Cleon
Legend
Would greater teleport or a longer range be preferable? I guess I don't have much of a preference myself.
How about both. Many demons of that grade have Medium-range offensive SLAs and greater teleport at will.
Would greater teleport or a longer range be preferable? I guess I don't have much of a preference myself.
Getting back to the "giant bite" and swallow/curse...
Improved Grab (Ex): To use this ability, a dire whiner must hit with its bite attack. It can then attempt to start a grapple as a free action without provoking an attack of opportunity. If it wins the grapple check, it establishes a hold and can attempt to swallow the foe the following round.
Oversized Maw (Su?): A dire whiner's maw can extend to a size for greater than its head would suggest. This allows it to swallow a creature of up to its own size, and its bite attack deals damage as if it were a creature two(?) size categories larger. An obtestu can use its bite attack even while assuming another form.
Swallow Whole (Ex): A dire whiner can try to swallow a grabbed opponent of a smaller size than itself by making a successful grapple check. Once inside, the opponent takes xdx+x points of crushing damage plus x points of acid damage per round from the demon's interior. A swallowed creature can cut its way out by using a light slashing or piercing weapon to deal x points of damage to the interior (AC x). Once the creature exits, muscular action closes the hole; another swallowed opponent must cut its own way out. A Large obtestu's interior can hold x Large, x Medium, x Small, x Tiny, or x Diminutive or smaller opponents.
Should we retool the swallow whole a bit to account for extradimensional storage?
I don't think we need to change swallow whole, just make the number of swallowed critters appropriate.
For the curse, how about a separate ability:
Obtestu's Curse (Su): Any creature that escapes an obtestu's gullet after being swallowed whole is cursed. It takes X penalty.... The curse can be removed only by X magic.
If we want it to spit out, I wrote this ability:
Regurgitate (Ex) As an immediate action, a quelzarn that is not holding a grappled opponent in its mouth can regurgitate a swallowed opponent. The opponent is no longer swallowed whole but takes automatic bite damage and is grappled in the quelzarn’s mouth.
Let's stick with the "demon standard" greater teleport (self plus 50 pounds of objects only) at will.
60 foot for the range of the targeted abilities?
I like the regurgitate curse, though I think the original curse suggestion was more along the lines of making other people detest the victim. The Cha penalty is certainly appropriate, though.