ACreepierFolklaw
First Post
it sounds great! but then i love to be tricked
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perhaps in terms of pacing you could have stopped the game the instant the sword was plunged, seconds before she was revived, then calmly explain that if they liked that adventure you have planned it to be part of a series...
the second episode starts with the result of the sword plunge... it would be a great beggining, a classic myth: the hero's start out on a quest to put right the mistake they have made...

perhaps in terms of pacing you could have stopped the game the instant the sword was plunged, seconds before she was revived, then calmly explain that if they liked that adventure you have planned it to be part of a series...
the second episode starts with the result of the sword plunge... it would be a great beggining, a classic myth: the hero's start out on a quest to put right the mistake they have made...