humble minion
Legend
I'll do a proper recap later but ...
Urgh, I ran out of time and I'm sorry to submit something so rushed and half-baked. That definitely needed another few hours of work and an editing pass. Not happy with it at all, even though I think the core idea is good. Too much scene-setting, not enough action, and too many of the ingredients didn't get enough time front and centre. And worse still, I didn't even remember to LABEL Harsh Reality (the realisation on the part of the locals that the Company was going to let them rot on Gaharne forever). So I'm a big fat zero on that ingredient already. I think I can write this one off as a loss.
I HAVE to ask though - @Gradine especially. Was it INTENTIONAL that I was given Rampaging Gnomes as an ingredient, given I've had that exact same ingredient before in a previous Iron DM, that you in fact judged? IRON DM 2020 Tournament Thread
Urgh, I ran out of time and I'm sorry to submit something so rushed and half-baked. That definitely needed another few hours of work and an editing pass. Not happy with it at all, even though I think the core idea is good. Too much scene-setting, not enough action, and too many of the ingredients didn't get enough time front and centre. And worse still, I didn't even remember to LABEL Harsh Reality (the realisation on the part of the locals that the Company was going to let them rot on Gaharne forever). So I'm a big fat zero on that ingredient already. I think I can write this one off as a loss.
I HAVE to ask though - @Gradine especially. Was it INTENTIONAL that I was given Rampaging Gnomes as an ingredient, given I've had that exact same ingredient before in a previous Iron DM, that you in fact judged? IRON DM 2020 Tournament Thread
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