Artur Hawkwing
First Post
Reviewing Marcus:
a) You don't get cantrips from your opposition school by default in your spell book. So, Ghost Sound and Disrupt Undead are pulled.
b) You had the gold earned on Dockside Diversion as zero. Fixed.
c) Spell Focus (replacing Scribe Scroll) was not in the feats block.
d) Lots of cleanup on formatting. (OCD kicked in)
Go spend all that gold you have. If you go out on an adventure with that much unspent, you are just crippling the party.
Marcus is APPROVED for third level.
a) Okey doke. I know that you have to do 2 slots to use one, didn't know you didn't get the cantrips. Not that it's a problem.


b) That was set as zero as I posed Marcus leaving before GE distributed the GP reward. I'll leave it you guys call on if it stays or not.
c) And I had been concentrating hard to remember that, too, since it was so important to his future.
d) I don't know what resolution you set your monitor to, but I clean things up based on my own monitor (24" wide screen) and it doesn't leave scroll bars when I finish it. I try to line them up with existing text from previous edits. That's why my formatting always ends up making scroll bars. As for other messes, just be glad you never saw a hand written sheet of mine.

Thanks a lot, SK! I appreciate it!
Oh...I do have one question, did you alter his DC matrix or did I just not include his Magical Knack trait bonus? I see it footnoted, but....
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