Drusilia Naïlo: The Making of a Watchman

dpdx said:
My thought is, with all the crap that's happened in her life as a child, she's going to be about 12th level (rogue, fighter, I can't figure out which) by the time she's old enough to erm, vote...

Doh! You see, I was trying to avoid that. I had to somehow fill 100+ years of life, and still have her be only third level when the game actually began. Yeah, she's had a lot of stuff happen to her, but she didn't survive any of it without serious help from her (much) higher level father and bodyguard. If you go through and count the scenarios where she dealt with the problem entirely on her own, I think you'll find that the number is very small. :)
 

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For hours the young elf struggled, trying to loosen her bonds. She thought she felt the rope giving, one little bit at a time, but she was afraid that it was mostly wishful thinking. I've got to get out of here, she thought desperately. That crazy woman is going to kill me to get back at Papa. I can't let that happen!

Frustrated tears streamed down her face, and she had long since bitten her lower lip until it was swollen and bloody. I won't let that happen. I won't. She amused herself by considering what Meris' guts would look like, lying in the middle of some kesir street. The thought must have given her strength, because suddenly, she worked the knot around her right wrist loose, and was able to slip it off.

She gasped, fervently hoping that Meris wouldn't appear before she was completely untied. She struggled with the knot securing her other wrist, cursing under her breath all the while. Finally, the knot unraveled, leaving both of her hands free. It didn't take long, after that, to untie her ankles. Staggering to her feet, Dru sighed heavily. She was untied, but still alone in the dark. She started to creep forward.

She crept up the stairs, and cautiously opened the door at the top. There was a sentry, human, but his back was to her. She tiptoed past him, and stepped outside into the steamy night time air of... Scurvytown.

Just then, the sentry gave a cry. "Hey, the elf's getting away!" There was the clattering of feet, and he burst out the door, drawing his sword. Then Meris appeared in the doorway behind him, and leapt past him. "You had better get back here, girl," she snarled.

Dru snorted, wondering how stupid the older elf thought she was. And took off running, as fast as her feet would carry her, through the Scurvytown streets. She heard Meris right behind her all the while, inching closer, and closer. Meris laughed, right behind her. "You cannot win, Drusilia, so you might as well surrender to your fate."

With a cry, Dru jumped forward, terrified that she would be taken back to her basement prison again. "NO! Die, you stupid b***h! I hope that you die a million times, you- you roundear lover!" Why am I defying her? She's just going to beat me again when she catches me...

Just then, a cloaked figure stepped out of the shadows. Upon closer inspection, he was a half human, with long, dark hair. Purple tinted glasses perched on his nose, and he was carrying a cane. It was better than any ordinary cane, Dru noticed, because there was a sharp blade protruding from the end of it. She saw the him look her over, and then look back at Meris. Calmly, he stepped in between them. "Run," he told her, firmly. "Go to safety."

Dru didn't need to be told twice. She heard Meris cry out in pain, and then the clashing of weapons against one another. She hoped that the half human won, but regardless of whether he did or not, she was free! She ran as fast as she could, through the seemingly neverending maze of streets, and didn't slow down until she was safe, back on the outskirts of the kesir. She slowed, suddenly unsure of what to do. Papa and Kennic are in hiding, she mused to herself. My guard is not an option anymore, the traitorous b***h. I don't know-- Jalin. Jalin will take care of me.

When she got there, she could see the flickering light from a lantern in one of the rooms inside. Slowing to a walk, she approached the front door, nervously. She rapped on the door firmly, waiting, and shivering despite the muggy heat.

There was silence, and then the door was flung open. A shirtless Jalin stood there, his long brown hair hanging out of its usual tie. His sword was out, and ready. He stopped, and stared. "Drusilia?" He hesitated, but then grabbed her by the shoulders, pulling her inside the house. "Gods, girl, we have been so worried about you! Get in here!" He slammed the door closed behind them, and locked it.

He bellowed, "Evera! Get a lantern in here!"

Evera, his wife, showed up a minute later, holding a lantern aloft. She asked, timidly, "Jalin? Is everything alright?"

"Get in here with that thing," he said impatiently, waving her in. "I've got Naïlo's daughter here. Drusilia," he said, turning to look at her. "What happened? You look like s**t."

Dru sank to the floor, wrapping her arms around her knees. She put her head down, and started sobbing. It was over. It was finally over.

Jalin cleared his throat uncomfortably, but Evera was beside her like lightning, soothing her, looking her over. She looked up at her husband then, and bit her lower lip.

"Well?"

She shook her head, and said quietly, "She's been beaten. With a whip," she said, gently tracing the skin alongside one of the welts. When Dru stiffened, Evera shook her head. "Shhhh, darling," she said. "We'll make it all better for you."

Jalin scowled fiercely, but said, "You can get her patched back up?"

Evera nodded, her eyes downcast. "I will," she said.

Jalin nodded, then, but gave Dru a piercing look. "When you're done with that, you and I have a lot to talk about," he said. "I am going to want to know everything." He stepped back, but was unable to keep himself from asking. "Who did this to you?"

Dru clenched her jaw, but stood to her feet, with Evera's help. "Meris."

Jalin swore, his string of curses getting more and more imaginative by the second.

"I'm going to need clean, hot water," said Evera, as if the swear words had never been spoken.

Jalin nodded. "Alust and I will get it for you," he said. "ALUST, get in here!"
 
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I just wanted to let everyone know that there will be updates, but perhaps not this week. I've been getting a ton of overtime at work, and am too brainfried at the end of the day to write anything that sounds coherent. :)

This weekend, I will try to catch up.
 


Speaking as both a fellow Story Hour author in general, and husband to this one in specific, the best way to keep us writing is to let us know you're reading! Tell us what you liked, ask questions, speculate, or something else...but the more you post, the more we'll want to, too!

J
 

I haven't stopped reading this Story Hour since I discovered the link to it in your thread, Doc, and I have the posts in here to just about prove it. I didn't want to go overboard, otherwise I'd sound like Horacio.

So if that was directed at me, I assure you you're preaching to the converted, man. And someday, I'll even catch back up on yours... :)
 



Several hours later, Dru was clean, and her wounds were treated. and bandaged. She sat wrapped in a heavy blanket, and shivered despite the heat. It was over. It was really over...

The door to the sitting room opened up, and Jalin strode in, Alust following along behind him. Jalin looked Dru over critically, and then said, "Evera told me that you were decent. I need to talk to you about what happened, so that it can be taken care of."

Dru nodded. "Alright," she said, drawing in a deep breath. "Where do you want for me to start?"

Alust stood behind his father, staring down at Dru. "You don't look like much of a fighter right now," he remarked.

Dru looked up at him slowly, wishing that her legs had enough strength left in them to get up so that she could punch him in the nose.

Perhaps Alust discerned the look in her eyes, because he took a hasty step backward.

"Alust, if you can't be quiet, then get out of here," snapped Jalin, sitting down on the couch beside Dru. "You might as well start from where it all started, from your point of view, Drusilia," he said.

Alust scowled, but sat down in a chair. He wasn't going to miss this story for the world.

"A couple of days after Papa left me with Meris, she drugged me. When I woke up, I was tied up in a dark, room, laying on the floor. She came in and tortured me several times... there was one time that she came in and started kicking me. And you've heard about the whip marks." Dru flushed, looking away.

Jalin patted her clumsily on the shoulder. "Did she ever mention why she took such a dislike to you?"

Dru nodded, sighing. "Yes," she said, looking back at him. "She was angry at Papa for not loving her back."

Jalin swore. "This was all because of a crazy woman thing? Tensin is going to be p****d! Go on."

"She was going to sell me to Pontinillo."

There was silence, and then Jalin asked, quietly, "Are you absolutely certain about that?"

Dru met his eyes, and nodded. "Yes. He came to see me before he could get the money raised for it. She showed me to him, and reassured him that it would give him a hold over Papa."

Jalin stood to his feet. "It will be dealt with," he said. "Drusilia, you are welcome to stay here as long as is needed. In fact, you aren't to leave for any reason unless I'm with you. Or," he amended, "unless your father or Kennic returns for you."

Dru nodded, perfectly willing to submit to his orders.

Jalin nodded at her, satisfied, and then left the house.

The next morning...

Evera put down a plate of steaming hot bread, with jam. She smiled faintly at Drusilia. "Please, help yourself," she said.

Dru did so, along with Alust. Jalin hadn't come home the night before.

Alust scowled at her. "My father might be dead because of you. I hope that you're satisfied."

Dru spread some of the jam on a piece of bread, and then eyed Alust. "I suppose that I should have somehow convinced Papa that Meris was untrustworthy, and then prevented her from drugging me. Or, failing that, I should have let her sell me to Pontinillo."

Alust sneered, taking a bite out of the bread. "I thought you were supposed to be a good fighter. The way that my father is always going on about you, I'd have thought that you could have taken Meris on singlehandedly."

Dru sighed. "Alust, if you don't shut your mouth, I will shut it for you. Got it?"

He shook his head, but stayed quiet.

Dru continued. "Meris is older than I am, and a better fighter. And she used drugs on me. I'd like to see you stand against something like that. You couldn't do it. Not with your magic and certainly not," she said, letting her gaze drop so that she took in his small body, "With your strength."

Alust scowled, and got to his feet. "I don't have to put up with this in my own house," he said, and stalked out.

Evera flitted around, looking worriedly at the door. "He's so sensitive," she fussed. "I'm sorry that he started that fight with you," she said with a sigh. "Jalin is so hard on him..."

Dru shrugged, and said gruffly, "Don't worry about it. Alust and I will probably never see eye-to-eye."

Evera winced, and sat down at the table to watch Dru eat. "I believe that your opinion of him matters a lot to him," she said. "Even though it doesn't look like it."

Dru looked at her disbelievingly, and took a bite of the bread. "If you say so," she said, trying to make her words as gentle as possible.

Evera smiled slightly.

A few minutes later, the door swung open, and Jalin strode in. He gave Dru a grin, and kissed his wife.

Dru looked up at him, feeling relieved that he had not, in fact, died because of her. "Is it taken care of?"

He nodded. "Yes. If anyone knew what kind of a deal he was trying to make, there's no doubt about what the Naïlo organization thought of it."

Dru smiled thinly, and nodded. "Good. And-" she hesitated, and then said fearfully, "What about Meris?"

"Heh. No one's sure," said Jalin. "She has completely disappeared."

Dru winced. "Does that mean she's still out roaming around?"

Jalin shook his head. "No, I don't think so. I think that half elf of yours probably did her in, and was smart enough to hide the body. But even if she is free, she won't dare show her face in the kesir again. She won't be making another grab for you."

Dru nodded, and let him convince her. She was tired of worrying.
 

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