[sblock=WD]
Game Info-
both your additional languages aren't on the halfling list
Abilities - check
Combat -
Have your hp at 40 = [4d6(24)+8=32] +4 [feat] + 4 [fav class]
AC: shouldn't list mage armor (even though it does last 4 hours) and +1 [misc] should say +1 [dodge]
Instead of +1 [misc] should probably list as +1 [racial]
and list Will as:
Will: +5/+7* = +4 [base] + 0 [Wis] + 1 [racial] + 2 [vs. fear]*
CMD: is 14 but you forgot to list -1 [STR] -1 [size] +2 [BAB] (listing the CMB is a kool way to do it btw but harder to check)
Speed: 20'(Fly 60'/average) - you can fly very kool
under Spell Resistance list - Energey Resistance(electrical) 10
Weapon Stats- incomplete
Racial Traits- check
Class Features-
Spells
Cantrips
Bloodline: Elemental(Air)
-bonus class skill: Knowledge(planes)
-bloodline arcana
-bloodline powers (energy type= electrical, Fly(60'/average)
-elemental ray = 30' range tough attack, 1d6+2(electrical damage), 6/day
-elemental resistance = energy resistance(electrical) 10
Feel free to copy/paste the above
Feats-
add Prof. with all simple weapons (sorcerer)
Skills- points are correct, the rest is incomplete
Equipment- incomplete
Details- incomplete
Level up- incomplete
Will fill the rest in later.
Darn should have read that first.LOL
Here's something you can add to your sheet WD:
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Sorcerer Spells Known: Cantrips- 6, 1st- 3, 2nd- 1, + 1 bloodline spell
Cantrips: list
1st lvl: list + electrical hands
2nd lvl: list
Spells per day: DC = 10 + spell level + 3 [CHA]
1st lvl: 7
2nd lvl: 4 [/sblock]
Background Traits - haven't gone to check yet[/sblock]
[sblock=Mowgli]
Game Info-
Classes: Barbarian(favored)/Fighter
Level: 4 (2/2)
Abilities-
points add up but they don't match up, Con should be 10 points and Str should be 7 points
Combat-
AC Flatfooted: should be 18?/ you can't be caught flat-footed except through a feint
Will save: +0/+1* = +0 [base] + 0 [WIS] + 1 [save vs fear only*]
Weapon Stats- complete
Racial Traits- complete
Background Traits- complete and approved
Class Features- complete
Feats- please add:
Prof. with all simple and martial weapons
Prof. with all armors (heavy, medium, and light) and all shields
Skills- complete
Equipment-
GP spent checks out
Weight should be 92lbs.(still a light load), looks like mirthal shirt weighs to much should be 10lbs, and your special items have weigh listed for one not five, btw no food or water tough s.o.b. huh?
Details- complete
Level ups- hmmm.. I just wanted you to have your 5 lvl changes listed so we didn't have to wait to long for them during the game. You did them all(except lvl5) thanks made it easy to check your character.[/sblock]
[sblock=AF4]
Game info-
Due to adding +1 INT after 1st lvl you would have one less language to start for a total of 7 = 2 racial + 1 INT + 4 Skill
Abilities- complete
Combat-
AC vs. Traps: 19 = 10 + 4 [armor] + 4 [DEX] + 1 [trap sense]
Reflex saves: +8/+9* = +4 [base] + 4 [DEX] + 1 [save vs traps*]
Will saves: +3/+5* = +1 [Base] + 2 {WIS] + 2 [save vs. enchantments*]
Weapon Stats- complete
Racial Traits- complete
Background Traits- complete and approved
Class features- complete
Feats- complete
would like you to list Proficiencies here but having them in features I guess is ok too, long as they are somewhere
Skills- complete but...
I have you at 41 ranks again having a low starting INT means less to start, maybe you should change your Wis/Int points cost and at 4th say you raised the Wis (Ears grew wiser after a few adventures?) then you wouldn't have to change languages or skills.
Equipment-
potion: list (1d8+1) weighs 0.5lbs cost should be 50gp Do you have two??
waterskins total weight = 8 lbs
all weights were right even though you didn't list waterskins at 8lb you still added it.(even coin weights were correct NICE!) just need to:
a)change weight for two waterskins
b)decide if that is two potions then money is good but add 1lb to haversack (if one 0.5 lbs and you have 50 more gp)
c)list amount of hp recieved from potions
Details- complete and a background
Level Ups- complete till lvl 5 and that is pending so is good [/sblock]
[sblock=IW]
Saw you weren't quite ready so let me know when you are, thanks One thing i did see was you worship the god of honor and justice and are a dirty fighter something from before your cleric career started?
Saw your update will check tonight for you.

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