Creature Catalogue Overhaul Project Revisited
- Thread starter Shade
- Start date
Shade
Monster Junkie
I can't recall if we'd discussed it. I'm fine with leaving off a language...they seem rather primal.
Cleon
Legend
No language ability would be my preference.
Cleon
Legend
Not quite.
Firstly, there's an "x" for weight. I'd guess about 200 lbs. A large Komodo Dragon is ~150 lbs but a scythetail has a larger body in proportion to its tail, so I imagine it's heavier.
Secondly, there's a few typos:
...Females raise the scythetail young in an insolated isolated cavern, though most die in their early stages.
A scythetail is about 7 feet long, 3 feet of which is tail. It weighsx 200 pounds. Although quadrupedel quadrupedal, it is capable of walking on its hind legs.
***
Improved Grab (Ex): To use this ability, ascythetailmust scythetail must hit...
Thirdly, the combat entry says Scythetails "will follow prey tirelessly for days while waiting for an advantage with which to strike" but these creatures have no means to follow a trail. I suggest giving them Scent, Track as a bonus feat, and the wolflike "+4 racial bonus on Survival checks to track by scent" ability.A scythetail is about 7 feet long, 3 feet of which is tail. It weighs
***
Improved Grab (Ex): To use this ability, a
Fourthly, it's ineligible for Multiattack as it only has 2 attacks - maybe make it Multiattack (B) and Track?
Fifthly, where are its skills?
Last edited:
Cleon
Legend
Wow...way to nitpick.
Somebody has to do it, those nits won't pick themselves.
The SRD Wolf only has +1 Survival, I wouldn't want it to be so much better at tracking than a wolf.
So, I would prefer 2 in Listen & 3 in Spot, for Skills: Climb +11, Listen +3, Spot +4, Survival +1*[+5 track by scent]
