Ah, another acolyte of all press is good press... This post reads like a pick-up artist manifesto from the 2000s. The Shame and Plead.
This Kickstarter is all over the place. You have an EPIC Mini-adventure (a little oxymoronic), a video, music, screensaver battle maps, and a printable miniature .stl at the top of your pitch. These are just ribbons to what you are actually selling, which are physical resin models and a set of dice? You should have started with the product, not the freebies. The intro video is basic Lovecraft and does nothing to sell the art you are offering. You could have had quotes from stories and then showcased a model relevant to the quote. Also, the pledge levels are too flowery. Leave the quoted text to stand with the art. Minor nitpick, a 6" unpainted shoggoth is both $26 and $29. It reads sloppy. I look at your Kickstarter page and I have to work to figure out what is for sale. No one is going to put in the time to work out what is for sale.
The sculpts look good. We could quibble over your pricing, but they are not ridiculous. I think you have a good product that could prove lucrative, but you need to sell it in a clearer fashion. There are a lot of miniatures Kickstarters, and quite a few are cosmic horror. Put your product out in front and then pile on all the free stuff to use with these pieces.