Living PF Judge
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This thread is to request review of a character you have leveling up. Just post a link to your character here, any special notes and a judge will be by to approve.
Character Level Up Approvals
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toasterferret
Explorer
Anna is ready for level 4 approval. http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Anna_Belacqua_(Toasterferret)
Satin Knights
First Post
Reviewing Anna:
A) squeezed in the +1 from 4th level in the abilities section.
B) HP, the base HP from HD went from 14 to 18. Fixed.
C) BAB went from 1 to 2. Fixed. You are no longer at a negative to slap someone.
D) Even on the skills you cannot use, I filled in the ability bonuses.
E) I filled in the DCs for your spells.
F) Why did you take Hideous Laughter at fourth? It is your automatic bloodline spell at fifth. I don't know if you can take a different spell as your bloodline slot if you already have the default one. So, it is probably a good idea to choose a different spell for learned at fourth level. There are several compulsion spells that look interesting. Oppressive Boredom looks nice at DC 21. I don't think you get the language dependent boost, but all the other DC boosts add up. UM spells are available as of Nov 18th. Bungle is an awesome looking first level spell for your swap in.
G) Inventory: Traveling a bit light?
So, I highly suggest picking a different 2nd level spell that you learned at fourth level. Other than that, I APPROVE Anna for fourth level play.
A) squeezed in the +1 from 4th level in the abilities section.
B) HP, the base HP from HD went from 14 to 18. Fixed.
C) BAB went from 1 to 2. Fixed. You are no longer at a negative to slap someone.
D) Even on the skills you cannot use, I filled in the ability bonuses.
E) I filled in the DCs for your spells.
F) Why did you take Hideous Laughter at fourth? It is your automatic bloodline spell at fifth. I don't know if you can take a different spell as your bloodline slot if you already have the default one. So, it is probably a good idea to choose a different spell for learned at fourth level. There are several compulsion spells that look interesting. Oppressive Boredom looks nice at DC 21. I don't think you get the language dependent boost, but all the other DC boosts add up. UM spells are available as of Nov 18th. Bungle is an awesome looking first level spell for your swap in.
G) Inventory: Traveling a bit light?
So, I highly suggest picking a different 2nd level spell that you learned at fourth level. Other than that, I APPROVE Anna for fourth level play.
perrinmiller
Adventurer
When someone gets a chance, Borric Hawkins and Sylvain Marana are in the Awaiting Approval category for their leveling up to 5th level.
perrinmiller
Adventurer
I am reviewing Syl.
I cleaned up a lot of formatting things and filled in some stuff as well in most sections. Mainly with the adventure links because it is the same as Borric's and I could copy it across.
Before Approving there are some things that need to be checked:
1. Add in where the skill points were spent for each level up
2. The Skill Points total was off by one. The headband is a temporary bonus to Intelligence. It will allow for extra spells per day, but not Skill Points. So Syl's Intelligence is effectively 19 for determining Skill Points
3. I looked at your headband and there was some mistakes on that, I fixed them.
4. You need to include a log of changes to Walter too as you level up.
I have not looked at finances yet. Mainly because he is suffering from medium encumbrance and if he went shopping with Borric, then he would have probably bought a masterwork backpack and a belt pouch or something to alleviate the encumbrance issues. In any case, his total weight is 31 lbs, 5 over the limit for light encumbrance
I cleaned up a lot of formatting things and filled in some stuff as well in most sections. Mainly with the adventure links because it is the same as Borric's and I could copy it across.
Before Approving there are some things that need to be checked:
1. Add in where the skill points were spent for each level up
2. The Skill Points total was off by one. The headband is a temporary bonus to Intelligence. It will allow for extra spells per day, but not Skill Points. So Syl's Intelligence is effectively 19 for determining Skill Points
3. I looked at your headband and there was some mistakes on that, I fixed them.
4. You need to include a log of changes to Walter too as you level up.
I have not looked at finances yet. Mainly because he is suffering from medium encumbrance and if he went shopping with Borric, then he would have probably bought a masterwork backpack and a belt pouch or something to alleviate the encumbrance issues. In any case, his total weight is 31 lbs, 5 over the limit for light encumbrance
Satin Knights
First Post
Please rebuild Walter from the Greensting Scorpion familiar in the Ultimate Magic book, chapter 2. Now that is the official version of the critter, and not the one on the pfsrd20 site. I always argued against a tiny creature with a 50' movement.
Satin Knights
First Post
Reviewing Borric:
1) Flail attack is at +11, not +10; separated flails, as CI version does not have +1 to damage that the magic version does.
2) In the adventure log, please list the values of the treasure items receive, or a grand total for each section. I shouldn't have to go back to the book to look up numbers.
Borric is APPROVED for fifth level.
1) Flail attack is at +11, not +10; separated flails, as CI version does not have +1 to damage that the magic version does.
2) In the adventure log, please list the values of the treasure items receive, or a grand total for each section. I shouldn't have to go back to the book to look up numbers.
Borric is APPROVED for fifth level.
Songdragon
Explorer
Saranna Surefoot is ready for level 3 level up approval.
Satin Knights
First Post
Reviewing Saranna: (Sorry for the delay, busy week offline)
A) Fixed a few skill totals: UMD, Linguistics and Kn Local were off.
B) I rearranged the Adventure logs with totals for each section.
C) Recorded TXP, TGP from current game and added to your finances.
Saranna is APPROVED for third level.
A) Fixed a few skill totals: UMD, Linguistics and Kn Local were off.
B) I rearranged the Adventure logs with totals for each section.
C) Recorded TXP, TGP from current game and added to your finances.
Saranna is APPROVED for third level.
