Melsurique: tell me what you thing of...

[GralTok]

Hi this thread will be dedicaed (I hope) to the world I am creating Melsurique. I would like to get feedback on what I post.

Interesting Feedback:

Name change
Spelling(gotta have a lot of these )
Flaw
Don't do this!!!
Add
Remove
Change to this...
etc.

Thanks and I hope I'll be able to pick the interest of a few of you so that I thing I don't do this for nothing.

Stuff posted so far:
Deities (Those are the most spread deities, some region will use Deities and Demigods pantheon: Asgardian, Olympian, Pharaonic.)
Economy 101 (Currently only copied the FR trade, will add and remove as I see fit, need feedback on that also.)
Need old drawn and newly drawn character or place!

PS.: Please ask me if you want to use some of the stuff.

 

[GralTok]

Beliofor LN Greater Deity
God of Wizardry, Father of magic and Bylvia, Gaëllia, Xeltor
Knowledge, Law, Magic

Bervilrick CE Intermediate Deity
God of Storm, Father of Urth
Chaos, Destruction, Evil, Retribution, Storm, Weather

Bylvia NG Lesser Deity
Goddess of White Magic
Good, Healing, Knowledge, Magic

Carvylin CN Intermediate Deity
God of Travel, Father of the halfling
Chaos, Luck, Protection, Travel, Trickery

Denmarind N Intermediate Deity
God of Nature, Father of the human and of Furia, Hellia, Stonia, Welkia
Animal, Death, Fate, Wheater

Donvalfias CG Intermediate Deity
God of Forest, Father of the elves and of Sinfil, Vikliora
Animal, Chaos, Good, Plant, Renewal

Evyanna NB Intermediate Deity
Goddess of the Sun, Creator of light
Good, Healing, Sun, Time

Furia CN Lesser Deity
Goddess of Fire
Chaos, Fire, Trickery

Gaëllia NE Lesser Deity
Goddess of Black Magic
Evil, Knowledge, Magic, Suffering

Hellia CN Lesser Deity
Goddess of Air
Air, Chaos, Trickery

Kelmosh NE Intermediate Deity
God of Undeath, Father of necromantic magic and of Morgul, Telmavor
Evil, Moon, Suffering, Undeath

Kilvilio LG Greater Deity
God of Justice, Father of the world and of dwarves and of Denmarind, Donvalfias, Evyanna
Good, Law, Retribution, Strenght, War

Morgul NE Lesser Deity
God of Murder
Death, Evil, Suffering

Quarvor LE Greater Deity
God of Tyranny, Father of the world and of giants and of Bervilrick, Carvylin, Kelmosh
Evil, Law, Strenght, Tyranny, War

Stonia CN Lesser Deity
Goddess of Earth
Chaos, Earth, Trickery

Telmavor LN Lesser Daity
God of Death
Death, Fate, Law, Time

Urth CE Lesser Deity
God of Destruction, Father of the orcs, goblinoids kind
Chaos, Destruction, Evil, Strenght

Welkia CN Lesser Deity
Goddess of Water
Chaos, Trickery, Water

Xeltor N Lesser Deity
God of Red Magic
Knowledge, Magic, Time

 

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Ale
AmbergrisArmor
Artwork
Beef
Books
Caravan Supplies
Cheese
Cloth
Clothing
Coal
Copper
Coffee
Fruit
Furs
Gems
Glass
Gold
Grains
Herb
Horses
Jewelry
Leather Goods
Livestock
Incense
Iron
Ivory
Magic Item
Olive
Olive Oil
Pearls
Perfume
Pipeweed
Pork
Pottery
Rope
Rugs
Salt
Sea Food
Ship Supplies
Ships
Silk
Silver
Slaves
Spice
Stone
Sugar
Tea
Timber
Trade Goods
Vegetables
Whale Oil
Weapons
Wine
Wool