Thanks Nifft. Your points are all well taken. I agree fully with your criticisms. I fully expected to loose this round since my writing and adventure were very underdeveloped; the last half of the adventure was done in about 15 minutes. The dying jungle, astral pirates, and even the pious pawn broker all needed further development. The writing was also very flat; there was more telling than showing since I was running out of time.
Shoe, I think your writing was stronger than mine, and I loved your death cult. I wouldn't have been surprised if you had won.
Now where is [MENTION=67]Rune[/MENTION]?
Oh wait.