I was thinking about coming up with something myself, but I'm less of a graphic designer than you. I really like the functional but minimalist aesthetic, especially the bit that explicitly shows the points vs dice pool size. The one thing I would have tried to add is a short thing for the derived stats on what bits go into it, so you can see what changes when you add points.
So this is it updated a bit, and with added colour coding. Not sure I'm sold, as it looks a little garish now. Might have to tone down some of the colours. The idea is you can direct people to the colours, so if a player asks where to look for his attacks, you just say "it's the red bit". I'm hoping that makes it super useful for new players.