Pardon me for being a grammar Nazi, but I noticed these problems:Combat:
Deinotherium will normally attack with it's massive front legs and attempt to crush it's opponents with them using it's great strength and reach or with it's massive trunk.
If the opponent moves into melee range, Deinotherium wil rise on it's hind legs and come crashing down upon it's foe, goreing them to death.
Pardon me for being a grammar Nazi, but I noticed these problems:
- Wrong form of "its." "it's" = it is, "its" = possessive.
- Also, you misspelled "will" and "goring."
- I added some commas.
looks good. Can we get a dino dino saur next time around? Or a bird or cat? Something besides fat rhinos and elephant clones.
Too late, my friend. You get what's left on the unconverted pile. About as close as I can get for you is a giant turtle or an armored prehistoric fish.![]()