AbdulAlhazred
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Well, you can be Editor in Chief if you want!Organizing things IS one of my strong points, if I bother…

Well, you can be Editor in Chief if you want!Organizing things IS one of my strong points, if I bother…
Lol, sure. I have noticed a distinct lack of semicolons in your writing!Well, you can be Editor in Chief if you want!![]()
Can you get those in a spray can? lol.Lol, sure. I have noticed a distinct lack of semicolons in your writing!
I think folding together is great, but then somewhere a bullet list for character creation and level up.Can you get those in a spray can? lol.I was never that big on the whole semicolon thing. So, for me its all about the overall organization, which is not quite 'there' yet. I mean, I seem to go over the same topics more than once. There may be cases where that is a GOOD thing, but...
Should the description of a character and the rundown on how to build one and level it up just be folded together? Like "This is your hit points, they do X, you start out with Y, and every time you level up you do Z to them." Right now there's a section that describes hit points, and later on there's a section that describes how many you start with, and then further on there's a section about leveling up that tells you how many more you get every level...
great improvement!OK, that was a lot easier than I thought it would be. Check out the cromulent table of contents!Styling is still a tad rough, but its 95% of the way there, and I think the logic I need to make an index is also 95% there (forward references, it will also allow inline refs to later parts of the book. That should make things a good bit easier to manage.
Yeah, and now I have to do real work, sigh...great improvement!