Artur Hawkwing
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Submitting Marcus Cole for approval, Ranger level 3, Char Level 4.
Marcus Cole (Artur Hawkwing) - Living Pathfinder RPG Wiki
Marcus Cole (Artur Hawkwing) - Living Pathfinder RPG Wiki
Daylily is currently digesting a lovely meal of giant lizard liver with a side salad of shambling mound.
Reviewing Marcus:
a) You had the ability bump for forth level marked as +2. It is +1. The total was correct. Fixed.
b) The background in the top box should be set to Open if you are allowing the GMs to incorporate your background into the storyline and add to it. Or closed if GMs should not tinker with your back story.
c) You added the description for Favored Terrain, but didn't specify which terrain type you are choosing.
d) You have 27 skill points, but spent 28.
e) Since they add up and start to get significant, you should mark which skills get Favored Enemy or Favored Terrain conditional bonuses.
f) You didn't list the XP earned on the current adventure. I chased it down and calculated it, but I shouldn't have to.
So, c and d need fixing. Not Yet.
I approved Marcus while the forum was glitching. But, I would like you to itemize the "Consumed or Destroyed items" somewhere. There are two scrolls and inscription costs for two spells into your spellbook, (you still pay the scroll price even when reading from a friends book) and "something else". I've gone to counting total income - "currently carried" - consumed - housing = coins left over. It is far easier than chasing adds and deletes over time.