I think the excerpt was solid. I definately get the points of light feel from this place. The whole area was once a bustling settlement, and then the darkness came and swallowed it up. Now its a battered place looking to rebuild, but there's constant danger out there just waiting for a chance to hit them again.
And while the npc was close to pc rules, definitely some differences. For example, he does far more damage than an equivalent level rogue, as PC doesn't get level bonuses to damage.
And while the npc was close to pc rules, definitely some differences. For example, he does far more damage than an equivalent level rogue, as PC doesn't get level bonuses to damage.
Dagger +1 probably gets Strength bonus to damage.
Sly Flourish probably gets Dexterity bonus plus Charisma bonus to damage (compare the KotS rogue who has +7 to damage and has Dex 18 and Cha 16).