greywulf said:
Very good yet again, but a bit wordy. I reckon you could get this down to just a single page with some editing.
That hasn't been a problem from my POV.

I use one-inch margins and 9-point Verdana font for the basic documents because as I finish these things I'm putting 'em into a heavy clear vinyl folder thingy (used to be a menu from a local restaurant that shut down). I've got two of 'em...one that I'm putting 'player information' in, and one for 'GM information.' I have eight and six pages (respectively) to play with. As a result, my 'Basic Rules' document has been revised a bit, and is actually 2 1/2 pages long--and I still haven't finished working on my 'Turn Undead' situation (I've added CHA back in as of yesterday, and put in short racial descriptions and such, as well as adding a chart for ability bonuses instead of the one line in your original document. I've never posted any of my revised document, because it's just my 'house rules' version, and I wanted all my posts to be based on your original document.), and am also awaiting your future revisions. In the case of the GM Guide page, some of the wordiness comes because I wanted all the poisons listed from the monsters that had 'poison' attacks listed in the Monster List, and wanted at least three of every EL for traps.
greywulf said:
I'll upload the .rtf of the core rules later today with the changes for spell costs if you want to fiddle with the layout a little
I'll see what I can do. I'm actually enjoying this quite a lot.

In case I've never made it clear, I
really like your take on the system. It has the simplicity...and non-miniature-dependent nature...I look for in a game.
greywulf said:
We could lose the Hazards section from the Player's section (as you've got it covered in here), and replace it with.........what?
Random encounter chart? Random dungeon generator?
Any more ideas?
Encounter chart and dungeon generator seem like something that should go on a GM page instead of in the basic rules.
If I do the one-inch margin thing, like I have with all my other pdfs (just to make 'em all look alike
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), you might not need to add anything. Shortening the document by that one paragraph, it'd probably fit nicely into that front-and-back page using the layout I've been using for the other pdfs.
Speaking of 'other pdfs,' I've done another one, but I'm not really cool with posting it. It's a mini 'campaign setting' for Microlite20. (It's actually the one my group and I use to playtest new D&D material before adding it in to our regular Greyhawk game.) Trouble is, I use a map that I ganked off the web somewhere. It's rather heavily modified, but the base artwork isn't mine, so I don't want to publicly post the thing. If anyone is interested in it, e-mail me at rev_sims "at" yahoo "dot" com, and I'll send it to you privately.
It's nothing too special: a small map of a coastal barony with notes on geography, settlements, known dungeon locales, religions, and such. Again, if anyone's interested, e-mail me.
Well, that's it for now...
Regards,
Darrell