FFG Legendary Class contest submissions

[Khur]

While I noticed you've changed what the items did with my original write-up, I don't have a problem with that.

As for the Cloak of Resistance, I'm not sure what to do with it now.

I'm glad you liked the items. Kaob and Ch'Tal were the inspiration.

I changed only a little bit. I tweaked some here and there to make sure Kaob was well protected against the kinds of horrible things he is bound to face. The shield provides a holy aura so he didn't need the cloak.

BTW, thanks for the info on Thunderer.

One of favorite things with the OGL is that you can mix'n'match books to create all kinds of diverse and inventive things. I like trying to pull from as much as possible...but perhaps I go overboard.

Me too!

That is awesome! Does that mean that we might get some official sanction?

I think so. I hope so. We'll see.

 

[kingpaul]

update (again)

Khur,

I've included the items that you sent me, added the class at the front end, slightly revised S15, and pulled all Ch'Tal's descriptive text out of his stats' section (last 3 pages), and included it as part of the OGC. I wasn't sure how you wanted your additions cited in S15, so took my best guess.

 

[d20Dwarf]

I think so. I hope so. We'll see.

Any chance I could get an advance look as well?

 

[Khur]

Thanks Paul.

Any chance I could get an advance look as well?

Sure Wil! Your contest and encouragement are the impetus behind this work! Just tell me what you want to see.

 

[d20Dwarf]

Sure Wil! Your contest and encouragement are the impetus behind this work! Just tell me what you want to see.

Oh I won't be satisfied until I get the whole shebang.

 

[Khur]

Oh I won't be satisfied until I get the whole shebang.

Do you want to wait for the PDF version or just see the final prose in Word format?

 

[kingpaul]

Do you want to wait for the PDF version or just see the final prose in Word format?

Out of curiousity, how close, art aside, is the book to being done?

 

[d20Dwarf]

Hey Paul, thanks for the input on the OGL. I figured you'd know, since you have input on so many projects. Thanks for all your work, too. I hope you're happy with the outcome of the drawing by Jeremy. I'll post his revised sketches.

The concensus on the OGL seems goofy to me, despite prestigous and learned judgement, but I don't want to wait 3 months for Wizards legal to get back to me. Our OGL will have a meaty section 15, with chewy chunks!

Thanks again!

I just wanted to chime in here and say that Paul is correct. You must always cite the entire Section 15 of any book you reference, minus duplicate entries such as the SRD.

 

[Sheridan]

Beta version?

Is there a recently updated beta version available for download yet (word file/rtf/whatever)? Even if it's without artwork we can still proof our stuff again.
Thanks,
*Sheridan

 

[Khur]

The final prose is 3 NPC edits from done, unless I decide to add something extra. If I do, that shouldn't be relevant to the look-see you guys want. I'm thinking about editing the Neclord, even though the author disappeared. This is especially tempting given my new copy of Path of Faith.

As an aside, I don't think I'm going to post the text here again. Anyone who wants a copy, let me know. I will only send it to the team members here, Wil Upchurch, and persons from FFG. If you'd rather me just send you sections you've authored, I can do that too. Just tell me so.

As a favor, keep an eye out for errors in the work. I do my best, but I'm only one guy.

Everyone else has to wait for the PDF(s). (Sorry. )

Thanks all!