Evil Toki Comics launches "The Extraordinary Guardians!"
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Radiant
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Keia said:
I throw my voice in for Guardians too. Of course Ravenheart would suggest something like Black Flames or such nonsense but even I wouldn't want that
Otherwise I could live with the Challengers. The rest sounds just too cheesy for me.
And a few suggestions from me because I hate to just critisize:
Defenders,
Secret League (going with the whole mysterious origins thing)
Hunters
Radiant
First Post
will be away till monday so here are my stats for now.
Ravenheart [Daniel McGuirre]
Secret Identity
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Eyes: Green
Hair: Black
Skin: Pale White
Nationality: American,
Current Residence: Two room apartment, paid by his parents
Current Work: Student
Attributes: [Cost 16 pts.]
STR: 12 +1
DEX: 12 +1
CON: 20 +5
INT: 10 +0
WIS: 10 +0
CHA: 12 +1
Defense: 11 [10 + 1 Dex] [cost 0pts.]
Initiative: +1 [+1 Dex ]
BAB: +0 [cost 0 pts.]
Melee: +1
Ranged: +1
Speed: 30’
Damage: +17 [+5 Con/+10 Protection/+2 Toughness]
Fort: +5 [+5 Con]
Reflex: +1 [+1 Dex r]
Will: +0 [+0 Wis]
Hero Points: 5
Superpowers: [total cost 110]
Protection Rank 10 [cost 20]
Regeneration Rank 10 (extra: Back from the Brink) [cost 30]
Reincarnate Rank 10 (extra: Never say die) [cost 50]
Weapon Rank 10 [cost 10]
FEATS: Attractive, Rapid Healing, Toughness, Durability, Identity Change, Immunity (Aging/Critical Hits/ Pressure/ Starvation/Suffocation) [Cost 20 pts.]
Skills: [Cost 4 pts.]
Acrobatics +1
Balance +1
Bluff +1
Computers +1
Drive +1
Sleight of Hand +1
Spot +1
Knowledge (Goth-culture) +1
Possessions (worn): Stylish black clothes and lots of silver jewelry and exotic trinkets. Two ritual kriss blades he used to for the ritual. (note: his fighting with two blades is just for effect and has no rule relevance)
Possessions: Daniel has an off-campus apartment near the college that looks like some cross between a graveyard and a living room. The place is filled with dark-wave cd’s, exotic occult objects with no visible worth and books that no one could ever find interesting but make you look very intelligent then standing beside your bed.
Description: (Daniel) With his pale skin, sleek figure and long black hair Daniel’s gender isn’t even apparent on first glance sometimes but his features are rather handsome and under his usual wide flowing clothes is a slim and athletic body.
Description: (Ravenheart) Then concentrating on the raven’s blood inside him Daniel can change into the superhero Ravenheart. His skin changes to a complete and obsidian like black. Even his eyes take on that color. His clothes change to a goth’s dream. The clothes themselves seem to are perfectly dark without a stain on them and always move in a soft wind. The jewelry glitters in its own soft light and even his hair seems longer and always moves in the nonexistent wind. Often black raven feathes appear too, either bound in his hair or integrated into the rest of his cloth.
It is almost impossible to make out any recognizable features out of this form but despite its dark look most people don’t find it scary as the movements are soft and even the glittering light looks comforting.
Personality: Daniel is a pretty nice guy who just wants to live his life in peace, spent time mourning how bad the world is and go on with his life. The problem is that despite his official goth attitude he actually feels an empathy for most people and feels pretty good helping them.
Ravenheart [Daniel McGuirre]
Secret Identity
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Eyes: Green
Hair: Black
Skin: Pale White
Nationality: American,
Current Residence: Two room apartment, paid by his parents
Current Work: Student
Attributes: [Cost 16 pts.]
STR: 12 +1
DEX: 12 +1
CON: 20 +5
INT: 10 +0
WIS: 10 +0
CHA: 12 +1
Defense: 11 [10 + 1 Dex] [cost 0pts.]
Initiative: +1 [+1 Dex ]
BAB: +0 [cost 0 pts.]
Melee: +1
Ranged: +1
Speed: 30’
Damage: +17 [+5 Con/+10 Protection/+2 Toughness]
Fort: +5 [+5 Con]
Reflex: +1 [+1 Dex r]
Will: +0 [+0 Wis]
Hero Points: 5
Superpowers: [total cost 110]
Protection Rank 10 [cost 20]
Regeneration Rank 10 (extra: Back from the Brink) [cost 30]
Reincarnate Rank 10 (extra: Never say die) [cost 50]
Weapon Rank 10 [cost 10]
FEATS: Attractive, Rapid Healing, Toughness, Durability, Identity Change, Immunity (Aging/Critical Hits/ Pressure/ Starvation/Suffocation) [Cost 20 pts.]
Skills: [Cost 4 pts.]
Acrobatics +1
Balance +1
Bluff +1
Computers +1
Drive +1
Sleight of Hand +1
Spot +1
Knowledge (Goth-culture) +1
Possessions (worn): Stylish black clothes and lots of silver jewelry and exotic trinkets. Two ritual kriss blades he used to for the ritual. (note: his fighting with two blades is just for effect and has no rule relevance)
Possessions: Daniel has an off-campus apartment near the college that looks like some cross between a graveyard and a living room. The place is filled with dark-wave cd’s, exotic occult objects with no visible worth and books that no one could ever find interesting but make you look very intelligent then standing beside your bed.
Description: (Daniel) With his pale skin, sleek figure and long black hair Daniel’s gender isn’t even apparent on first glance sometimes but his features are rather handsome and under his usual wide flowing clothes is a slim and athletic body.
Description: (Ravenheart) Then concentrating on the raven’s blood inside him Daniel can change into the superhero Ravenheart. His skin changes to a complete and obsidian like black. Even his eyes take on that color. His clothes change to a goth’s dream. The clothes themselves seem to are perfectly dark without a stain on them and always move in a soft wind. The jewelry glitters in its own soft light and even his hair seems longer and always moves in the nonexistent wind. Often black raven feathes appear too, either bound in his hair or integrated into the rest of his cloth.
It is almost impossible to make out any recognizable features out of this form but despite its dark look most people don’t find it scary as the movements are soft and even the glittering light looks comforting.
Personality: Daniel is a pretty nice guy who just wants to live his life in peace, spent time mourning how bad the world is and go on with his life. The problem is that despite his official goth attitude he actually feels an empathy for most people and feels pretty good helping them.
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Insight
Adventurer
Radiant said:I throw my voice in for Guardians too. Of course Ravenheart would suggest something like Black Flames or such nonsense but even I wouldn't want that
Otherwise I could live with the Challengers. The rest sounds just too cheesy for me.
And a few suggestions from me because I hate to just critisize:
Defenders,
Secret League (going with the whole mysterious origins thing)
Hunters
To be honest, Guardians by itself is a tad generic... maybe Guardians of <insert word here> would be a little more specific.
Velmont
First Post
Insight said:
My name is Sanji, Patrick is the Super-Intelligent friend of him. But yeap, that's the concept. Here the stats:
Space Binder [Sanji Sho Liang]
Public Identity
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Eyes: Dark Brown
Hair: Black
Skin: Yellowish pink
Nationality: American (from birth and mother), Japanese(from father)
Current Residence: Appartment in Freedom City
Current Work: Medecine Student
Attributes: [Cost 34 pts.]
STR: 16 +3
DEX: 18 +4
CON: 16 +3
INT: 14 +2
WIS: 16 +3
CHA: 14 +2
BDB: +6 [cost 12pts.]
Defense: 20 [10 + 4 Dex + 6 BDB]
Initiative: +4 [+4 Dex ]
BAB: +6 [cost 18 pts.]
Melee: +9
Ranged: +10
Speed: 30’
Damage: +6 [+3 Con, +3 Power]
Fort: +6 [+3 Con, +3 Power]
Reflex: +7 [+4 Dex, +3 Power]
Will: +8 [+3 Wis, +2 Feat, +3 Power]
Hero Points: 5
Powers: [total cost 59]
Teleportation 10 [Source:Mutation] (Cost:36)
extra: ESP
stunt: Extended Teleport
stunt: Turnabout
stunt: Fusillade
Weapon 5 [Damage: Stun, Source: Super-Science] (Cost: 11)
extra: Energy Field
stunt: Stun (flaw: Range - Touch)
Amazing Save (Damage) 3 [Source:Training] (Cost:3)
Amazing Save (Fortitude) 3 [Source:Training] (Cost:3)
Amazing Save (Reflexe) 3 [Source:Training] (Cost:3)
Amazing Save (Will) 3 [Source:Training] (Cost:3)
FEATS:[Cost: 18pts]
Blind-Fight, Expertise, Iron Will, Move-by-Attack, Quick Draw, Power Attack, Takedown Attack, Rapid Strike, Rapid Takedown
Skills: [Cost 9 pts.]
Acrobatics +7[3]
Balance +7[3]
Medecine +7[3]
Possessions (worn): When he is in civil, he wear a last year style shirt and jeans with some good running shoes. He can carry his Shinai with him but it isn't an habit, generally leaving it at a safe place. At school, he have something more official for a student of medecine. When he knows he goes into some adventure, he generally wears his Son-kyo and his Shinai.
Possessions: Kendo uniforms (Son-kyo) and sword (Shinai), both normal and super-technologic, that he leaves in his drawer and put it on on rare occasion. Medical kit. Books, lot of books, mainly biology and medecine, but also some Japanese litterature and some other classic (Asimov, Tolkien, Dumas, Balzak, Hugo...).
Description: Smaller than the average amrican, he is in the average Japanese size. His hairs are blacks and shorts, and he has small eyes. He wears mainly some used clothing, as he must spend most of his money on his studies. The only jewelry he got his a good rolex, given by his father as a gift because he had been accepted in medecine, which was a great honor to his family.
Personality: He controls his emotions, and don't let himself be lead by them. He is very loyal and kind, and see violence as the last solution in a problem. He doesn't like to kill, and woulld prefer not to, relying on his sword to knock someone out of combat.
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