covaithe
Explorer
JNC said what I was thinking, but articulated it better than I would have.
The only other bit I would add is that the Echo of Marley ended up using some abilities in combat that weren't part of the stat block you presented to the judges. When it did, I went and chased down the original monster you based it on and the powers it used were clear analogues, so I didn't say anything. I think it all worked out well enough, but if you're going to use more custom monsters in the future -- and I hope you do -- please include the whole stat block in the proposal next time.
But, really, these are all minor quibbles. The bottom line is that you've run an interesting, action-packed, fast-paced adventure. In a PbP environment, that's a fantastic achievement, and you should be proud of the result. Well done!
The only other bit I would add is that the Echo of Marley ended up using some abilities in combat that weren't part of the stat block you presented to the judges. When it did, I went and chased down the original monster you based it on and the powers it used were clear analogues, so I didn't say anything. I think it all worked out well enough, but if you're going to use more custom monsters in the future -- and I hope you do -- please include the whole stat block in the proposal next time.

But, really, these are all minor quibbles. The bottom line is that you've run an interesting, action-packed, fast-paced adventure. In a PbP environment, that's a fantastic achievement, and you should be proud of the result. Well done!