CLOSED [Hivemind]Rampaging Hordes of Tarrasques! Kree! Kree!

[Angcuru]

Well, my last two Story Hour updates have featured my poor party getting ambushed. Check out the latest update here.

It's true, my SH has been genuinely resurrected!

Nice. I'm currently working on an update for mine. Hopefully I'll get a comment/reply or two eventually.

 

[Carnifex]

Nice. I'm currently working on an update for mine. Hopefully I'll get a comment/reply or two eventually.

Yeah - it happens pretty rarely on mine that someone comments. Still, I live in hope!

 

[Angcuru]

Yeah - it happens pretty rarely on mine that someone comments. Still, I live in hope!

I only just took a look at yours and it seems very promising, but I notice a near complete lack of dialogue. Perhaps that is what leads to the low rate of comments.

If you couldn't tell by the title, my SH is based on the storyline presented in the Baldur's Gate series of CRPGs. (Maybe that's why people are adverse to commenting on it. Hmm....)

For my SH, however, I think the lack of comments stems from the first 6 chapters being all dialogue and character interaction in the form of a reverse prologue that reveals the one mitigating factor from which stem all of the conflict throughout the story. Chapter 7 brings the readers in a flashback to the beginning of the meat of the story, and introduces the characters therein. In Chapter 8 we first see the party in action.

In this next chapter I reveal the sickening nature of the 'BBEG', and throw in a little more action as well. I'd appreciate it some of the Hivers took a gander at it and told me what they think.

 

[Carnifex]

I only just took a look at yours and it seems very promising, but I notice a near complete lack of dialogue. Perhaps that is what leads to the low rate of comments.

whoa, you must have had a real, real short look. I'm usually afraid that the problem is so much dialogue and character development, and not enough fights!

If you couldn't tell by the title, my SH is based on the storyline presented in the Baldur's Gate series of CRPGs. (Maybe that's why people are adverse to commenting on it. Hmm....)

For my SH, however, I think the lack of comments stems from the first 6 chapters being all dialogue and character interaction in the form of a reverse prologue that reveals the one mitigating factor from which stem all of the conflict throughout the story. Chapter 7 brings the readers in a flashback to the beginning of the meat of the story, and introduces the characters therein. In Chapter 8 we first see the party in action.

In this next chapter I reveal the sickening nature of the 'BBEG', and throw in a little more action as well. I'd appreciate it some of the Hivers took a gander at it and told me what they think.

When I get a chance, I'll take a look

 

[Angcuru]

When I get a chance, I'll take a look

Thanx.
a bump from someone other than myself would be nice

 

[Carnifex]

And lo and behold, for I have cast resurrection upon my thread over in House Rules!

 

[Angcuru]

*must learn to focus on writing instead of hivemind*

 

[Carnifex]

Well, night to the Hive! I'm off to bed

 

[blackshirt5]

Nice. I'm currently working on an update for mine. Hopefully I'll get a comment/reply or two eventually.

My comment doesn't count? Ungrateful punk.

I'm gonna start writing up "The Castle of Zelyon:Sword, Sorcery, and Steam" as soon as we start it; I have to keep working on recalling the specifics of the early part of the old Werewolf game and filling in gaps when necessary before I keep working on that; although I'm gonna work on editting and filling out the first chapter(and I might repost it into one big post on a different thread).

 

[Tallok]

'lo hive