DM story, this one was the victim of time, or more accurately, me trying to fit a long-story idea into a short-story timeframe. It was origininally plotted such that the reader would be led to believe that Hal was actually going insane from the isolation. The 'imagined' alert was part of this -- hallucinations, inability to sleep, etc. If I'd pulled it off right, it would have created some doubt in the reader's mind as to whether Dave was really the AI or just Hal hallucinating.
The end would have been somewhat the same, but with references back to how the AIs were tuned to the individual. A flaw in the programming created a feedback loop between Hal and Dave that results in Hal's suicide and Dave's psychopathic break.
Oh well. Another story to throw back on the pile to try and re-write someday. At least there was some science crunch I can use again -- I like the idea of the Aegis stations.
Like every other Ceramic DM story, this one was the victim of time, or more accurately, me trying to fit a long-story idea into a short-story timeframe. It was origininally plotted such that the reader would be led to believe that Hal was actually going insane from the isolation. The 'imagined' alert was part of this -- hallucinations, inability to sleep, etc. If I'd pulled it off right, it would have created some doubt in the reader's mind as to whether Dave was really the AI or just Hal hallucinating.
The end would have been somewhat the same, but with references back to how the AIs were tuned to the individual. A flaw in the programming created a feedback loop between Hal and Dave that results in Hal's suicide and Dave's psychopathic break.
Oh well. Another story to throw back on the pile to try and re-write someday. At least there was some science crunch I can use again -- I like the idea of the Aegis stations.