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Rhun
Come on it wont take long..you will be a quick snack..in fact you may even be able to hit her once before you die :)

Scotley
Scarlet is a kind and understanding soul once you realize your save if you do everything she tells you to do exactly how she tells you to :)

OnlytheStrong
Sure , thanks for being flexiable ...

Douane
Exorcism :)........


Everbody
Why do i get the impression you guys are trying to whoop up on my poor undead.....actually i like the fact that your building a team.......and thinking about the party and what it needs but dont lose sight of things and commit yourslef to the team at the expense of playing a character you truly love..
 

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Preface: Special thanks to Rhun for the character sheet template I "borrowed". :)


Goric "The Questioner" narvas Zatina, First Heir of the House of Cathfall
Lawful Good Human Male Rogue 1/Favoured Soul 2
XPs: 3000

Age: 21
Gender: Male
Height: 6'
Weight: 168 lbs
Eyes: Colourless
Hair: Blonde (worn long)
Skin: Fair

STR: 12 [+1] (4 points)
DEX: 12 [+1] (4 points)
CON: 14 [+2] (6 points)
INT: 14 [+2] (6 points)
WIS: 16 [+3] (10 points)
CHA: 14 [+2] (6 points)
36 point buy

HP: 28 (Max Hit Points: 6+8+8+6 CON)
Armor Class: 18 (10 base + 5 armor + 2 heavy shield +1 Dex
- Flat-footed AC: 17
- Touch AC: 11

Initiative: +1
BAB: +1
Atttack:
- MW Longsword +34 (1d8+1/19-20)
- Warhammer +2 (1d8+1/x3)

Speed: 20' (30’ base)

FORT: +5 (3 base + 2 con)
REFL: +6 (5 base + 1 dex)
WILL: +6 (3 base + 3 wis)

Abilities:
- Human Bonus Feat
- Human Bonus Skill Points


Feats:
1st Level
- Able Learner
- Skill Focus: Sense Motive
3rd Level
- ...

- ...(Bonus Martial/Divine Feat - thanks JA!)


Skills:
- Bluff +7 (5 ranks, +2 Cha)
- Concentration +6 (4 ranks, +2 Con)
- Diplomacy +14 (6 ranks, +2 Cha, +6 Synergy)
- Gather Information +8 (4 ranks, +2 Cha, +2 Synergy)
- Knowledge (Arcana) +7 (5 ranks, +2 Int)
- Knowledge (Local) +7 (5 ranks, +2 Int)
- Knowledge (Nobility) +7 (5 ranks, +2 Int)
- Knowledge (Religion) +8 (6 ranks, +2 Int)
- Intimidate +8 (4 ranks, +2 cha, +2 Synergy)
- Sense Motive +12 (6 ranks, +3 Wis, +3 Feat)
- Spellcraft +8 (4 ranks, +2 Int, +2 Synergy)


Languages:
- Confederation
- Trade Tongue
- Illum


Equipment:
Armor & Shield
- Breastplate+Chain Mail, Masterwork (350 GR, 30 lbs)
- Heavy Metal Shield, Masterwork (170 GR, 15 lbs)

Melee weapons
- Longsword, Masterwork (315 GR, 4 lbs)
- Warhammer (12 GR, 5 lbs)


Other Equipment

Other Goods & Gear

Weight Carried:

Remaining money:

Description
Due to the martial training with the Knights Goric has started to fill out and lost much of his former lankiness. Rather handsome, he has never been above using his good looks for fun and good times in his younger, wilder days. His most distinguishing feature, however, are his eyes: Though apparently colourless, every shade and colour can be traced in his pupils if one is able to stare into them long enough - something only very few are. Their piercing glance seems to penetrate most people straight to the very core of their being.

Goric usually wears the black of the Society of Truth and Justice, but has discarded the traditional skull cap for a bejeweled headband denoting his status as heir of the House of Cathfall. He also never seen without an ornate longsword by his side, the antique family weapon of the Zatinas given to him by his father.

Personality
If there is one guiding aspect to Goric's personality, it's the question "Why?". Since his early days of training with the instructors of the "Society of Truth and Justice" his father paid for (and even before), he has asked himself the same questions over and over again: "How do things function?" and "Why do they function the way they do?" Later on Goric started to apply these questions to the complex social interactions he experienced everyday as the eldest son of the Grand Duke of Cathfall. His inquisitive nature earned him the nickname "The Questioner" because there was apparently no limit to his thirst for knowledge. (Secretly he takes a good deal of pride in this nickname, but would never openly admit it.) But as the years went on, his limitless curiosity - once considered charming - started to wear on the people surrounding him as he ignored the "polite" limits of conversation again and again.

This was also one of the reasons the Society of Truth and Justice "promoted" him to the Knights chapter in the Valley of Light. They certainly did not object to his neverending search for the truth behind all things but became increasingly uncomfortable when he did not confine himself to matters outside of the Order and even started to question the very foundations of their faith. Together with the discovery that they were unable to teach him magic after he had been deemed worthy because it simply came to him this proved to be the final straw and he was sent off to the Valley of Light.

His very nature made it hard to find and establish a circle of friends as he tends to question everyone and everything. Though this is always done without malice or intention to spite, Goric often scared potential friends or acquaintances away - not least because his observations were usually rather accurate.

Over the last years Goric has finally learned to restrain himself, something that occasionally unnerves people even more. His steadily increasing skills of "reading" people have stood him in good stead when the Church began to make use of his mediation talents.

Calm to the point of a total lack of emotion, he has become a very private man who opens up only to select few. (The escapades of his youth are still legend in the Grand Duchy and surrounding regions and nobody who knew him in those days would believe that these two are one and the same man. But all of these friends and acquaintances (and his former life with them) are now left behind far way in the Confederated States.)

[sblock=Background (hidden for length)]Background

(as overheard in and about the manor of Rigas Zatina, Grand Duke of Cathfall, a few years ago)


"I need to talk to you, son."

"A pleasant surprise. Not. You are here because of the Knights, aren't you?"

"... Well, yes. Your mother and I have talked it over and we think there are other possibilities for you ..."

"Meriana, of course. Always Meriana. I have told you before, father, I don't have the slightest interest in her - or her dowry. So why don't you marry Magoras off to her?"

"Because that is not the way we do things, Goric. The marriage treaty calls specifically for the first son, the first Heir. Do you think Kilcare would have offered such a generous dowry for just anybody? No, the eldest daughter and the eldest son. This is the Old Way - this is the only honorable way."

"[Sigh] They are offering so much to get rid of her, father, and you know it. Meriana narvia Doruld is nothing but trouble and the one dark blot on their otherwise impeccable white vest that they haven't been able to lose yet."

"You are exaggerating again, son. And if you compare her to ..."

"Oh, please, father, I know where this is going. I'd be the last one to deny her pleasing looks, but where would this lead to? Do you expect the heir of Cathfall to choose his bride solely based upon her appearance ? Where is the honor in that, father ?"

"I expect the heir of Cathfall, my heir, to choose his wife in accordance with his duty to his house and family, because there is honor in that! "

"Ah, yes, "duty". The one little flaw in all my designs. The Light knows I've tried to find another way, but it always comes down to duty."

"A good thing it does, son. This shows that you haven't lost your repect for the Old Ways as some have feared. As I have started to fear. You will marry Meriana narvia Doruld for the honor of the House of Cathfall and if you really find her to be that disagreeable ... there are other ways."

"Other ways ... which reminds me, father. Councilwoman Jereva asked me relay her greetings when I met her only recently. She said she is looking forward to the next session and your ..."

"Silence, fool! Don't you dare to mention that woman in this house again."

"Relax, father - no need to pretend. I already knew that mother is not listening in on our "father-son-talk"."

"And what lead you to this conclusion ? Did you try the door to check if your mother was pressing her ear to the keyhole like a common servant ?"


"There was hardly any need for such ridiculous behaviour. I knew she wouldn't be listening - otherwise you'd never dared to speak of "other ways". ... Not to mention that I'd be willing to bet that she already knows, anyway."

"Perhaps ... probably. And yet, we have managed to stay together for 25 years now without going at each other's throat and even got some nice kids out of it. ... That could have gone better, of course, but you know how it is - sometimes your own children are just ungrateful, regardless of what one has done for them."

"That can't be compared in any way, and you know it, father! At least mother has the good graces to let you pretend in public that it's you who's still got the pants on in House Cathfall, but Meriana has openly declared that she intends to buck all tradition and become the first Grand Duchess to hold the title not only in name but with full rights!"

"Yes, I remember that. A real pity. Ah, young people today."

...

"You know I can almost hear you grinning, father, don't you? Do you really think I'll give up just like that? Dream on, old man. My plan is sound and you are not going to stop me."

"Frankly, I'd be disappointed. Disappointed and worried that I failed to raise you propererly as the First Heir of Cathfall. But I didn't. So, let's talk about your plan then. You somehow talked your friends in the church to send you to the Valley of Light for initiation. Based on this you argue that your duties as member of the Chruch and First Heir collide and that the only honorable way to solve this is to postpone the marriage because we did not set a particluar date for it in the Marriage Treaty. Oh, what a fool have I been! It's like that instructor disaster all over again. I gave you too much leeway to hire the ones you found most suitable, but I did expect them to teach you how to fight, of course, not to make a philosopher out of my heir!"

"But they did teach me how to fight, father , just one a different battlefield than the one you wanted."

"Good to see you found your grin again, my son. You are going to need it. I trust you still remember that I am about to select a new bishop. Having a suitable instructor sent from the Valley of Light for the new bishop ... and others shouldn't be too difficult."


"No, I guess not. But it won't do any good, unfortunately. The Society has already made it clear to the Church that my training has to be continued by the Knights in the Valley by all means."

"They are getting rid of you."

"They are, indeed. But since it serves me well this time, I am far from arguing against it. I'm sorry that mother's plan didn't work - it was good a one. Just not good enough. How about yours?"

"My plan? You must be confused, my son, I don't have any secret plans. Did you hit your head?"

"Ha-ha! Don't bother trying to fool me, father, I can see it in your eyes. The light - you have an idea how to stop me and you even believe I can't do anything against it."

"You must have hit your head. Perhaps Kyra will help you nursing it? I believe she will. I have heard that your mother's maid is rather "fond" of you. But enough of the chit-chat! As I said, no secret plan, no nothing, I am simply going to let you leave. Don't look at me like that. I'm not old enough to not remember what it is like to be young. Surely I would preferred to have things go my way, but if you got to sow your wild oats before you accept your duties, so be it."

"Just like that?"

"Just like that. No strings attached. Come back when you are ready."

...

"You do have a plan."

"Of course, but if I told you it wouldn't be much of a secret plan anymore, right? Since I have faith in my heir, though, I won't use it yet and will instead await your eventual return. And return you will - one way or the other."

"Threats are hardly becoming ..."

"One way or the other, son. I expect the First Heir of the House of Cathfall to be back, but he can't make it, I am not above leaving my title to the bishop instead."

"That's absurd, father. Simply absurd. The council would never allow any bishop to assume the ..., the ... Oh no, you wouldn't!"

"I am the Grand Duke, Goric. I, and only I, select my bishop. How far do you think the Church would go to further its influence in the Confederation? Having a churchman on the Ducal Council? Think about it, my son. Safe travels to you."


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"Well, that didn't go so well, right? You look like ..."

"Shut up, Kajas. My sister already told you everything so there's no need to pretend anything. I warn you - marrying into this family can only lead to disaster."

"Bitter much, Gor? And maybe I won't, who knows. I thought a lot about my life recently and perhaps I will even join the church."

"[Snort] Don't make me laugh! Joining the Church! Let me guess - you found someone willing to do a little conversion work on you, right?"

"You wound me! How can you doubt my newfound spirituality?"

"Because you don't have any. Do I know her?

"No ... no, I guess not. I mean you are still new to the Knights , in fact you aren't even a real Knight yet."

"[Sigh] Kajas, Kajas, there are no female Knights in the Confederation - it's against the Old Law. So why don't you ... Wait, wait. I don't like that smirk. What am I missing?"

"Not much or two nice handfuls - it really depends on your perspective. But you'd know all about it, wouldn't you?"

"Stop this nonsense, how would I ... Meriana. This is impossible!"

"Unthinkable even, Goric. But everything seems to be in order. Apparently she apparently a precedent that matters of faith trump all other concerns."

"..."

"That's right, my friend. You opened the door but she slipped through before you did. It seems you still have to learn a lot ... about people and the life out there."[/sblock]
 
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Douane
Sigh..guess i may as well go to Sam's club and buy that overzied bottel or antiacid and asprin..i am going to need it i think........good think i always keep bourbon around
 




Douane said:
Preface: Special thanks to Rhun for the character sheet template I "borrowed". :)

Don't thank me. Someone else posted this long ago, and I "borrowed" it from them. I can't remember who it was, but it sure is a spiffy looking sheet.


Douane said:
- MW Longsword +34 (1d8+1/19-20)

Now that is an impressive attack bonus for a third level character. :)
 

Hmm....J Alexander, I'm considering some slight changes in the character.

1) There's a regional feat in Player's guide to Faerun named "Fearless". It makes the character immune to fear, magical or otherwise. It makes sense for the background of the character and his order, but I'll leave the decision up to you. It seems a little bit over the power balance, for single feat.

2) I still think that a large greataxe, considered the "syngergy" with the man wielding it, should grant a bonus bigger than +2. I was going to pay 50gp for that bonus. May I pay a higher cost for a higher bonus? For example, horrible red spikes coming out from the twisted edge of the axe...what would be the maximum bonus you are willing to allow me and how much would it cost? (by the way, I left you an open space with that lingering magic aura...I like to do it as a player. Feel free to use it anyway you want)
 

Nightbreeze
I am going to have to so no to the fear feat...for the simple reason that it will remove one of the biggest edges i have with the undead i have slated to harass you with......I could see it in regards to numbers or a bad tactial situaion but when faced with a vampire using a fear affect the players should dam well be scared.....and also because i have never really been found on the world of Faren.......feel free to convice me otherwise but off the top of my head NO NO NO...as to the axe hmmmmmmmmmmmmm assuming it is overzied and nasty..i would be willing to go as high as 3 or 4 for synergy...
 

Ok, then, before I start pestering you on the feat, I'd like to set down for the axe :D
So....a kit that gives +2 costs 50. However, a magic item that gives +2 to a single skill costs 400. Say that a reasonable formula is cost of the magic item/4, then a intimidation factor +3 costs 225 and an intimidation factor +4 costs 400. Would those prices be ok for you?

Now, let's get at the feat problem :)
I have two arguments: one long, and another is a compromise.

1) The regional feat "Fearless" may be given to people living in a land that is always in constant danger of deadly attackers. Growing on the borderlands, you are under the constant threat of invadin throngs of humanoids, trolls, giants, ogres, worgs, other horrible beasts and so on.

Even if you are a trained warrior, charging an ogre requires an insane amount of bravery: his club can smash before you even manage to lay a finger on him.

Having been raised in similar lands, and having been trained by the Erukkans, an order of holy warriors, to face only such beasts, leaving the orcs and other "minor" threats to men at arms, an erukkan belted knight probably has seen the worst that a combat can offer. Besides, as a holy warrior he has sworn to protect humanity by evil, and his faith is unwavering. A palading gains absolute immunity to fear effects, and he can even give a huge bonus on the saving throws to his allies. Is it so unreasonable that other holy warriors gain a similar ability? You can view it as the bonus divine feat that you offered to your players.

I follow up with a little rant: fighters and barbarians have an insanely low will save. Which is all good when defending from mental domination: thier will is not that strong. However, is it really reasonable that a first level wizard is braver than a fifth level fighter, when someone is trying to scare them?

Besides, having a giant like Harstard run away like a chicken from a little ghoul with fear aura is soo much...un-erukkanish :D

2) Ah...I will leave it for later :D
 

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