Homebrew campaign setting: opinions?

[ToddSchumacher]

Well ok, I was doing the layout for d20 Magazine Rack's d20zine Worlds Special Edition (plug, plug) when I got to thinking about my campaign world.

See, a few years ago, while in college, I did an independant study for my gaphics minor. I made a small book about my campaign world. Got credit for it too. Doing this magazine with all those world proposals got me in the mood to update mine for 3rd edition. Well I've been doing this on and off since 3rd came out...its just doing the mag got me motivated to work on it again. I'd thought I'd share and ask opinions on it. What do you guys think, or not.

Now things to consider...I'm not a writer. I have to struggle to get the things down to page. I don;t have an editor. So there is likely all kinds of things wirters and editers will cringe at. I'm sure.

Also. Its a work in progress. Its not done. I'm not sure if it will ever be. I want to add prestige classes (Like "the Tunneler") and monsters (The Tree-Orc...or as my players like to call it: the Trorc) magic items and what-not.

Thank you for your time.

The link:
http://home.new.rr.com/scumachertodd4/Thorn.zip

 

[brun]

I just went through it, rapidly, and it looks nice.
Every world needs something special, that make it unique, that sets it appart. I don't know what place was given to the Evergrowing, but I really like the idea.

 

[Nightstorm]

Didn't have time to look at it, but I will! Just remember two things when creating ANY thing.
1. Form follows function
2.Less is more.